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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt...
taani to rey ki jasus hogayi...bt rey ko to pata chal gaya...

ye ladki kab samjhegi rey ko ayr apne feelings ko???

aur ye baat baat pe bappa ko kyun distrub kar rahi hai...

love swayam's shayeri...

hope ye us shayeri ki matlab samjhe...

precap tp heart attack wala hai...

rey ne confess kiya aut taani ne slap kiya...

plzzz yr jaldi updt karo...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
precap seems intersting
nd dont stop this
u r awesome writer
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice and emotional
what taani is uptp
ye sab vo kyu kar rahi hai..

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Posted: 11 years ago
amzng updt
taarey was superb
precap is shocking
updt sn
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Posted: 11 years ago
lachhu update was beautiful
waiting for the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update
Taani is too much lol
She follow Rey on his date but he still caught her lol
I like her excuse for being at the restaurant lol
She is so confused
Recap is awesome and sad as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome update
taani caught
swayam msg was nice
precap intresting
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update.precap is scary plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys...
Thanks for all the comments. .
Before starting., I would like to inform that with the less comments n likes on the last few updates n other reasons I hve decided to stop writing anymore. .
Its soley my decision because it drains all my energy after work..
Hope you all will like the last update. .
Enjoy reading. ..

Taarey ff-Ehsaas. .part9



Morning
Taani woke up wth rey on her bed..
Taani-kya kar raha hai subah subah yahaan..
Rey-kuch nahi tumhse sry bolne aaya hai..
Taani-jaa jaa maaf kiya..ab ud..mujhe jogging ke liye jaana..
Rey- main aavoon..
Taani-no thnk u..

Office-
Swayam came n caught taani by her hand n dragged her to stairway...
Taani was shocked. .
Taani-kya kar rahi ho
Swayam-tum bolo what the hell did u do u last night. .
Taani-what
Swayam-tumhe pata bhi hai ya sab jaankar an dekhaa kar rahi ho
Taani-swayam
Swayam-tum rey ko uss lathika ke saath..
R u out of ur mind?
Taani turns sidways frm swayam's face..
Taani-usmain nayi baat kahaan hai..main humesha date setup karthi hoon lathika..
Sawayam- nt by giving up ur hardworked deal to her..
U understand only finance na..I will tell u what d hell u did ...its trading..
But sadly taani..u r in loss nw..
Taani-swayam..
Tumhe ho kya gaya hai..
Swayam-tum mujhe batao taani..
Mujhe pata hai uss raat tum hosh main thi..tumhe sab pata haina..
Taani-swayam..how dare you..
U r crossing ur limits..
Taani walkes out but swayam shouted admit it u selfish woman u r in love wth him..

Taani turns back..
Taani-what did u just say..
Swayam-kya hua sach sun nahi saka huh..takleef ho rahi ek baar human emotions admit karne main..
Taani turns sidways..
N walks off..

Rey comes in see taani walking out..
Rey-swayam n he walks off..
Rey-kya yaar aaj office nahi hai..

Rey searches the entire office.. But sees taani in a storage room..
Taani-kyun aaye hoon..thode der keliye akela chod do..
Rey goes n sits with her..
Taani-behre ho sunaayi nahi diya jao..
Rey-kya hua
Taani- tumhe isse matlab
N gets up..
N turns sidways... ho kaun tum mere..kuch nahi lagthe tum mere do u understand kuch nahi..
N a electric shock flashed thru her body when rey pulled her n she came crashing on him..with her hand twisted around her n then rey kissed her...with his lips crushing on her she felt shock rush n helplessness n her knees began to get Get weak n she came closer but she realised something n came to her senses..she tried to push him of but he pushed towards d wall..
Rey-ek sabd aur nahi..bahut sunliya maine.. ek baat kaaan kholkar sunlo.. I am truly deeply madly in love with u..isse aage mujhe koi explanation nahi deni..tum mujhe reject kar sakte ho yaa by walking out n aaj ke baad hum isske baare main kuch nahi bholoonge n na main tumhe pareshaan karoongi..
N agar tumhaara jawaab haa hai..tumhe
ghar lekar javoongi main apne maa ko tumhe milaavoongi shaadi ke date fix karne.. ab faisla tumhaara hai n frees her hands n steps back...
I love you taani..
Taani slaps..she couldn't believe what just happened...
everything..
Taani looked at rey's face- tum (her eyes said u let me dwn rey) n walked off..

Rey broke down..
He sat on his knees n started to cry..-kho diya maine usse..

Rey felt a hand on his shoulders...
He looked up n he couldn't believe his eyes..
It was taani..
Taani sat before him on her knees n wiped his tears from his eyes..
Rey-tum..
Taani- haa main koi shakh..
Rey-tum..
Taani- ab mere tapad khaaliya ab mere jawaab bhi sun le..
She moved closer to his face n closed her eyes n kissed him..

Rey felt he was in a beautiful dream..But he realised it was true n he kissed back...
They lost control on their knees n rey fell on taani..
Rey on top of taani..
They looked at each other..
Rey-yeh jawaab tha toh har tapad manzoor hai mujhe..
Taani blushed..
Rey-haaye mar jawaan..
Taani-i love you. .
Rey-i love you tooo...

N they hugged n swayam n every one cmes with clapping their hands..

Boss- falling in love with ur best friend is world's beautiful feeling..

The end...

Thanks for all the comments and likes n all the support I got..
Signing off..
Lachu..
:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
i respect your decision lachu
even i m thinking the same
to finish off my stories asap
and kabhi kabhi bass ek os likhu

well u gave it a beautiful end!!!
thanq fr this beautiful story!!!

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