tumdilmeinrehteho!prt27-pg61

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi! Frends…this a story…which is a true story mostly…bt I will try to write acc to u… so plz help me in writing ths story…I will b waiting 4 ur responses….

Characters description…..

Jai walia:- a care free boy who is in 11th standard….gud in studies…& is very frendli wid others bt if hedont like sumone he dnt spare tht person…

Bani dixit: a simple living gals… who is unable to understand her feeling …sum times he hate her relatives (bt luv her mom dad) bt is very caring 4 her cousions…(same in 11th as jai)(jai & bani r nt frends thy r stranger)

Roshni: jai's gf & frend of bani…(same in 11 th as jai)

Aditya: jai's best frend.. (same in 11 th as jai)

Tarun: common frend of jai & bani…(same in 11 th as jai)(bani is in d same skool in which tarun is)

Rano: clse frend of roshni & frend of bani

All of thm studies in a coaching centre & 4m there story begins

Part 1:

Jai ws near to d teacher & ws a famous guy in coaching centre… tarun ws his frend & aditya ws his best frend…. Whn he ws in 10th he starts liking roshni so in 11th he propsed her…thy become closer & closer…. Bt jai ws use to study in different batch thn in which roshniused to… after few months a simle looking gal joined tht coaching centre she ws also intelligent… btw s very quite nt used to talk wid anyone specially wid boys… bt she become closer to d teacher… she also starts liking d teacher… she ws use to admire her teacher 4 her knowledge… one day in class teacher ws nt there so jai started a conservation wid bani by asking her adoubt related to their sub…firstly… she felt uncomfortable as she ws nt use to chat wid boys …bt controlling herself she solves his doubt & concentrate on her studies …bt after few days she felt relaxed wid every one & started talking casualli wid everyone…bt she ws ignoring jai…& dnt knw y …bt she started…at tht moment she don't knw tht jai hs gf…. After one or 2 months she met roshni…firstlli she don't like her…bt she maintain a casual frendship…… after few days her xams o 11th started so she left d tution centre & started studying in her home…

So frends hw is ths…do u like ths….

Plz repli ur views….

part 1- pg 1

part 2-pg 1

part 3 -pg 3

part 4 -pg 4

part 5 -pg 5

part 6 -pg 6

note on pg 7

part 7 - pg 8

part 8 - pg 11

part 9 - pg 13

note on pg 14

part10 - pg 14

part 11 - pg 17

part 12 - pg 20

part13- pg 23

note on pg 25

part14 on pg 27

part 15 0n pg 28

part 16 0n pg32

part 17 on pg 35

part 18 on pg 39

part 19 on pg 43

part 20on pg 45

part 21A on pg 46

part 21Bpg 48

part 22 on pg 51

part23 on pg 53

part24 on pg 55

promo pg 56

prt25-pg57

part26-pg59

part 27-pg 61

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part :2
Whn thy were in 12th
Jai & bani were in same group & use to study in a group..nt never chated much… & bt bani starts liking hm…as she like hs nature…so she startedignoring him 4 ingnoring thse feelings…bt whn she met rano ..she liked her..so she become frend of rano..through rano she become closer to roshni…. Whn she use to talk to roshni abt jai…she don't like d way she treats him…bt kept quite…jai wsuse to notice bani…bt never talked much wid her…. Bt oneday bani,jai,aditya,rano,tarun,roshni…were sitting in a room & were doing self studies… suddenly jai..askbani tojoin tuitions 4 english classes as it will help her…firstly she ws shocked d way he asked her…through eyes & mumbling words in her ears….bt she dumbly responded him no….he showed a very sad exspression….on tht dayto she left d class room…bt after few days her partents force her to join those English classes… so she joined..& after joining tht class…she became closer to jai as he ws use to sit next to her…4 roshni & discuss thngs wid bani abt roshni..(actuali bani ws nt feeling comfortable bt she nevr showed hm tht)…bt after sumtime they become best pals & he use to tell everything of his life to bani….


So frends hw is ths…do u like ths….
Plz repli ur views….
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow 👏 ...great start swati 😳 😳 ...plzzz cont soon 😳 😳 ....would luv to read ur ff 😉 .......

luv
tinku
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part.
like it.
Jai and Bani become good friends....liked it.
it is interesting.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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looks real.good start and a good story .well continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great concept!
You should really update soon.

Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good start pls cont soon with long part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hot girl

hi gr8 start cont soon 👏 😛

thnxs

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: TINK

wow 👏 ...great start swati 😳 😳 ...plzzz cont soon 😳 😳 ....would luv to read ur ff 😉 .......

luv
tinku

thnxs tinku...i will try to update as soon as possible

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
like it.
Jai and Bani become good friends....liked it.
it is interesting.
plz cont. soon.

thnxs...& i will try to countinue...as i dnt kn wt to write nxt...

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