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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishwa09

When will u update ?


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Originally posted by: zynia890


Nice update!! Thank u😊

So my guess was right MW is zoya!! Yaa, Zoya is MWšŸ˜‰

And thanks God that Asad and zoya talked! Yaa, they r finally 2gthr😃

Things are litl bit cleared between them!! A lot has cleared between them😊

Precap seems interesting!!

Continue soon!!

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Originally posted by: rajsmi

Awe...ended the episode with cute wala Asya precap...


D next part vl be more beautiful😊
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Originally posted by: KReyAS


awsom updt Thank u😊

asad know zoya is mw He found it himselfšŸ˜†

aya are unite Yes😃

thee trio are real monster Exactly😔

cont soon

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Part 17(A)

Asad orders pizza n diet coke for them. While Asad was doing d order, Zoya opened d secret room CCTV footage on her I-Pad n saw Tanveer's scared face in d footage. She smiled seeing dat. She then showed it to Asad who also smiled seeing dat.

"Zoya, I can't believe u cud do all dis also," said Asad in an amazed tone.

"Tanveer messed wid d wrong girl, Asad," said Zoya wid an evil smirk, "She needs to be taught a lesson dat she never ever thinks of troubling some else."

"U r right," said Asad wid a smile.

They finished their coffee.

"R u hungry?" asked Zoya.

"Yes," replied Asad.

Zoya went to d fridge. She removed fruit salad n orange juice 4m d fridge. She came to d table n served to herself n Asad.

Ishq Wala Love' song 4m SOTY' music starts playing in d bg http://www.lyricsmasti.com/song/7972/get_lyrics_of_Ishq-Wala-Love.html .

(Zoya sits next to Asad's chair. He smiles @ her n she smiles back @ him.)

Surkh Wala, Soz Wala, Faiz Wala Love
Hota Hai Jo Love Se Zyada
Waise Wala Love
Ishq Wala Love
Hua Joh Dard Bhi Toh
Humko Aaj Kuch Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love
Yeh Kya Hua Hai Kya Khabar
Yehi Pata Hai Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love
Agar Yeh Usko Bhi Hua Hai
Phir Bhi Mujhko Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love

(Asad n Zoya starts eating d fruit salad.

"Zoya, I was really hurt wen u told me to forget u n marry dat witch Tanveer," said Asad.

"Asad, I told u dat was a plan. Dat Tanveer wanted me to be out of ur life so I wanted to give her assurance dat I am out of ur life so dat she does not create more trouble for me n v both can easily find proofs against Tanveer. Yesterday morning, I came to see u 4m outside ur house n I saw Tanveer wid Imraan so I called u. Wen they talked abt going to d bazaar then I told u to come there. Even I n aapi decided to come there. I saw how u were lukn @ me n Tanveer hurt u by taking u to d shop. She even made u wait to go to meet Imraan. Then wen u both were cumn out of d shop, I n aapi purposely came there n started d drama. V had no intention to hurt u but v only wanted to fool Tanveer," said Zoya.

Asad's face softened she said dat.)

Meri Neend Jaise Pehli Baar Tooti Hai
Aankhein Malke Maine Dekhi Hai Subah
Hui Dhoop Zyada Leke
Teri Roshini Yeh Din Chadha
Ishq Wala Love

Jhaake Baadlon Ki Jaali Ke Peeche Se
Kare Chandini Yeh Mujhko Itna
Leke Noor Sara Chand Mera Yahin Pe
Hai Chupa Chupa Hua
Ishq Wala Love

(Asad smiled @ Zoya. He cud not believe dat he was abt to lose her to divorce.

"Zoya, were u watching me all d time in d bazaar?" asked Asad lukn amazed.

"Yes Asad, I wanted to be around u as Zoya n mystery woman. I knew dat u were suffering a lot due to Tanveer who molested u n does not leave a chance to touch u in d wrong way so I thought to be around u n keep giving u info abt Tanveer as d mystery woman. I told Ayaan to include in d plan cuz he really realized his mistakes," replied Zoya wid a smile.

"U r my true friend, Zoya," said Asad wid a smile.

"And also wife," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Wen r u cumn back to our house?" asked Asad.

"After 2-3 days," replied Zoya, "After v end Tanveer, Imraan, Haseena n Chand's chapter."

"Okay," said Asad.

They finish their fruit salad n then hv their orange juice.)

Hua Joh Dard Bhi Toh
Humko Aaj Kuch Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love
Yeh Kya Hua Hai Kya
Khabar Yehi Pata Hai Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love
Agar Yeh Usko Bhi Hua Hai
Phir Bhi Mujhko Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love

(They finished their orange juice n talk for some time @ d dining table. D pizza delivery boy comes n Zoya receives d order. They go back to d dining table. They sat on their chairs. Zoya keeps d pizza n d diet cokes on d dining table. She opens d pizza box.)

Kyun Na Aise Hota
Jo Milte Tum Ho Jaate Ghum Saath Mere
Hotey Hotey Hoga Samjhaaye Hum
Thum Jaaye Tham Oh Dil Mere
Toota Zyada Zyada Taara Jab Gira
Zara Zyada Zyada Maangu Dil Tera
Kabhi Zyada Zyada Maane Na Dil Yeh Sarfira
Ishq Wala Love
Bada Yeh Dil Nadaan Tha Par Aaj Kuch Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love

(Asad picks up a piece n feeds it to Zoya. Zoya smiles n feeds him back. They continue eating d pizza.

"Asad, I was shocked to know dat u came 4m d window," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Ayaan said right to me dat u r going to get a shock to know me cumn 4m d window," Asad said wid a laugh.

Zoya also laughed.

"Y did not u came 4m d door?" asked Zoya wid a laugh.

"I did not wanted to get punched n thrown out by u," replied Asad wid a shocked.

Zoya @ 1st got shocked by his reply n then she too laughed.)

Jo Khone Ka Tha Darr Tujhe
Toh Hi Kyun Nahin Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love
Hua Joh Dard Bhi Toh
Humko Aaj Kuch Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love
Yeh Kya Hua Hai Kya
Khabar Yehi Pata Hai Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love
Agar Yeh Usko Bhi Hua
Hai Phir Bhi Mujhko Zyada Hua
Ishq Wala Love

(Zoya opened her can of diet coke spilling some of them on d table. Asad lukd wid wide eyes. He wiped d little spilled diet coke on d table wid a tissue paper.

"U cleanliness freak," said Zoya rolling her eyes.

"And u messiness freak," said Asad rolling his eyes.

They finished their pizza n diet coke.)

Ishq Wala Love
Surkh Wala Soz Wala Faiz Wala Love
Ishq Wala Love
Hota Hai Jo Love Se Zyada Waise Wala Love
Ishq Wala Love
Surkh Wala Soz Wala Faiz Wala Love
Ishq Wala Love
Hota Hai Jo Love Se Zyada Waise Wala Love
Ishq Wala Love

(They went to Zoya's bedroom n sat on Zoya' bed.

"Now, Queen is under control. V hv to think abt King n the 2 Jokers(Haseena n Chand)," said Zoya wid a smirk.

"V vl soon end all of them," said Asad wid a smirk.

"Now, its time to tell Najma n Ammi abt everything," said Zoya.

"Yaa, I vl tell them 2day," said Asad.

Asad removed his black shirt due to heat revealing his black vest. He kept his shirt on d back of a chair. He lied on d bed in his vest n blue jeans. Zoya lied next to him. Asad got up a little n kissed on her forehead. Zoya smiles @ dis. Asad lied back on d bed. They lukd @ each other while lying on d bed n smiled. They fell asleep holding each other's hands.)

Scene shifts to SM. D Zingo Hotties r in their secret room.

"Its so strange na?" asked Nuzhat wid a shock, "Haseena Bi returned all d things she tuk 4m our house."
"She is so nice. Ammi has lukd a nice guy for Nikhat. Not like Dilshad Bi who lukd for such a wrong girl for Asad bhaijaan. Dat girl even insulted her own mother-in-law in public. I wish Asad bhaijaan n Zoya never gets back2gthr. Zoya is a bad girl," said Humeira.

"Humeira, vl u just shut up?" asked Ayaan annoyingly, "U r hating Zoya just cuz she got u blurt d truth. Wat do u mean by saying dat u wish Asad bhaijaan n Zoya never gets back 2gthr? U cannot think properly sumthn. Can't u see how hurt Zoya n Asad bhaijaan looked? Do u even know wat happened in their lives for 3 months since bhaijaan met Zoya? As for Zoya insulting Badi Ammi, she was angry for making her marry Asad bhaijaan. How much do u know, Zoya? Its u who started insulting her by saying dat she trapped Asad bhaijaan. Then wat do u expect 4m Zoya to do as reaction? To smile @ u or hug u? I regret greatly for saying many wrong things against Zoya even saying cheap things to her. Dat day, Asad bhaijaan made me realize how wrong I was? I am always wishing dat everything becomes right between Asad bhaijaan n Zoya but u r still talking ill abt Zoya. Can't u care for Zoya n Asad bhaijaan a little bit? Humeira, u hv become insensitive n selfish just like ur Ammi."

Humeira got shocked as he said dat.

"Bhaijaan, how can u hurt Humeira?" asked Nuzhat shockingly, "She really loves u."
"She does not loves me, Nuzhat. She is only after me cuz her Ammi may hv told her to woo me. Her Ammi is after us to get married so she send her daughter after me. If Humeira really loved me then she wud hv cared abt my feelings on how much I am feeling guilty for hurting Zoya n not realizing Asad bhaijaan's feelings but she has her own grudge against Zoya just cuz she exposed her truth. And Nuzhat, u care abt Humeira loving me. Do u even care abt Asad bhaijaan n Zoya? Asad bhaijaan has really done some mistakes n he is regretting for it it each moment. Bhaijaan really wants Zoya back in his life."

"How can be so sure abt it, bhaijaan?" asked Nuzhat, "Bhaijaan always wanted a traditional girl like Tanveer. He sud forget Zoya n marry Tanveer after d divorce. Zoya does not cares abt him but Tanveer is his childhood friend who truly cares abt him."

Ayaan got angry. He felt like saying everything on how good Zoya actually is n how cheap Tanveer is but he kept quiet for d sake of d plan n him not trusting the 3 girls.

"Nuzhat enough," said Ayaan angrily, "Dat day, bhaijaan told us so many things then also u n Humeira r always after proving Zoya as a wrong girl for bhaijaan. U told so many cheap things to Zoya in d mall being a girl urself. How can u say dat bhaijaan sud forget Zoya? Bhaijaan always wanted a traditional girl but he has changed very much now. Earlier, bhaijaan had wrong ideologies n was very judgemental. But he is not any more like dat. How can u simply say dat bhaijaan sud marry Tanveer just cuz she is tradition n his childhood friend? Bhaijaan is in a lot of tension due to d mistakes he committed n losing Zoya but u both r only talking rubbishes. How can u say dat Zoya does not cares abt bhaijaan? Zoya is very hurt cuz bhaijaan has hurt her so she hates him. How much u both know abt Zoya?"

"Plz, calm down 3 of u," said Nikhat, "Humeira baaji, Nuzhat, u both sud stop talking wrong abt Zoya. V hardly know her. Humeira baaji, during fashion show Zoya helped u gain confidence but now u made her angry by insulting her. If u insult someone then u sud not expect them to keep quiet or be nice to u. Asad bhaijaan n Zoya were lukn very hurt but both of u can't see dat cuz both of u r busy in making Zoya wrong. V sud pray dat everything becomes right between them. Asad bhaijaan has changed a lot. He even regrets @ how his nature was earlier. Cuz of dat, everything wrong happened in his life. Even Najma baaji n Badi Ammi hates Asad bhaijaan? There must be some reason behind them."

"V don't know wat happened between them n cuz of our stupidity, bhaijaan vl not tell us. Bhaijaan is very angry @ us for insulting Zoya. It luks like dat he loves her," said Ayaan.

Scene shifts to Zoya's room. Its evening. Asad wakes up. He sees Zoya still sleeping holding his hand. He smiles n kisses d knuckle of her hand dat holding. Zoya opens her eyes as she feels Asad's kiss on her hand. She smiles @ Asad. Zoya kissed his right cheek. Asad smiled @ her. They sat on d bed. Asad tuk his shirt 4m d chair n wore it.

"Zoya, u hv not shown me ur whole house," said Asad.

"I vl show u after some time," said Zoya, "1st I vl tell u the truth abt dis house. Dis house is not brought by aapi n jiju. Dis house is built by ammi-abbu even before aapi was born. Dis house has some secret spots, passages , rooms, basements n trapdoors. Najma n Ammi knows abt it but I did not told u the truth cuz u were never interested in even talking wid me. After aapi turned 2, ammi-abbu left India for New York. There, they met my ammi as their neighbour n became friends. 1 year later, I was born n our neighbor especially became very fond of me. Aapi used to come to my house to play wid me n we too used to go to their house. Its aapi who suggested to keep my name as Zoya. She loved me very much since I was in my ammi's belly. Even before I was born, she suggested d name Zoya if it's a girl n Zain if it's a boy. All agreed wid her. Aapi always saw me as her younger sister. Wen I was adopted by her parents, I officially became her younger sister. Wen I grew up n wanted to go India to find abt my ammi's murderers, my family decided to get me married cuz they wanted me forget my past n think abt my future. But I told them dat widout knowing abt our past, v can't move ahead. So, they decided if I get married to a guy then I vl hv support wid me n I may find love which I did not believed in. They also thought dat I became of marriageable age. They arranged Akram for me. I agreed cuz I thought dat my family lukd for him n the guy is 4m India so he may be nice. But mistakes can happen 4m anyone. Even my family. Akram turned out to be bad guy who sent goons after me cuz I refused to marry him. I refused to marry him cuz lukn @ his family n friends, I found sumthn wrong wid d whole family. Aapi n jiju wanted to take me back to New York but I stayed back to find my ammi's killers. Weneva my family visits India, they stay in dis house. Aapi n jiju got it renovated 4 years ago. Earlier, dis house had only 1 secret room and a basement. But wen aapi n jiju were renovating dis house, they made some more secret rooms n some trap doors leading to some basements which r split into several basements 4m d basement. Dis house even has some secret spots to keep or hide something. I had given everyone d idea to increase d secret spots, passages, rooms, trapdoors, basements as I wanted dis house to be interesting."

Asad lukd amazed @ wat all Zoya said. Zoya tuk out a remote 4m d drawer n pressed a button. She signalled Asad to luk forward carefully. As she pressed d button, a thin part of d wall 4m a small area of d wall opened like a sliding door. D sliding thin part of d wall slided inside d wall revealing a secret spot dat had some chips n chocolates. Asad was amazed to see dat. Asad smiled. Zoya then pressed d button to shut d spot.

"At dis spot, I keep my chips, chocolates n other eatables here," said Zoya.

"I can't believe dat ur house is like something v only see in movies. One secret passage I had seen by following u where u hv kept Tanveer," said Asad wid a smile.

"Even I thought dat ur house is so modern lukn dat v only seen in movies wen I came to ur house for d 1st time. I was amazed by d beauty of ur house," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Glad dat u liked my house. I want to see ur whole house. U told me so much interesting facts abt ur house. Zoya, show me d whole house na," said Asad wid a smile.

"Okay," said Zoya wid a smile.


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Part 17(B)

Zoya brought Asad to d room where d closet to d secret passage where Tanveer is kept is built. D room is beautiful wid 2 couch n an air pump bed. It has some other interiors.

"Asad, plz move dat couch na," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Why?" asked Asad.

"Just move it na," replied Zoya wid a smile. Asad moved d couch. There was normal floor under d couch. Zoya tuk a remote 4m d table drawer n pressed a button. A part of d floor dat was under d couch slides under d floor like a sliding door. Asad then saw stairs which directed downwards. Asad was amazed to see dat while Zoya smiled @ him.

"Asad, lets walk down d stairs," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad n Zoya walked down d stairs dat led to a room. Zoya then pressed a button shutting d sliding door. It was a beautiful room wid some furniture, a couch and a bed. It had a very nice interior designing. It also had a swing hanging 4m d ceiling of d room. It had even a cupboard and a washroom. There were proper arrangement of ventilation.

"Asad, how is it?" asked Zoya wid a smile.

"Its very amazing, Zoya. D trapdoor leading to a room which is a part of d basement. By the way, dis room is nice for doing romance," replied Asad wid a smile.

Zoya blushed @ his last sentence n then smiled.

"Asad, u even started thinking of romance," said Zoya wid a laugh.

"Wat else a man wud think wen he is wid such a beautiful wife," replied Asad wid a smile.

Zoya blushed again n Asad smiled @ dat.

"Asad, wen u learned flirting?" asked Zoya wid a smile.

"I don't know. It just happened after getn u back in my life," replied Asad wid a smile.

Zoya smiled @ dat.

"Lets go back up d stairs," said Zoya pressing d button to open d sliding door.

They went back to d room. They shut d door n moved d sofa back to d spot. Zoya then removed a painting 4m d wall in d room revealing a sliding door by pressing some numbers in d wall. They then entered d door which led to another secret passage and a room. D room was simple wid beautiful wall painting. It had some chairs, a couch n some show pieces.

"Zoya, hv u brought me inside a adventure n mystery novel?" asked Asad amusingly.

"No Asad, its my house," replied Zoya wid a laugh.

They then went to d room. Zoya tuk him in d kitchen. She showed him a trapdoor @ d corner of a kitchen which was camouflaged wid d tile designs. Zoya tuk out a remote 4m d kitchen drawer n opened d trapdoor. D trapdoor did not had stairs but had a slide like a garden slide. They got on d slide dat led them to a room by sliding down there. D room had an air pump bed, a recliner n some chairs. It also had a table wid drawers.

"Zoya, r there any more secret places?" asked Asad wid a smile.

"Yes, I vl show u all," replied Zoya wid a smile.

They got back in d kitchen. Zoya shows Asad d whole house. He is shocked to see some more secret spots, rooms, wid basements n trap doors. Asad gets more n more amazed as Zoya shows him d whole house. After seeing d whole house, they sat on d hall couch.

"How do u liked my house?" asked Zoya wid a smile.

"Amazing," replied Asad wid a smile.

Scene shifts to Ayaan's room. Ayaan is sitting on his bed.

"Why bhaijaan has not called me till now?" asks Ayaan worriedly to himself, "Did Zoya listened to him or did she punched him? I sud call bhaijaan now."

He calls Asad.

Scene shifts to Zoya's house. Asad picks up d call.

"Hello," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, u hv not called me once. Did Zoya heard wat u wanted to say?" asked Ayaan.

"Ayaan, u won't believe wat all I came to know," replied Asad wid a laugh.

"Wat did u came to know?" asked Ayaan.

"My wife has kidnapped Tanveer n tied her in a secret room in her house," replied Asad amusingly, "Zoya is only d mystery woman. Zoya has shown me some secret spots, rooms, basements n trapdoors in her house. Its like a movie or a novel in real life."

Ayaan is shocked @ Asad's reply.

"Bhaijaan, u got married n fell in love wid a kidnapper," said Ayaan wid a laugh.
"Ayaan, if Zoya hears wat u said then she vl kidnap u in d same room as Tanveer n then u can give her company cuz she is feeling bored while being alone," said Asad wid a laugh.

"No bhaijaan, I don't want to give dat witch a company," said Ayaan annoyingly n asked in a concerned tone, "Bhaijaan, has Zoya listened to u? Wat happened there?"

"Ayaan, I n Zoya hv reunited. She loves me too," replied Asad happily.

Zoya smiled as Asad said dat. Ayaan smiled getn very happy @ Asad's reply.

"Wat?" asked Ayaan happily, "Is dis true, bhaijaan? Tell me everything na."
Asad started teln him everything. Ayaan was smiling all d while.

"Bhaijaan, I am very happy for u n Zoya. Like u, even I thought Zoya wrong but she really loves u so much dat she became a mystery woman to help u," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Zoya vl return to our house after 2-3 days," said Asad wid a smile.

"Bhaijaan, I hv not told anyone abt our plan. I hv not even told anyone dat u told me d reason behind ur n Zoya's house. Nikhat is okay but Nuzhat n Humeira still hates Zoya. They always want to prove her wrong. Humeira even said dat she wish u n Zoya never gets back 2gthr. Nuzhat even said dat Zoya never cares abt u n u sud marry Tanveer after d divorce cuz she is ur childhood friend n traditional who truly cares abt u," said Ayaan.

Asad got angry @ wat Ayaan said.

"Nuzhat n Humeira needs to shut their mouth n stop interfering in my n Zoya's matters if they don't know anything," said Asad firmly, "Ayaan, u don't tell anything to even them."
"Yaa bhaijaan," said Ayaan.

"Okay Ayaan, I vl talk later," said Asad.

"So dat u can talk to Zoya," teased Ayaan.

"Ayaannn," said Asad annoyingly.

"Sorry bhaijaan. Allah Hafiz," said Ayaan wid a laugh.

"Allah Hafiz," said Asad wid a smile n hung up.

"Asad, I need to go n give food to Tanveer," said Zoya.

Zoya went into d kitchen wid Asad. She kept some fruits n spicy snacks on a plate. They then went inside d secret passage after Zoya wore d hood jacket. Asad hid behind d room wall while Zoya went inside d room wid food n water. Tanveer got scared as she saw her.

"I hv brought food for u, Tanveer darling," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Kajal, plz let me go," requested Tanveer.

"Let u go? Really?" asked Zoya sarcastically, "Tanveer, dis is very less punishment u r getn for wat mistakes u hv done. (in an anger tone)So just shut up n hv ur food."

Zoya feed her wid her hands n Tanveer ate widout a word due to fear.

"Okay baby, see u later," said Zoya wid a smile n left d room wid d plate n glass.

Zoya met Asad behind d wall n they came out of d secret passage into d room. Zoya kept d plate n d glass in d kitchen sink before cumn to sit beside Asad in d hall couch.

"Asad, aapi n jiju were shopping wid Ammi n Najma d whole n visiting places. Ammi n Najma vl also come to d house along wid aapi n jiju. V must tell them everything," said Zoya.

"Yes Zoya, v must tell them everything," said Asad.

They kept on talking on d couch while hvng tea n snacks. After an hour, d doorbell rang. Zoya went to open d door. It was aapi n jiju along wid Dilshad n Najma. Zoya smiled @ them. They came inside n they were shocked to see Asad in d hall.

"Asad, wat r u doing here?" asked Dilshad shockingly.

"Ammi, v vl explain. 1st all of u get fresh," replied Zoya.

Dilshad was shocked to hear 'Ammi' 4m Zoya instead of 'Phuphi'. They got fresh n came in d hall where Asad n Zoya were. They sat on d couch. Zoya had made tea n arranged snacks for everyone. Asad n Zoya started teln Dilshad n Najma everything wid h help of Anwar n Zeenat. Asad n Zoya even showed them all d proofs dat they had collected. Dilshad n Najma were shocked as well as angry as they heard n saw everything.

"So, both of u hv decided to get 2gthr?" asked Dilshad.

"Yes Ammi, I hv realized my mistake," replied Asad.

"Zoya, u hv really kidnapped Tanveer in dis house?" asked Najma amusingly.

"Yaa Tamatar, I hv tied her in a secret," replied Zoya wid a smile.

She showed everyone d footage on her I-Pad where Tanveer is tied on a chair in d secret room. She is lukn disappointed n helpless. Everyone smiled seeing d footage.

"Asad has really changed, Dilshad Bi. He wanted to win back Zoya but Tanveer played cheap tricks by tampering wid Zoya's dress n spiking Asad's coffee," said Zeenat.

Dilshad lukd @ Asad softly n then hugged him.

"I am sorry beta I hv thought u wrong," apologized Dilshad.

"Ammi, its not ur fault to think me wrong. My earlier nature n mistakes has caused all of u to easily believe dat I was wrong n dats wat Tanveer had planned," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, Tanveer even carried out cheap activities wid Imraan for many days in our own house," said Najma angrily, "She is such a cheap woman to use namaaz' as a lie."

"Now all dis vl end after Tanveer, Imraan, Haseena n Chand vl go to jail," said Zoya.

"Asad, now u hv learned dat not to judge people by clothes n our thinking sud not be regressive. Ur these nature led to many problems. Cuz of ur earlier mistakes even wen ur saying truth to Zoya dat Tanveer is trying to separate both of u, Zoya did not believed thinking dat u r saying lies to save urself n put all d blame on Tanveer," said Dilshad.

"Yaa Ammi, I had came to know how wrong I was earlier n how it led to many destruction. I don't want to repeat my mistakes. I hv learned many lesson in these days," said Asad.

"Wen r u returning to our home, Zoya?" asked Najma.

"After 2-3 days after exposing these devils wid d help of Kajal," replied Zoya.

"Wat they did to Kajal was so inuman," said Dilshad.

"Tanveer even opened her factory wid Kajal's money," said Anwar.

"Asad, I am very happy dat u accepted Zoya even after knowing everything abt her childhood," said Zeenat.

"Aapi, I don't hv any issues wid her childhood. I still love Zoya," said Asad.

"Zoya, u hv even made Haseena n Chand to return all d things to Ayaan's family," said Najma wid a laugh.

"They hv to return n pay many more things, Najma. They hv taken a lot of money 4m Kajal n her family so they hv to pay her n her family very much," said Zoya wid a smirk.

"Its very nice dat Ayaan has really realized his mistake n is helping a lot but Nuzhat n Humeira r not realizing their mistakes. They r very irritating," said Najma.

"I can't believed dat d divorce end within 1 and half months," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Ammi, v sud go home now," said Asad.

"V vl keep meeting," said Dilshad wid a smile.

Dilshad, Asad n Najma got up 4m d couch to go to their house. Before going out of d house wid Dilshad n Najma, Asad smiled @ Zoya n she smiled back @ him.

Next morning, Anwar n Zeenat had gone somewhere. Only Zoya n servants are at the home. Zoya is sitting on d hall couch wearing a light blue kurta n black jeans. D doorbell rings.

"Khala, plz see who is there," said Zoya.

D maid opened d door. It was Kajal Sharma.

"Zoya beti, Kajal has come," said d maid.

"Khala, plz bring tea n sumthn to eat," said Zoya.

D maid went to d kitchen.

"Kajal, hv a seat," said Zoya.

Kajal came inside n sat on d couch next to her. Kajal was wearing a red sleeveless top n blue jeans mini-skirt.

"Mam, y u called me here?" asked Kajal.

"As u know dat I hv kidnapped Tanveer, I want u to take all ur anger on her," replied Zoya wid a smile.

"Wat?" asked Kajal shockingly.

"Yaa Kajal, I want u to do dat," replied Zoya, "She needs to suffer a lot."

"Mam, its very nice dat u n Asad Sir hv got back 2gthr. Its very amazing dat Asad Sir has changed n realized his mistakes. I vl take back all my money dat Tanveer, Imraan, Haseena n Chand tuk 4m me. I vl teach these devils a lesson along wid u," said Kajal.

D maid came wid tea n snacks. After hvng tea n snacks, Zoya tuk Kajal to d room where d cupboard is built. Zoya wore her hood jacket. She went inside d secret wid Kajal.

"Who is she?" asked Tanveer shockingly.

"She is d one who actually kidnapped u, Tanveer," replied Kajal wid a smirk.

D duo charged 2wards Tanveer. Kajal starts slapping Tanveer repeatedly on her cheeks.

"Kajal, plz stop slapping me," pleaded Tanveer.

Kajal stopped slapping her but she grabs her hair pulling it down hard making her scream.

"Aaahhh," screamed Tanveer in pain.

"U r feeling pain na, Tanveer?" asked Kajal angrily, "Hv u ever thought before giving pain to others? U even tried to trap a married man who is ur childhood friend n humiliated his wife publicly by tampering wid her dress to put d blame on her husband so dat his wife cud hate him. U even spiked his coffee n molested him to convince everyone dat u both slept 2gthr n to make his wife believe dat her husband betrayed her wid his childhood friend. U r such a cheap n disgusting woman, Tanveer. U tried to break ur childhood friend's marriage."

Tanveer was still screaming in pain. Kajal left her hair.

"Now, u vl be suffering a lot," said Kajal wid an evil smile.

"Plz, let me go," begged Tanveer.

"U vl go only wen v vl want to let u go," said Zoya in a sinister tone.

"Who r u?" asked Tanveer shockingly.

"U wanted to know na who I am?" asked Zoya, "See by urself."
Zoya lifts her hood to reveal herself. Tanveer is shocked dat d woman in d hood who has kidnapped her is none other than Zoya.

"You?" asked Tanveer shockingly.

"Yaa, its me Zoya Ahmed Khan," replied Zoya wid a smirk.

She was shocked by Zoya addressing herself as 'Zoya Ahmed Khan' instead of 'Zoya Farooqui'. She kept lukn @ her shockingly while Zoya smirked @ her.

Precap: #Zoya grabs Tanveer's jaws tightly n tells her dat she did a big mistake to mess wid her n she sud not hv came to Bhopal 4m Kanpur. Tanveer is very scared.

#Kajal sends Imraan a MMS of him, Tanveer n Haseena planning @ d godown wid a 'Private Numbar'. She texts under d MMS to give her 2 crore or dis video vl be forwarded to all d members of Nikhat's family. Imraan gets scared on seeing the MMS n the text.

#Zoya receives a parcel gift in her cabin brought by d peon. It was 4m Asad. She opens d gift to find a green saree wid a golden halter neck blouse. It had a note saying dat she sud meet him for dinner date @ a hotel wearing dis saree. Zoya smiles getn very happy wid Asad's gift.


Asad's gift for Zoya


#Asad waits for Zoya @ d hotel in a black suit. Zoya arrives in d green saree given by him. Asad gets mesmerized by her. They even dance on d song 'Be Intehaan'.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful update. Asya r eating together and and chatting with each other. Asad said that he was hurt when zoya said him to marry tanveer. Zoya told him everything and said that its all a drama and she always stay around him as mystry woman or zoya. Asad want to c the whole house. And zoya showed him. Asad was amazed to c there r so many secret rooms in the house. He want to do romance in the secret room. Asad told ayan that he and zoya loved each other. Asya also told dilnaj everything. All r happy. Love the way kajal beating billi. Dont want to say any thing about humeira and nuzhat. Glad that ayan shut them up. Loved the update
Edited by RAJLUVASYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for the pm!
awesome update
loved it
Zoya's house and secret passages šŸ˜†
aww asad ko basement mein romance karne ka mood šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜†
continue soonish soon
Edited by parakshi - 11 years ago

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