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Posted: 11 years ago

another beautiful update by you..
it was so good..
please do update soon
and best of luck for your exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome

Ahmazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Loved garden, activity and Singing scene

Is Rey some1 whom kria isn't remembering or probably use to love her cocnerts when she us to do dem back in India?

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
any chance of an update aryuu??😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome concept aruu
so amazing
i loved the way story is progressing
loved it to core
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!! Its grt!!!
Kriya d rockstar!!! Dat too at such an early age!!!!
Bt her baba's death got her into a shell!!
Bt nw no more fear... Cz reyansh is here!!! 😉 😆
Over ho gaya nai?!! 😛 😃
Bt still reyansh is grt!!!
2nd day in class aur kriyansh bhi bana diya!!!
Ladka bada fast hai 😉 😆
N uski cousin!!! Gippi!!! Sweet n cute name hai!!!
Lolzz!! Vo dono ne gajar ka halwa kha liya!!!
Rey uske ghar me ghus gaya!!! 😲
Aur vo bhi direct bedroom me!!!! 😲 👏
Aur jab gippi ne pu6a k bf hai ki nahi to bolta hai abhi nahi hoon bt jaldi hi ban jaunga!!!
Kitna sure hai ki kriyansh official hoga hi!!!!
Laga reh beta!!
Its just lovely!!! Update soon!! N pm me plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey! Thnx!!
It actually slipped out!!!
N it was awesome!!
Rey is d mastermind behind d planning!! Gud 1!
He sings n plays guitar too!! Ye jodi to hit hai!!
Thnx for letting me knw bout it!
N its grt!! Truly!!
N rey is a prankster!! Usko coat dena tha par apne style mein!!
Lolzzz!!! He tied it around his waist!!
Kriya's expression must b too hilarious!!
Its grt!! Update soon! Plz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
the chapter was great... omg rey trick worked and after a lot of bush around she agreed
to go to trip... and their activity was and appreciate by it and then the camp was
amazing... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
I [her outfit] came out of the tent to enjoy the morning breeze near the lake. The sun was hiding a bit behind the clouds making the temperature cold. I walked through the faint sunlight to the side of the lake with some flour balls to feed the various species of fish inside the water. Someone was already sitting near the lake in track suit and who else it could be, "Good morning Kria" he said.

"Good morning Reyaansh" I stood behind him.

Few seconds later I took the flour balls from the packet in my hand. Light wind blew with a little cold making giving me goose bumps. I opened my fist which had moist flour balls covered with dry flour. Before my hand could feed the fish the dry flour fell on Reyaansh's hair due to the blowing wind who was still sitting down.

"What the... Kria" he said.

"I'm sorry" I replied sheepishly. His head had turned white due to flour as of an old uncle. He moved his head vigorously to get rid of the flour. "Wait, I'll help."

I brushed off the dry flour in my hand and sat down to wipe off the flour from his head. "Do I look like a fish Kria whom you are feeding flour?" he said making a pout. "No... no you look so handsome without even having a bath... hehehe" I tried to butter him. His face turned grumpy, "What you mean?"

"I mean... I mean... I mean" I searched for words but his expressions remained the same. "Arey tum bina nahaye baithe ho in your track suit and then also killer looks. I meant that way, now go and have a bath. I've removed the flour from your hair" somehow situation was handled and He left to have a bath. I enjoyed there feeding the fish in calm atmosphere for some hours. It was in afternoon I walked back to the tents where everyone was having fun playing some game. "Kria, ah finally you are here? We were playing word guessing game dum... Dumshaaa" Emma stammered on the last word.

"Dumsharaz as in dumb charades" Joanna completed Emma's words. "This must be suggested by Rey?" I asked to which they both nodded. Gawd this Rey! He's turning Chicago into India firstly Punjabi and Hindi songs with Bhangra in bus now this Dumsharaz, I mean dumb charades.

"Guys join back your teams... Kria you're in our team." Joanna said. I felt someone's hands on my shoulder holding them, "No, she's in my team" Rey said. "No... she's with us." Both the girls defended.

"No... She's in my team" he said.

"No... with us"

This was a red signal to the trouble and beginning of tug of war. Emma and Joanna held my each hand pulling me towards them and how can I forget about Rey? He held me around my waist from behind pulling me towards him. They treated me like a soft toy that was strenuously pulled to each side. "Girls leave her... she'll get hurt" he said.

"Guys stop it... I don't wanna play" I screamed.

They were aware that I was in my angry mode now, "Sorry... Sorry..." Three of them chanted especially Rey who rubbed my arms which had turned red. "I'm sorry... plz come" he made the puppy dog face. I gave a stern look to him, "Plz" he said.

"Err fine" I joined hands with his team.

It was going delightfully well. The movie which was given to other team for enacting was tough, "Interview with a vampire" Jack was trying best to make his team members understand but his actions were hilarious, I laughed hard on him. Next was our teams turn, "I'll go" Rey said. Joanna spoke the film in his ear with a smirk and Rey too looked a bit tensed with the movie.

It was a three words movie as he explained and next what he was doing none of us understood. We said some names trying to guess but none was correct. "Rey... what are doing?" he did some pouting actions which again went above our heads.

"Rey... monkey dance baad main karna enact the movie." I said.

In annoyance he walked to me and kneeled down taking my hand then he kissed on the back of my hand. I went numb for few seconds with a slight blush on my face. "Kiss and Tell" Gina from our team said.

"Finally someone guessed the right name" Rey said being relieved from the stress.

"Hey tumhe kya hua?" he said looking at me, "Tumhe kiss karne ke liye mera hi haath mila tha?" I replied. "Oh madam, you were loudest one to snob, cribbing What are you doing Rey?' that's why I chose your hand otherwise I won't ever kiss your skeletal hands." He showed his tongue.

"Haw! Indirectly you mean I'm a skeleton?" I tried reconfirming his words.

"Oops sorry... I said it wrong even skeletons would be healthier than you. I wonder if your cheeks and lips also would be filled with bones rather than some fat." He said. I immediately pressed my lips together and tapped my cheeks with my hands to know whether his words were correct or not. His laughter pierced my ear drums, "You jerk" I hit him on his shoulder.

They day was almost over with sun settling down and we had to leave for our house. Our baggage's we loaded in the bus. I took my hand bag along and climbed the bus, Emma and Joanna sat together so I took a seat in-front of them. "Yeh aapke handbag ji ka yahin baithne ka plan hai or we can share the seat?"

"Oh sorry" I removed my handbag from the seat and kept it on my laps. He settled beside me, after a crazy day everyone was in lack of energy even the monkey Reyaansh with ever ready battery was also sleeping.

Earlier I was scared to be a part of but it was memorable. I laughed heartily after so long, the time spent together that I was taking would be in my cherished memories and it was all because of my irritating partner aka monkey Reyaansh. I opened the windows of the bus to get some fresh air. His face rested upon my shoulder in his deep sleep, he gently rubbed his nose on my skin feeling the cold. In an instant I shut the window.

He looked like a kid, I gently caressed his cheek. "Thank you"


So here ends my update

Sorry for not updating for so long.

and for short one too... but this would be regularly updated



Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res..
i was so right..😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres
that was simply nice!!!
unka pyaar their care for eachother is perfect!!!
the flour scene heheheheee
ad then the damsharaz nice!!!
i love rey for changing chicago into india!!
and the way he enacted the movie!! nice!!!
awesome!!!
very well written!!!
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago

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