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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: siumi
swati ji tusi kithe ho?????????? yar yahi hu..kahi nai gayi mein...
plz update karo nah?!!! yar 4 next update u hv to wait..bcz nwadys..i m gving sum xams...actuali my 12th result is cuming on friday on 25th..n aftr dat 4 1 week i m busy 4 taking admision n all...i will try my level best to write..bt i cnt promise nything nw...at ds tym i m nt able to write anything..i m tenced lyk anythng....hope i gt gud marks..n gt admission in gud colg...

update asap 😃 😃 😃

minu 😊

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#332

ooh then it's ok, plz
best of luck swati 👍🏼

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#333

Okies frends here I m again…wd 2 parts…thnxs to all ur wishes…all my tensions r ovr nw..i m d 1 who is free 4m all tensions…soon..compare to all my other frends…I gt too gud news on 25th may..1 I secured 75% in my board xams..n 2nd I gt admission in my fav colg..n gt which stream I desired..ok..bhut bakwas ho gayi..here d next part is dedicate to priya(cute_priya)..n preet(coogurl_2005)

Part 20
At 5 almost whole staff left…n as bani ws in jai's cabin n working on her desk..ws unkown to tym..n ws unknwn dat she n jai ws alone in d office..n whn she luk up it ws six already..n jai called her 4 d details..n whn she whn she sw her watch she realize dat staff must hv left..bcz at 5 it ws dere tym to leave office…n she ws alone wd jai in office..
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Bani: sir here is d file…
Jai(wid out luking up): hmm
Bani: sir may I leave nw..
Jai: (nw luking up n gving her hs smile)atleast gv me a presentation on wat u hv design
Bani ( wd an angry exsspresion): ji sir..
N she gv her presentation…aftr finishing she ws luking 4 an repli…4m her boss…
Jai: gr8 work miss dixit..i m impressed( sare zindagi tha..bas samjhne mien tym lag gaya..)
Bani: thanx u sir…
Jai: cn u plz stop calling me sir???
Bani:sry sir?? U r my boss…wat else I would cal u other dn sir
Jai: u cn call me by my name
Bani: sry sir..bt I would prefer sir onli..
Jai(cuming closer to bani) : bani..pl dontdo ds to me…I said sry na…plz forgive me…I really luvs u..
Bani(turning her back 2wards hm n ignoring hs puppy face): sir..may I tuk ur leave..
Jai: bani y r u ds much stubborn
Bani: (nw angry wd hm)..me n stub born sir..sry to say sir..bt d 1 bcz of whom dat friendship ws finish ws bcz of ur stubbornness…nt mine..
Jai: bani I said sry 4 dat na…plz don't do ds to me…
Bani: sry sir nw I hv moved on in lyf..n I don't want my past to effect my future..or my present…
Jai: ( nw irritated) bani y r u lieing to urself or me…
Bani: sir I think I m done wd my duty..so nw I would take ur leave…
Jai: bani I think I m nt finish nw..
Bani: sir my office timings r ovr..n ds is nt an official talk n I m nt interested in it ..n …I m getting late I hv to call my parents n inform abt my well being
Jai: okay..pack ur things..n wait outside 4 me near by my car..i will drop u
Bani:thnxu sir..bt I m capable of going home myself..
Jai: ds is my order…n nw stop being childish…
Bani: bt sir…
Jai: nw u r wasting ur tym urself…
Bani: wat???
Jai: nothing…go n do wat I hv askd u to do
Bani: (irritated + angry) yes sir..
N left d cabin..leaving a angry jai..
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Outside near d car…
Jai: chalo..betoo…
Bani sit at d back side of d car..jai opend d back seat door..n
Jai: I m nt driver miss dixit..move to front..
Bani(irritated nw) move to front side..
Jai: closing d doors…start d car..n move 2wards…her apartment..
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Reaching at her apartment..he parked hs car…in d parking area..
Bani: thnxs 4 d lift sir…
Jai(moving out 4m d car) no probs…( moving 2wards her apartment)
Bani: whr r u going sir???
Jai: in ur apartment..
Bani: yyy…
Jai: 4 a cup of coffee my dear…wont u ask me 4 a cup of coffee…
Bani(knws hm vry well..n don't wana create ny scene dere just move 2wards her apartment…followed by jai)
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In banis apartment…
Jai: gr8..i m planning to move her onl
Bani(shocked)wat???
Jai: kya I m just planning to move here..wd my luvd 1
Bani:oh..dat means I hv to shift 4m here also…bcz u n roshni..wants to shift here..n I don't hv probs wd dat..
Jai(irritated nw): oh yeah..u don't knw..na me n roshni r marrying next month…
Bani(shocked n abt to cry..just hide her tears): gr8 news sir..all d best in ur lyf…wait I will change n make coffee 4 u sir..
Jai: (realized dat he hd hurt her again 4m her tone he cn judge..she vl cry nytym..n he ws feeling sry): bani just listen to me..(n ws abt to pull her 4m wrist..bt b4r dat.bani moved 2wards her room..n shut d door)
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In banis room..bani ws crying lyk a baby..n she ws too angry wd herself..y she loose herself infront of.hm always..n move 4 a bath…after taking a cold shower..she ws back into her night suit…n wdout luking towards jai who ws sitting in d hall…move 2wards kitchen..to make coffee 4 hm..jai who notice dat she is still angry wd hm..move 2wards kitchen also…
Jai: bani just listen to me
Bani: sir plz make urself comfortable in hall..i will just brig ur coffee…
Jai: bani..plz…
Bani: sir I hv to make an call…plz make ur self comfortable…n b4r she cn make a call..her cell ranged n she thnkd to her stars..n move 4 her cell…n jai move back to hall..bt all ready to gt bani again..he will nt leave 2day wdout clarifying everything…
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Bani: ji uncle
Mr Bhatia: whr were u bacha..i ws trying ur no 4m 1 hour..n it ws cuming out of range..
Bani: calm down uncle..i ws in d office..n nw I m at my apartment…
Mr Bhatia: okay beta call ur dad..he called me n I hv informed hm abt ur plans..n he ws angry wd me..
Bani: don't worry uncle…I will handle hm…u takecare..
Mr Bhatia: okay bacha..takecare..n my n ur aunt blessings r wd u…
Bani: ji uncle…
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Bani calling hs dad…
Mr dixit: hello..bani r u alright..
Bani: dad relax..i m 5n..n don't worry abt me…
Mr dixit: bacha y u r living alone…its nt ssafe..
Bani: dad its near by my office..n I m 5n..so don't wory dad…
Jai: bani is d coffee ready…( cuming back to kitchen)
Mr dixit: bani who is ds wd u(all worries)
Bani:dad its my boss..mr jai walia
Mr walia: wat he is doing at ur place ds late..
Bani: dad its jai..u knw hm vry well..y r u taking dat much of tension
Mr walia: is dat jai..ur best frend beta…
Bani: ( abt to repli whn jai snatch phn 4m hand)
Jai: namaste uncle..ji…
Mr walia: namaste beta….u r banis best frend na…
Jai: ji uncle…aap to mujhe bhul hi gaye..
Mr dixit: beta..mein tumhe kaha bhula…tum he gayab ho gaye the…
Jai: uncle ab jab bhi India aaunga apke pass sabse phele aaunga
Mr dixit: ana beta…n I m glad dat bani is wd u..atleast nw I m assured dat she is safe
Jai: arey uncle dnt take tension abt her..u just takecare
Mr dixit: thnxu beta..chalo mein phn rakta hun…god bless u
Jai: ji uncle..bye tc…
Disconnectd d phn…
Bani: y u snatched my phn.. n y u disconectd it
Jai: ignoring her question: whr is my coffee
Bani: (moving 2wards hall wd d coffee..n sum snacks follwd by jai)
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In hall
Jai: nice coffee..
Bani: thnxs sir..n ws abt to turn on d tv..so dat she is nt to force to chat wd hm..
Jai moving next tobani(closed to her) snatched d remote..n turned it off…bani just stood upn ws abt to move 2wards her bedroom..bcz don't wanaface hm nw…bt jai pull her 2wards hm..n ws hugging her 4m back..bani's wyes wereclosed..she ws nw tired 4m all ds n ws lost in hs touch…
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Okay…will post d next part..2day itself….hope u lykd d part…I knw it ws fr se maha boring part…bt still gv ur comments…gud or bad..evrthing is welcomed…bt plz repli…

Edited by swati_bhatia - 18 years ago

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Zeinub

@afg-forever

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#334

me first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay first of all, that was not boring, i loved it!!!!!!!!

u do such a great job in ur ff, keep up da good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

btw, the JB scene was good, continue sooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by afg4ever - 18 years ago

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#335

no i lost 1st place😭

awesome update yaar. jai bhi nah??!?!?😆

kya jaldi update karna!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plz plz continue asap😊

Edited by siumi - 18 years ago

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Taz234

@Taz234

Dazzler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#336

Swatiiiiiiiiiii...doosra part kidhar hai????? 😡 😡 😆 U stopped when things were getting interesting...kahaan hai mera belan!!!! 😆

God i loved this update!!!! 👏 👏 👏 Jai truely was bugging her all day...first in the office, wouldn't let Bani go home, then he decided to drop her off. Phir inviting himself to Bani's apartment for a coffe..."Maan na maan, mein tera mehmaan!" 😆 😆 😆 Lage raho 😉 😉 ...he's trying to be nice but then he occasionally muh se kuch nikal jaata hai, like marrying Roshni!!! Urrrghhhh 🤢 ...don't bring her up now Jai!! Bani doesn't want to hear her name i'm sure of it!

Jai talking to Mr. Dixit was good...baap ke saath friendly ban jaa!!! 😉 Aage chal ke kaam aayega!!! 😆 Then he held Bani!!! 😲 😲 And u stopped there.... 😡 😡 😡 bahut phatke parenge tumhe Swati if u don't update soon!!! 😆

Fab part dear...loving it!!! 👍🏼

I'm waiting....

Taz!!!

PS. Congrats on getting good percentage in ur exams and admission into ur fave college... 😃

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Yusra (or you can call me Hope as a nickname)

@LightingHope

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#337

swati ist of all cngratulation on your succes,and your update was not boring it is interesting,and i,m waiting for the next part,welldone

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#338

Sry taz di..didnt updated earlierbcz of my stupid net supplier..n nw also net is vry slow.....bt yr abhi tak din khatam nai hua hai..its still 11:00pm here….here it goes…n all ur belans n jhootas r welcomed…warning: I m vry bad in writing romantic parts..i m a dumbo..in all dese..bt will try to write…

Part 21 A

bt jai pull her 2wards hm..n ws hugging her 4m back..bani's eyes wereclosed..she ws nw tired 4m all ds n ws lost in hs touch…

jai:bani plz listn to me…

bani(lost in thoughts): hmm

jai(snuggleing wd bani's neck): bani I m really sry 4 being rude to u..on dat day…bt I really don't meant to be rude to u…

bani: hmm(ws njoying hs touch)

jai: bani who roshni(b4r jai could continue reality hit to bani)(ok all jhottas n belans welcomed..pata hai mujhe bas abhi taz di aa rahe hai mujhe marne)

bani: leave me mr walia…I mean sir

jai(nt ready to leave her): bani just listen to me…

bani: sir its getting late u must b moving nw…

jai: bani stop calling me sir..

bani: shrugging hm off…moving 2wards kitchen..n gulping sum water…jai cuming behind her..n again try to catch her ..bt….bani just ask hm to leave nw…jai..who ws nw too irritated wd bani..just…pull bani 2wards hm wid a gr8 pull…dat she just crush wd hs strong n warm chest hugging her tightly
bani:trying to free her 4m hs grip: jai just leave….

Jai: is dat to difficult to say my name luv(honey)( taz I hope u cn understand..hw much I hate ds to spell..honey..bt I m writng..)

Bani: trying to free herself 4m hs grip..bt jai ws nt atall interestd in leaving her..he ws njoying ds…

Jai: bani nw just shut up n listen to me…

Bani: sir…is dat way u treat ur employee…

Jai: oh u cnt understand me…nw ds is a high tym..n he just pull her into a long..passionate kiss…
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Ok sry 4 stoping ds at dspoint..bt hv to go nw…its too late(its 11:45)…mujhe pata hai..its nt dat much late..4..me…bt hv to sleep nw..in morning hv to go on a walk wd my jai..else he wil kill me…all chapels..n jhootas..n belan also..r welcum… will try to update soon….plz leave ur comments….plz..plz…I beg u…plz…yr..i need thm vry badli….

Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago