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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 11 years ago

In my AsYa FF 'Burning In The Fire Set By Himself, Asad n Zoya have fallen in love n have reunited. After Tanveer n her gang will be exposed, Asad will decide to remarry Zoya on Valentine's Day wid all the rituals as he is not able to forget his earlier behaviour wid Zoya which makes him feel guilty. Then, a new thriller track will start where Asad, Zoya, Dilshad, Najma, Ayaan, Rashid n Badi Bi will to know abt the Gudiya Factory incident n who r Zoya's ammi's murderers. They will start finding proofs against the murderers. Dilshad's family will shift to Siddiqui Mansion for some reasons. After some time, Zoya's ammi's murderers will get to know abt who Zoya actually is n they will attempt to kill her to get her property. Zoya will survive but she will suffer from memory loss which will shock n shatter everyone in the family. So, which type of memory loss do u all want? Plz, choose one of the options😊.

Option 1: Memory loss wid Zoya acting as a 5 year old kid

Zoya will act as a 5 year old kid before the time of Gudiya Factory incident who loved her abbu. Zoya will call everyone as uncle n aunty including calling Asad as 'Asad uncle'. She will call 'Dada' n 'Dadi' to elderly people. How will everyone including Asad will handle Zoya who will behave like a child running around d house, playing wid toys n eating chocolates? As a memory of 5 year old, Zoya will give tough time to everyone. Her ammi's murderers including her abbu will take advantage of the situation n some time even try to make Zoya go against her well-wishers. Zoya will even bond wid her abbu which everyone including Asad will not like. They will make efforts to keep Zoya away 4m them. Zoya will even keep asking abt her ammi to which everyone will tell dat she has gone to some place n will return one day. Zoya's ammi's murderers will threaten Zoya's well-wishers dat they will tell Zoya dat her ammi died n they will hurt her in several ways if they try to mess wid them. Asad n everyone will get worried abt Zoya's life. Will Zoya's ammi's murderers succeed in making Zoya go against the good people by tainting her innocent mind or will Zoya who has been given good lessons from her childhood by her real ammi n adoptive parents will listen to her heart n mind will not go against the good people?

Option 2: Retrograde Amnesia where Zoya will forget 1 year of her life

Zoya will forget her 1 year of life. So, she will recognize no one in Bhopal including Asad. For some days after her accident, Zoya will be wid her parents, appi, jiju n AnZee's 3 year old twins Alisha n Zain. After some days, Zoya's family will bring her to SM n introduce her wid everyone. They finally introduce her to her husband Asad which shocks her as she never fell in love or thought abt marrying someone. Her family will tell her dat she will have to live wid her husband n his family which she will not like as she has no idea how she got married to Asad n how Asad n his family are. Zoya will not like the idea of sleeping wid Asad on d same bed or even in the same room as she has never even thought of sleeping wid a man so she will be embarrassed wid the idea. She will not like Asad but will not hate him but Asad will always flirt wid her n irritate her wid always reminding her dat they r husband n wife which will irritate her more. Zoya will play many pranks on Asad but Asad will turn the tables most of the time which will shock n annoy Zoya. Zoya will starting liking her in-laws except GaZia n Shirin as they love her very much n take great care of her. She will even start realizing dat Asad is a very nice guy who really loves her n did not hurt or forced her wid anything using his rights as a husband. Zoya will always run 4m Asad dat everyone will find funny but Asad will always be around her. Zoya will find Asad cute n understanding n will start accepting him as her husband. She will want to know abt wat happened since she came in Bhopal n how her marriage was wid Asad. Everyone will be in a fix whether to tell Zoya abt her initial months of marriage n Asad's past nature cuz teln her these things will hurt her very much. Asad will even fear of Zoya leaving him. Her murderers will try to take advantage to tell Zoya d truth abt her marriage n Asad's past nature including how she even filed for divorce? Will they succeed in making Zoya go against everyone including Asad or will Zoya understand everything n still love Asad n his family?

This track will began only after 30-32 part but I need to think till dat. Plz guys, help me wid one of d options. U can even choose 'None' then I will think of some other ideas😃.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

I will go wid option 2

that way u can also make Humi & Nuzut realize that they were wrong about Zoya

although i didn't wanted this memory lose Idea

but if u want 2 take it than its ok, aterall its ur story

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nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

I think option 2
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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91
I will go wid option 2
that way u can also make Humi & Nuzut realize that they were wrong about Zoya
although i didn't wanted this memory lose Idea
but if u want 2 take it than its ok, aterall its ur story

Humeira n Nuzhat will realize dat they were wrong much earlier.

I thought of memory loss idea cuz I can't always show Zoya as a superwoman who can solve everyone's problem better than anyone else. During d divorce track, it was Zoya who was d strongest character wen it came to using mind n solving problems. In football, both d teams make goals. Similarly, d evil people will have victory for some time. Dis time, Zoya will not be as strong strong character as earlier. She will be taken care by everyone who will try to protect her life 4m d evils. Good people also face problems before winning d battle. In Paanch, Roshni is not shown always winning against d evils. Once she is even beaten very bady by her enemies but she came back to destroy her enemies. Here, its upto everyone how they make Zoya feel better in her in-laws house n how Zoya starts accepting Asad as her husband n starts loving him again.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Humeira n Nuzhat will realize dat they were wrong much earlier.

I thought of memory loss idea cuz I can't always show Zoya as a superwoman who can solve everyone's problem better than anyone else. During d divorce track, it was Zoya who was d strongest character wen it came to using mind n solving problems. In football, both d teams make goals. Similarly, d evil people will have victory for some time. Dis time, Zoya will not be as strong strong character as earlier. She will be taken care by everyone who will try to protect her life 4m d evils. Good people also face problems before winning d battle. In Paanch, Roshni is not shown always winning against d evils. Once she is even beaten very bady by her enemies but she came back to destroy her enemies. Here, its upto everyone how they make Zoya feel better in her in-laws house n how Zoya starts accepting Asad as her husband n starts loving him again.

thanks 4 explaining that juhi i totally get ur POV actually from d beginning Asya were suffering in this ff & now that some happy moments came i thought its gonna stay 4 a while but wid this twist they r again gonna b apart & after a long time only Zoya will accept Asad so u know I thought this twist will push d story again on d sad track

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

thanks 4 explaining that juhi i totally get ur POV actually from d beginning Asya were suffering in this ff & now that some happy moments came i thought its gonna stay 4 a while but wid this twist they r again gonna b apart & after a long time only Zoya will accept Asad so u know I thought this twist will push d story again on d sad track

AsYa will not be separated but will have funny n cute moments 2gthr. Zoya will not hate Asad but she will not be able to believe or accept all of a sudden dat she is married to d son of her ammi's friend in India. Zoya will find herself in a house full of strangers who will love her very much except GaZia n Shirin, She will always be bugged by Asad n Zoya will think him flirting wid her. Zoya will play pranks wid Asad but Asad who knows Zoya very well will sometimes turn d tables on her.

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

AsYa will not be separated but will have funny n cute moments 2gthr. Zoya will not hate Asad but she will not be able to believe or accept all of a sudden dat she is married to d son of her ammi's friend in India. Zoya will find herself in a house full of strangers who will love her very much except GaZia n Shirin, She will always be bugged by Asad n Zoya will think him flirting wid her. Zoya will play pranks wid Asad but Asad who knows Zoya very well will sometimes turn d tables on her.

than i think i m gonna like this twist😆😉

but plz plz don't make them enemies again😳

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

Honestly said di i dont like the idea of memory loss. But if u go with this track then take option 2 but dont let asya live in sm. I just hate to c asya in sm

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

than i think i m gonna like this twist😆😉
but plz plz don't make them enemies again😳

No dear, they will not be enemies but they will be some sort of rivals like v see in school or college. They r almost of d same age so it will be more fun. Zoya will be shocked to find herself married all of a sudden n she will be uncomfortable to do romance n all cuz she will be back to her earlier nature of not believing in love. She will always try to annoy Asad who will keep calling her as his wife. Zoya will start finding him as a nice guy as he will always support her.

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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA
Honestly said di i dont like the idea of memory loss. But if u go with this track then take option 2 but dont let asya live in sm. I just hate to c asya in sm

There will be a big reason of them living in SM n u will get to know as d story moves. I can't always show Zoya to be saviour like Gul showed in d show n made everyone dumb so there has to be a twist.