My First OS - !!~Abhi Naa Jaao Chhod Kar~!! (SanDhir Romance) - Page 2

Originally posted by: 100littledevils

This is so beautiful n hot at the same time. Loved their romance . Super hot.
Hahaha randhir was not ready to leave her .. I just loved that part where u described sanyu's thought process.. when randhir starts kissing her. She forgot everything. Loved it. Also the last bit .. he changed for her. Awiee. Great job yaar! U write really well.

Originally posted by: Craziness123

I liked it a lot...
A beautiful concept penned down amazingly...
Keep writing...

Love
Ayesha...

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

omg this is such a cute and beautiful os and hot too.

sandhir in jigggy's and kaustuki 's wedding and the convo b/w vidhushi and sanyu was hilarious when randhir was carrying on with sanyu.

amazing os

and please update ur ff

Originally posted by: mjhtmayur

Super duper hot !!!!Nice work yaar..

Originally posted by: RandhirHolic

OMG !! this was so effin cute :) i was smiling like an idiot throughout 😊

best part was when randhir sings and sanyukta hears it 😳

pls write more😃

Originally posted by: ranyu

<font size="4" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#ff3366">Hey Somya</font>

<font size="4" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#ff3366">Amazing os..</font>

<font size="4" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#ff3366">And its your first os..wow👏</font>

<font size="4" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#ff3366">Beautifully penned down..</font>

<font size="4" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#ff3366">It was a cute, romantic and a little hot one..loved it!! specially loved the end..</font>

<font size="4" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#ff3366">Keep writing..n thnx for the pm</font>

<font size="4" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#ff3366">Anuradha</font>