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Part 17(B)

Zoya brought Asad to d room where d closet to d secret passage where Tanveer is kept is built. D room is beautiful wid 2 couch n an air pump bed. It has some other interiors.

"Asad, plz move dat couch na," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Why?" asked Asad.

"Just move it na," replied Zoya wid a smile. Asad moved d couch. There was normal floor under d couch. Zoya tuk a remote 4m d table drawer n pressed a button. A part of d floor dat was under d couch slides under d floor like a sliding door. Asad then saw stairs which directed downwards. Asad was amazed to see dat while Zoya smiled @ him.

"Asad, lets walk down d stairs," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad n Zoya walked down d stairs dat led to a room. Zoya then pressed a button shutting d sliding door. It was a beautiful room wid some furniture, a couch and a bed. It had a very nice interior designing. It also had a swing hanging 4m d ceiling of d room. It had even a cupboard and a washroom. There were proper arrangement of ventilation.

"Asad, how is it?" asked Zoya wid a smile.

"Its very amazing, Zoya. D trapdoor leading to a room which is a part of d basement. By the way, dis room is nice for doing romance," replied Asad wid a smile.

Zoya blushed @ his last sentence n then smiled.

"Asad, u even started thinking of romance," said Zoya wid a laugh.

"Wat else a man wud think wen he is wid such a beautiful wife," replied Asad wid a smile.

Zoya blushed again n Asad smiled @ dat.

"Asad, wen u learned flirting?" asked Zoya wid a smile.

"I don't know. It just happened after getn u back in my life," replied Asad wid a smile.

Zoya smiled @ dat.

"Lets go back up d stairs," said Zoya pressing d button to open d sliding door.

They went back to d room. They shut d door n moved d sofa back to d spot. Zoya then removed a painting 4m d wall in d room revealing a sliding door by pressing some numbers in d wall. They then entered d door which led to another secret passage and a room. D room was simple wid beautiful wall painting. It had some chairs, a couch n some show pieces. 

"Zoya, hv u brought me inside a adventure n mystery novel?" asked Asad amusingly.

"No Asad, its my house," replied Zoya wid a laugh.

They then went to d room. Zoya tuk him in d kitchen. She showed him a trapdoor @ d corner of a kitchen which was camouflaged wid d tile designs. Zoya tuk out a remote 4m d kitchen drawer n opened d trapdoor. D trapdoor did not had stairs but had a slide like a garden slide. They got on d slide dat led them to a room by sliding down there. D room had an air pump bed, a recliner n some chairs. It also had a table wid drawers.

"Zoya, r there any more secret places?" asked Asad wid a smile.

"Yes, I vl show u all," replied Zoya wid a smile.

They got back in d kitchen. Zoya shows Asad d whole house. He is shocked to see some more secret spots, rooms, wid basements n trap doors. Asad gets more n more amazed as Zoya shows him d whole house. After seeing d whole house, they sat on d hall couch.

"How do u liked my house?" asked Zoya wid a smile.

"Amazing," replied Asad wid a smile.

Scene shifts to Ayaan's room. Ayaan is sitting on his bed.

"Why bhaijaan has not called me till now?" asks Ayaan worriedly to himself, "Did Zoya listened to him or did she punched him? I sud call bhaijaan now."

He calls Asad.

Scene shifts to Zoya's house. Asad picks up d call.

"Hello," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, u hv not called me once. Did Zoya heard wat u wanted to say?" asked Ayaan.

"Ayaan, u won't believe wat all I came to know," replied Asad wid a laugh.

"Wat did u came to know?" asked Ayaan.

"My wife has kidnapped Tanveer n tied her in a secret room in her house," replied Asad amusingly, "Zoya is only d mystery woman. Zoya has shown me some secret spots, rooms, basements n trapdoors in her house. Its like a movie or a novel in real life."

Ayaan is shocked @ Asad's reply.

"Bhaijaan, u got married n fell in love wid a kidnapper," said Ayaan wid a laugh.
"Ayaan, if Zoya hears wat u said then she vl kidnap u in d same room as Tanveer n then u can give her company cuz she is feeling bored while being alone," said Asad wid a laugh.

"No bhaijaan, I don't want to give dat witch a company," said Ayaan annoyingly n asked in a concerned tone, "Bhaijaan, has Zoya listened to u? Wat happened there?"

"Ayaan, I n Zoya hv reunited. She loves me too," replied Asad happily.

Zoya smiled as Asad said dat. Ayaan smiled getn very happy @ Asad's reply.

"Wat?" asked Ayaan happily, "Is dis true, bhaijaan? Tell me everything na."
Asad started teln him everything. Ayaan was smiling all d while.

"Bhaijaan, I am very happy for u n Zoya. Like u, even I thought Zoya wrong but she really loves u so much dat she became a mystery woman to help u," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Zoya vl return to our house after 2-3 days," said Asad wid a smile.

"Bhaijaan, I hv not told anyone abt our plan. I hv not even told anyone dat u told me d reason behind ur n Zoya's house. Nikhat is okay but Nuzhat n Humeira still hates Zoya. They always want to prove her wrong. Humeira even said dat she wish u n Zoya never gets back 2gthr. Nuzhat even said dat Zoya never cares abt u n u sud marry Tanveer after d divorce cuz she is ur childhood friend n traditional who truly cares abt u," said Ayaan.

Asad got angry @ wat Ayaan said.

"Nuzhat n Humeira needs to shut their mouth n stop interfering in my n Zoya's matters if they don't know anything," said Asad firmly, "Ayaan, u don't tell anything to even them."
"Yaa bhaijaan," said Ayaan.

"Okay Ayaan, I vl talk later," said Asad.

"So dat u can talk to Zoya," teased Ayaan.

"Ayaannn," said Asad annoyingly.

"Sorry bhaijaan. Allah Hafiz," said Ayaan wid a laugh.

"Allah Hafiz," said Asad wid a smile n hung up.

"Asad, I need to go n give food to Tanveer," said Zoya.

Zoya went into d kitchen wid Asad. She kept some fruits n spicy snacks on a plate. They then went inside d secret passage after Zoya wore d hood jacket. Asad hid behind d room wall while Zoya went inside d room wid food n water. Tanveer got scared as she saw her.

"I hv brought food for u, Tanveer darling," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Kajal, plz let me go," requested Tanveer.

"Let u go? Really?" asked Zoya sarcastically, "Tanveer, dis is very less punishment u r getn for wat mistakes u hv done. (in an anger tone)So just shut up n hv ur food."

Zoya feed her wid her hands n Tanveer ate widout a word due to fear.

"Okay baby, see u later," said Zoya wid a smile n left d room wid d plate n glass.

Zoya met Asad behind d wall n they came out of d secret passage into d room. Zoya kept d plate n d glass in d kitchen sink before cumn to sit beside Asad in d hall couch.

"Asad, aapi n jiju were shopping wid Ammi n Najma d whole n visiting places. Ammi n Najma vl also come to d house along wid aapi n jiju. V must tell them everything," said Zoya.

"Yes Zoya, v must tell them everything," said Asad.

They kept on talking on d couch while hvng tea n snacks. After an hour, d doorbell rang. Zoya went to open d door. It was aapi n jiju along wid Dilshad n Najma. Zoya smiled @ them. They came inside n they were shocked to see Asad in d hall.

"Asad, wat r u doing here?" asked Dilshad shockingly.

"Ammi, v vl explain. 1st all of u get fresh," replied Zoya.

Dilshad was shocked to hear 'Ammi' 4m Zoya instead of 'Phuphi'. They got fresh n came in d hall where Asad n Zoya were. They sat on d couch. Zoya had made tea n arranged snacks for everyone. Asad n Zoya started teln Dilshad n Najma everything wid h help of Anwar n Zeenat. Asad n Zoya even showed them all d proofs dat they had collected. Dilshad n Najma were shocked as well as angry as they heard n saw everything.

"So, both of u hv decided to get 2gthr?" asked Dilshad.

"Yes Ammi, I hv realized my mistake," replied Asad.

"Zoya, u hv really kidnapped Tanveer in dis house?" asked Najma amusingly.

"Yaa Tamatar, I hv tied her in a secret," replied Zoya wid a smile.

She showed everyone d footage on her I-Pad where Tanveer is tied on a chair in d secret room. She is lukn disappointed n helpless. Everyone smiled seeing d footage.

"Asad has really changed, Dilshad Bi. He wanted to win back Zoya but Tanveer played cheap tricks by tampering wid Zoya's dress n spiking Asad's coffee," said Zeenat.

Dilshad lukd @ Asad softly n then hugged him.

"I am sorry beta I hv thought u wrong," apologized Dilshad.

"Ammi, its not ur fault to think me wrong. My earlier nature n mistakes has caused all of u to easily believe dat I was wrong n dats wat Tanveer had planned," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, Tanveer even carried out cheap activities wid Imraan for many days in our own house," said Najma angrily, "She is such a cheap woman to use namaaz' as a lie."

"Now all dis vl end after Tanveer, Imraan, Haseena n Chand vl go to jail," said Zoya.

"Asad, now u hv learned dat not to judge people by clothes n our thinking sud not be regressive. Ur these nature led to many problems. Cuz of ur earlier mistakes even wen ur saying truth to Zoya dat Tanveer is trying to separate both of u, Zoya did not believed thinking dat u r saying lies to save urself n put all d blame on Tanveer," said Dilshad.

"Yaa Ammi, I had came to know how wrong I was earlier n how it led to many destruction. I don't want to repeat my mistakes. I hv learned many lesson in these days," said Asad.

"Wen r u returning to our home, Zoya?" asked Najma.

"After 2-3 days after exposing these devils wid d help of Kajal," replied Zoya.

"Wat they did to Kajal was so inuman," said Dilshad.

"Tanveer even opened her factory wid Kajal's money," said Anwar.

"Asad, I am very happy dat u accepted Zoya even after knowing everything abt her childhood," said Zeenat.

"Aapi, I don't hv any issues wid her childhood. I still love Zoya," said Asad.

"Zoya, u hv even made Haseena n Chand to return all d things to Ayaan's family," said Najma wid a laugh.

"They hv to return n pay many more things, Najma. They hv taken a lot of money 4m Kajal n her family so they hv to pay her n her family very much," said Zoya wid a smirk.

"Its very nice dat Ayaan has really realized his mistake n is helping a lot but Nuzhat n Humeira r not realizing their mistakes. They r very irritating," said Najma.

"I can't believed dat d divorce end within 1 and half months," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Ammi, v sud go home now," said Asad.

"V vl keep meeting," said Dilshad wid a smile.

Dilshad, Asad n Najma got up 4m d couch to go to their house. Before going out of d house wid Dilshad n Najma, Asad smiled @ Zoya n she smiled back @ him.

Next morning, Anwar n Zeenat had gone somewhere. Only Zoya n servants are at the home. Zoya is sitting on d hall couch wearing a light blue kurta n black jeans. D doorbell rings.

"Khala, plz see who is there," said Zoya.

D maid opened d door. It was Kajal Sharma.

"Zoya beti, Kajal has come," said d maid.

"Khala, plz bring tea n sumthn to eat," said Zoya.

D maid went to d kitchen.

"Kajal, hv a seat," said Zoya.

Kajal came inside n sat on d couch next to her. Kajal was wearing a red sleeveless top n blue jeans mini-skirt.

"Mam, y u called me here?" asked Kajal.

"As u know dat I hv kidnapped Tanveer, I want u to take all ur anger on her," replied Zoya wid a smile.

"Wat?" asked Kajal shockingly.

"Yaa Kajal, I want u to do dat," replied Zoya, "She needs to suffer a lot."

"Mam, its very nice dat u n Asad Sir hv got back 2gthr. Its very amazing dat Asad Sir has changed n realized his mistakes. I vl take back all my money dat Tanveer, Imraan, Haseena n Chand tuk 4m me. I vl teach these devils a lesson along wid u," said Kajal.

D maid came wid tea n snacks. After hvng tea n snacks, Zoya tuk Kajal to d room where d cupboard is built. Zoya wore her hood jacket. She went inside d secret wid Kajal.

"Who is she?" asked Tanveer shockingly.

"She is d one who actually kidnapped u, Tanveer," replied Kajal wid a smirk.

D duo charged 2wards Tanveer. Kajal starts slapping Tanveer repeatedly on her cheeks.

"Kajal, plz stop slapping me," pleaded Tanveer.

Kajal stopped slapping her but she grabs her hair pulling it down hard making her scream.

"Aaahhh," screamed Tanveer in pain.

"U r feeling pain na, Tanveer?" asked Kajal angrily, "Hv u ever thought before giving pain to others? U even tried to trap a married man who is ur childhood friend n humiliated his wife publicly by tampering wid her dress to put d blame on her husband so dat his wife cud hate him. U even spiked his coffee n molested him to convince everyone dat u both slept 2gthr n to make his wife believe dat her husband betrayed her wid his childhood friend. U r such a cheap n disgusting woman, Tanveer. U tried to break ur childhood friend's marriage."

Tanveer was still screaming in pain. Kajal left her hair.

"Now, u vl be suffering a lot," said Kajal wid an evil smile.

"Plz, let me go," begged Tanveer.

"U vl go only wen v vl want to let u go," said Zoya in a sinister tone.

"Who r u?" asked Tanveer shockingly.

"U wanted to know na who I am?" asked Zoya, "See by urself."
Zoya lifts her hood to reveal herself. Tanveer is shocked dat d woman in d hood who has kidnapped her is none other than Zoya.

"You?" asked Tanveer shockingly.

"Yaa, its me Zoya Ahmed Khan," replied Zoya wid a smirk.

She was shocked by Zoya addressing herself as 'Zoya Ahmed Khan' instead of 'Zoya Farooqui'. She kept lukn @ her shockingly while Zoya smirked @ her.

Precap: #Zoya grabs Tanveer's jaws tightly n tells her dat she did a big mistake to mess wid her n she sud not hv came to Bhopal 4m Kanpur. Tanveer is very scared.

#Kajal sends Imraan a MMS of him, Tanveer n Haseena planning @ d godown wid a 'Private Numbar'. She texts under d MMS to give her 2 crore or dis video vl be forwarded to all d members of Nikhat's family. Imraan gets scared on seeing the MMS n the text.

#Zoya receives a parcel gift in her cabin brought by d peon. It was 4m Asad. She opens d gift to find a green saree wid a golden halter neck blouse. It had a note saying dat she sud meet him for dinner date @ a hotel wearing dis saree. Zoya smiles getn very happy wid Asad's gift.


                          

                                              Asad's gift for Zoya


#Asad waits for Zoya @ d hotel in a black suit. Zoya arrives in d green saree given by him. Asad gets mesmerized by her. They even dance on d song 'Be Intehaan'.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Beautiful update. Asya r eating together and and chatting with each other. Asad said that he was hurt when zoya said him to marry tanveer. Zoya told him everything and said that its all a drama and she always stay around him as mystry woman or zoya. Asad want to c the whole house. And zoya showed him. Asad was amazed to c there r so many secret rooms in the house. He want to do romance in the secret room. Asad told ayan that he and zoya loved each other. Asya also told dilnaj everything. All r happy. Love the way kajal beating billi. Dont want to say any thing about humeira and nuzhat. Glad that ayan shut them up. Loved the updateEdited by RAJLUVASYA - 9 years ago
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Thanx for the pm!
awesome update
loved it
Zoya's house and secret passages 😆
aww asad ko basement mein romance karne ka mood 😛 😉 😆
continue soonish soonEdited by parakshi - 9 years ago
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wonderful part
excited for next part 
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Awesome update
Mystery woman with mystery house
Zoya showed asad full house
Asad talked abt romance & compliment her & zoya blushed
Asad told ayaan abt zoya as mystery girl
Finally everything revealed to full family
Tanveer was shocked to know abt zoya as kidnapper
Precap as always interesting
Asya dinner date & imran mms
Continue soon
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good going...well written..continue soon..👍🏼
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awesome update...thanks for the pm
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awesome part👏
Asya r getting comfortable slowly😃
loved d way Kajal & Zoya beat billi😆
now waiting qureshi's mask 2 b removed😉
i m hoping 2 see some romance btw Asya in nxt part😳
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Awesome update dear
Continue soon
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