My First OS - !!~Abhi Naa Jaao Chhod Kar~!! (SanDhir Romance)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay...
Umm..
I have no idea why I wrote this... I don't remember you see... it was quite a while back..
Also I'm really bad at editing so this is really long..

I guess me and my mom were listening to old songs... and this being our fave, err.. kinda inspired me.

I hope some of you remember me. :)
I got a few pm's and comments about updating my FF..
I was actually traveling for a few days.. I couldn't get the time to update further..
Even missed a few episodes of SH (Which I'll catch on online now..) and missed all the fun on the forum too!
Also i haven't had the time to check out all the OS and FF updates here!
Will check and comment soon..

This.. well since I'm unable to update my FF now...
Just to compensate for that! and to contribute to the activity of this forum!!

(I don't even know if this is an OS or Drabble or something else... But, well...)
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This is romantic in nature.
And i have admit that it is not very decent.
So this is rated PG13.
All people here, below 18... skip this!

And even if you guys continue (which I know you will) please don't hold me responsible for corrupting your mind or anything. :D
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I dedicate this to all the married couples everywhere! Specially the ones on this forum (If there are any...)
Also, I hope, one day we do get such cheesy and over the top romance from our SanDhir too! ❤️


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Abhi Naa Jaao Chhod Kar


"Randhir please chhodo!"
Sanyukta begged him. It was 4 in the evening. They were in Jignes's house.. which was filled with all his Gujrati relatives. And this was the time Randhir had decided to pull her into this room and on the bed. Randhir's upper body was hovering over hers.
Tum iss red saari me bahot -"
"Hot lag rhi hoon? Haan pata hai.." Sanyukta completed the sentence for him and smiled proudly.
Randhir chuckled. "Hot? nahi... mai toh kehne wala tha ki tum iss saari me bahot ajeeb lag rhi ho."
He was about to elaborate his point, but couldn't stop himself from laughing at Sanyukta's horrified expression.
"Accha? itni ajeeb lag rhi hoon.. toh mere upar, iss bed pe mere saath kya kar rhe ho? Chhodo mujhe!"
Randhir held both her hands. His eyes twinkled mischievously.
"Arre! wahi toh.. ajeeb lag rhi ho isiliye toh isse hata rha hoon.. you know-"
"Randhir! Paagal ho gye ho kya! Ye shaadi wala ghar hai! Itne saare log-"
"Exactly!! ITNE SAARE LOG! Ek second ke liye bhi akela nhi chhodte! Ab haath aayi ho.. jaane nhi doonga!"
"Koi aa jayega..."
"The room is locked! Aur waise bhi we are married now! Koi aa gaya toh kya? Hum kuch galat nhi kar rhe hai. Iss Jignesh ki shaadi ke liye apni khud ki honeymoon chhod ke aaye hai. Itna toh wo-"
"Tumhe pata hai... wo Jiggy ki mausi ki beti ki saas ne mujhe aur Vidushi ko kitchen me bulaya tha-"
"Jiggy ki mausi ki beti ki saas mujhse zyada important hai?" he asked her in his husky voice.

Sanyukta knew this was going to get her into trouble. They were all here for Jignesh and Kaustukhi's wedding. Kaustukhi and her side's family were in the building just behind them. At nights Sanyukta would stay with them and Randhir with Jiggy. Of course she missed him. It was difficult to stay without him even for an hour... and after coming here 2 weeks back, just a week after their own wedding, they had been unable to spend even a moment in peace together. Randhir was quite frustrated.
Just then Sanyukta's cell phone rang.
"See!" She showed screen to Randhir. It was Vidushi.
"Hello?"
"Hello hi kya kar rhi ho? Sanyukta kahan ho tum? Yahan mujhe saara kaam akele karna pad rha hai... Maami ji ne toh hum dono ko saath..."
Sanyukta was soon finding it hard to make sense of Vidushi's words. Randhir had started dropping hot searing kisses on her jawline. She moved her face away and tried replying.
"Umm.. wo.. err.. Vidushi... wo main-"
"Ye main main kya kar rhi ho? Jaldi aao! Pata nhi koi aunty hai jo keh rhi thi ki unhe Phafda ready chahiye... ye sab mujhe nhi aata.."
Sanyukta blocked the phone by her hand and frowned at Randhir. What are you doing? she mouthed at him. Randhir was smirking.
"Umm.. haan Vidushi, wo main.. haan mujhe Phafda banana aata hai... I'll be there in five minutes." She cut the call before Vidushi could yell at her further.
"Randhir dekha na tumne..! Chhodo na please."
"Theek hai... tumhe jaana hi toh jaao.. Par usse pehle mujhe kuch chahiye."
Sanyukta immdeiately understood what he meant.
"Randhir nahi... main nahi..."
"Common Sanyu! Its just one kiss! Wo toh tum gusse me bhi-"
Sanyukta slapped his shoulder, but couldn't help smiling at the memory of the old incident.
"Nahi randhir... tumhe pata hai na... ek baar hum... matlab phir main jaldi niche nahi jaa paungi.." Sanyukta hesitated.
"Ohh.. you mean to say... tum mujhe resist nahi kar paogi...?" Randhir's arrogant smirk was back.
"Randhir-"
"Sanyukta... tumhe pata hai na... tumhare saath yaha ho ke bhi tumse itna door rehna mujhe kitna kharaab lagta hai. Hamari shaadi ko abhi ek hafta bhi nhi hua tha ki yahan aana pada. I miss you.." He had this heartbroken expression on his face and Sanyukta knew... that now she would really not be able to resist him. She tried one last time.
"Parso shaadi hai... niche sab ko meri zaroorat hai..."
"Mujhe bhi toh hai.. tumhari zarorat."
Sanyukta's eyes immediately lowered and she couldn't help but blush. She could feel Randhir lightly trace her cheek bone with the back of his fingers. She looked up to see him coming closer to her. His eyes were looking into hers and then below at her lips. She could feel his hot breath and his lips were just inches from hers. She was about to close her eyes when a sudden bang on the door startled both of them.
"Hello? Koi andar hai kya?"
It was Parth. He banged the door again.
Old habits die hard, College ki aadat abhi tak nahi gayi...Haddi kahin ka!
"Haan Parth bolo?" Randhir answered in an irritated tone.
"Wo Randhir... main tumhe hi dhoondh rha tha..."
"Haan bolo kya hua?" Sanyukta smiled at Randhir's annoyance. She wanted to stick out his tongue at him but resisted as she knew Randhir had great ways of getting back at her.
"Busy the kya?"
"Haan haan.. bahot busy tha!"
"Par ye toh ladki waalo ka kamra hai... aur tum darwaza kyu nhi khol rhe?"
"Kyunki main apni bi-" Sanyukta covered his mouth with her hands. Randhir winked. Sanyukta pleaded him with her eyes.
"Kyunki main apne towel hoon! Mere room ka shower kaam nhi kar rha tha.."
"Ohh.. accha.."
"Ab batayega bhi ki kya hua!!"
"Haan.. wo niche caterers advance abhi hi mang rhe hai... tum ek baar-"
"Yeah.. okay.. unko keh do ki main paanch minute me aa ke baat karta hoon..."
"Okay.."
Parth left.

"Toh hum kahan the..?" Randhir grinned.
"Par tumhe toh niche jaana hai na!" Sanyukta pointed out.
"Main tumhari tarah nhi hoon! I know how important it is to spend time with your better half!" Randhir said it in the same way he used to talk to her in college. Sanyukta smiled.
Looking at her smiling like that... Randhir's heart warmed. "Kya hua?" He asked her softly.
"Nahi.. just some things never change.." She replied thinking about all those fights, all those arguments and all those misunderstandings.
"Really?! Yaad hai hum college me kaise lada karte the?" Randhir had the uncanny ability of reading her mind. Her smile widened.
"Ab dekho! You are in bed with me!" Both of them started laughing.
Sanyukta used both her hands to push his shoulders, but he held them and pinned them above her head. His eyes told her how much he loved her. Sanyukta thought about all those college days again. How dumb was she to not realize things earlier.
Slowly she realized he was bending closer to her again. Soon enough she could feel his hot breath coming faster than usual on her lips... and this time she wanted nothing more than her lips to meet his.
Randhir noticed her breathlessness and it only made him more eager. He bent forward and kissed her. And soon there lips were moving as if they would never part.
Sanyukta's hand crept up his back and pulled him closer, refusing to allow any kind of space between them. Randhir's arms encircling her became tighter.
There lips were moving in desperation. Randhir was making his intentions quite clear by his actions. I Love You, I Want You, Right Now, he seemed to be saying.
Sanyukta loved him... she had known this for a while now. But after getting married to him she had realized that every part of hers loved him just as much. She was melting and wanted this feeling to go on forever.
After a few minutes, could even be hours as they had no sense of time by then, Randhir's lips left hers, but not her skin. He moved towards her jaw line again, beginning to kiss her there, and Sanyukta could do nothing but turn sideways so he could have more of her. His lips travelled below her chin, all along her neck, kissing her collarbone. He sucked at the throbbing pulse at the bottom of her throat, and moved above towards her ears. He inhaled deeply... taking in the scent of her hair and kissed her around and lightly bit her earlobe in the process.
Sanyukta forgot. She forgot what time it was, she forgot where she was, she forgot that there were people waiting for her downstairs wide awake and alert. All she could think of was Randhir. There was no space for any other thought inside her brain other than the sensation of Randhir and his possessive lips, claiming what was his. It was impossible to stop him or herself.
Randhir looked up and Sanyukta saw the need, desire and want in his eyes which was probably reflecting in hers too. He bent down and their lips met again, his hands working along, trying to get the sleeve of the blouse off-

"Sanyukta? Sanyukta?!"
It took them a minute to come back to their surroundings. Sanyukta took her time to slow down her breathing. Randhir's eyes flashed with anger.
"Sanyukta tum andar ho kya?"
It was Kaustukhi. She sounded very worried.
"Sanyukta?"
She could make out from her tone that something was wrong and so decided to answer. She inhaled deeply and tried to sound normal.
"Haan Kaustukhi... bolo?"
"Thank God i found you! There is something wrong with my wedding dress. The fitting isnt right i think. Please ek baar...just come and see it once."
"Don't worry. Apne room me wait kar. I'll be there." Sanyukta's voice sounded as weak as her will, and she wondered if Kaustukhi would notice. But thankfully she didn't say anything further and left.
"Randhir..."
Sanyukta didnt need to say anything further. He sat upright and so did she. She wondered if he would be angry. She had had enough of Angry Randhir in college.
"Randhir... wo..."
"Its okay Sanyukta. Tum Jaao..." Randhir smiled.
"Seriously agar Kaustukhi nahi hoti toh-"
"Its okay... main gussa nahi hoon... Shes your best friend and its her wedding. She needs you now... Aur waise bhi... now you are my wife... Hamesha ke liye sirf meri." he kissed her forehead.
Sanyukta fell in love with him all over again. Once upon a time, he was an arrogant and annoying guy with anger management issues, whom Sanyukta absolutely despised. But their love had now evolved him into this sweet, caring and loving man... whom she could proudly call her husband.
Randhir reached for Sanyukta's pallu and helped her put it in place. Sanyukta smiled and pecked his lips once and got up. She looked into the mirror and set her hair right. At the door, after a final glance and smile at him.. she sauntered out.
Randhir sighed heavily and dropped down on the bed. His hands were behind his head and he sang... "Abhi Naa Jaao Chod Kar... Ki Dil Abhi Bhada Nahi..."
Sanyukta who hadn't reached the end of the corridor yet, heard him and smiled to herself.



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Leave your comments whether you liked this or not!
All views are appreciated.
Love Always,
Somya



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richurachna thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful...

u describe all things so well

I can just imagine randhir eyes expression
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is so beautiful n hot at the same time. Loved their romance . Super hot.
Hahaha randhir was not ready to leave her .. I just loved that part where u described sanyu's thought process.. when randhir starts kissing her. She forgot everything. Loved it. Also the last bit .. he changed for her. Awiee. Great job yaar! U write really well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res.. Sorry to all the writers..
M feeling quite too lazy and tired to unres all my comments today...
I promise to unres all my comments within 1 or 2 days...😭😭
So, apologies for that...
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Unres
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I read it on the same day when you updated... But commenting now, m quite late..😆😆
It was awesome, lovable, adorable, cute...
I sooo loved it...!!!
SanDhir's emotions, love, feelings, cravings for each other were raise to the power infinity...😳😳😳

They couldn't even spend time with each other after their wedding... That's so unfair with them...
And then, they were also not allowed to spend time with each other at their friends' wedding.. Poor SanDhir..😭😭
But then, it was obvious how much they wanted to pour out all their emotions on each other..
Even I was like,,,
"Abhi na jao chor kar, ki dil abhi bhara nahi
Abhi abhi to ayi ho, bahar ban k chayi ho,
hawa zara mehak to le, nazar zara behak to le,
Ye shyam dhal to le zara, ye dil sambhal to le zara" 😳😳😳

Loved it to the core...
Keep posting such amazing works of yours..!!👏👏👏

Love ya..
Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I liked it a lot...
A beautiful concept penned down amazingly...
Keep writing...

Love
Ayesha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: richurachna

wonderful...

u describe all things so well

I can just imagine randhir eyes expression


Aww... Thankyou so much!
Im glad you liked it!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg this is such a cute and beautiful os and hot too.
sandhir in jigggy's and kaustuki 's wedding and the convo b/w vidhushi and sanyu was hilarious when randhir was carrying on with sanyu.
amazing os
and please update ur ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super duper hot !!!!Nice work yaar..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG !! this was so effin cute :) i was smiling like an idiot throughout 😊
best part was when randhir sings and sanyukta hears it 😳

pls write more😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Somya

Amazing os..
And its your first os..wow👏
Beautifully penned down..
It was a cute, romantic and a little hot one..loved it!! specially loved the end..
Keep writing..n thnx for the pm

Anuradha
Edited by ranyu - 11 years ago

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