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Posted: 11 years ago
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Showers!



Parking my car on the roadside of the street

I pull down the tinted glass

"Ah just where I need to look" I squint

Hurriedly to the umpteenth florist I pass

My eyes rummage the flowery array

"I love flowers she had said"

Every girl does but funny,

Exactly which ones no idea I had!

I stand there simply staring

Much to the owners dismay..perhaps a little help I should ask

From him-I scratch my head

"Choosing Flowers"...even business had been an easier task!

The most eligible proud bachelor,

Billionaire tycoon Mr. Shlok Agnihotri, twenty-seven-

Who wouldn't be shocked,

For a simple sweet commoner He had fallen!

WE had met on a cool summer night

My car had broken down...darkness prevailing every corner

Suddenly I say a gleaming light..

Oh the sidelight,

Pulling over her Yamaha Ray

She walked to me...

Helping a stranger on a deserted road this way!

Her naivety I see.

Unclasping her helmet makes her hair fly free

"Do you need any help?" she asks..

Mesmerised!! I try to pull the unaffected-mask".

She inches closer, looking into my eyes

"Are you...you The Mr. Shlok Agnihotri?!!"

Her shock betrayed by her voice

Pre-monsoon clouds have filled the skies already,

As nodding a "yes" I watch her smiling gleefully..

"Oh how I love her smile!" I realize,

So this is what they call love at first sight!!

Showers have started pouring...My eyes glued to her,

All the while.

She welcomes unexpected the change in weather..

Spreading her hands out

"We don't want to fall sick, do we?", I shout

Holding her arm delicately towards the car we hurry!

I sense her nervous, As we sit inside the car

The drenched dress clings to her frame...I can read her expressions from afar

"Bappa, why did it have to rain ,only today??

"here wrap my coat" assuringly I say,

Trying to make her comfortable...

I notice now she is at ease giving me a grateful smile,

The breeze has changed from awkward to amicable..

I hope to meet her, I will again!

I think as we part ways after the torrential rain

I try not to think about her dove-eyed beautiful form,

But in vain...

The "tension" in the car, still gyrating my insides

To the bedroom I rush, yet taking steady long strides

After that unforgettable encounter I start taking half-days

Which raise many eyes ands brows at work,

"They shouldn't bother about my ways...I am the boss"

I comfort myself!

like a love-lorn-teen I follow her secretly,

on the busy Monday morning streets...bumping into people hastily..

My sub-conscious rebukes me,

"what a stalker you are!" I defend

"Everything is fair in love and war!!"

Reaching close, satisfied she doesn't suspect me

I pretend to meet her accidently...

She happily Hi's at me..and I,

Successfully strike a conversation asking her out for coffee.

Then on, we meet up almost daily,

I, pretending to be innocent while she friendly..

But I know she has starting liking me...

She loves me for not my reputation but the person she sees!

That summer I take her out on a date

The sky covered with veils of darkness so starry,

We have come a long way...Our 1 year anniversary

Of togetherness to celebrate..

As we dine and dance,

she tells me her parents are looking for a groom

...

I have to take this chance else she will cease to be mine soon...

I realize hence I haven't yet proposed to her officially!

So, here I am today, passing through the frontyard of her house,

Where the beautiful gardens lay.
He murmurs "My Astha loves gardening" ,

Interrupting the lines he has been rehearsing.

As I hold the diamond stud band,

In my right and a bouquet in the left

I visualize her her soft hands, slipping in her finger

The ornament which will bind her to me forever!

I knock the door, to find her smiling, as I bend to my knees

Her parents watching expectantly from behind her.

"Astha ,You are the only love of my life

DWill you do me the favor an concede to be my wife?!

"I know I have taken long to propose this,

I am reeealy sorry, say yes plz!!"

She keeps her hand into mine...and we are engaged to be married,

As her parents bless us, and mine arrive shortly later

We celebrate this day together

As mother earth's thirst is quenched by the pre-monsoon showers!!!



i was mad after the epi so wrote this😃 I wanted to write more in detail but i got bored then

So tell me hows it pealeeez?😛


Waiting for the comments, thanx for having a look😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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your poem rocks its awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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An amazing attempt aisha 👏 Didn't know u cud write poems so well...and here u have written a whole love story in the form of poem...awesome yaar 👍🏼 again me impressed 😉😃
Edited by Sam_15 - 11 years ago
oldaf thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what this woman stated doing? hell superb man!

adha padh li n res for baki adha <3
TomNJerry... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome yaar aishaa...loved it😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it
u wrote a whole story in the form of poem
totally amazing 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMGG! AISHAAA!!!!

The poem was just wowww👏 I loved it! Written soo beautifully❤️ I loved how you formed a poem out of their short but cute love story, very clever😎 i wonder who you got the cleverness from?!!😈 is this your first try at poems?

I'm just speechless of what to say!⭐️ It was soo cute reading about Shlok falling in love with Astha at first sight and how the story builded up to the point he proposed to her. Adorable

How many more hidden talents do we not know about????Goshhh😲😲😈 Do right more, would love to read more of your poems👍🏼

How can I forget?!! one line that I couldn't help but laugh at: "What a stalker you are!"Hahahaha🤣😆😆
Edited by ...Ayesha... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

<font size="2">OMGG! AISHAAA!!!!</font>


<font size="2">The poem was just wowww👏I loved it! Written soo beautifully❤️I loved how you formed a poem out of their short but cute love story, very clever😎i wonder who you got the cleverness from?!!😈 is this your first try at poems?</font>

<font size="2">I'm just speechless of what to say!⭐️It was soo cute reading about Shlok falling in love with Astha at first sight and how the story builded up to the point he proposed to her. Adorable</font>

<font size="2">How many more hidden talents do we not know about????Goshhh😲😲😈 Do right more, would love to read more of your poems👍🏼</font>

<font size="2">How can I forget?!! one line that I couldn't help but laugh at: "What a stalker you are!"Hahahaha🤣😆</font>😆


i wrote poems in school nt love story ones😛
the stalkr line ws dedicatd to u sweety😳 glad u noticed🤗 thanx a lottt😊🤗 cngrats u hv surpasd Sam's length of cment😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sam_15

An amazing attempt aisha 👏Didn't know u cud write poems so well...and here u have written a whole love story in the form of poem...awesome yaar 👍🏼 again me impressed😉😃

thanx a lot Sam🤗 I aim to please😃 I hd ths story as os in my mind😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARIANA_

what this woman stated doing? hell superb man!

adha padh li n res for baki adha <3

omg poems bhi adha padhke res?😛 unres soon!😳 n thanku pinkoo🤗

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