BEING VULNERABLE:TWO SHOTS(based on the current track)(PART 3 UPDATED)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This story is for my upset SANDHIR fans. I will try to make u a bit cheerful with my story. Please read it once. (This part is not having any sandhir scene)
PART1:- PAGE 1
PART2:- PAGE 3
PART3:- PAGE 5

PART 1
Sanyu was drowning in the water tank. She was tired of calling for help for almost half an hour. She gave up and was sinking in the water, just then Parth was passing by he saw a cycle on which Sanyu was working, he went there to see the progress in her task. After checking the cycle he was searching for Sanyu, he saw her sandle lying near the water tank. He thought
"Sanyukta ki sandal yaha tank ke paas kya kar rahi hai, aur Sanyukta kaha gayi...??? "
He looks at the water tank
"Kahi iss tank mai to nahi. Nahi nahi, Sanyukta tank ke andar kyu jayegi. Aur tank bhi locked hai"
Parth was calling Sanyu, to check if she is ok, but Sanyu forgot her bag in mech lab and cell was on silent. Parth thought to check the tank once. He climbed up the ladder and opened the lid just to see sinking Sanyu. Parth got her out of the tank and laid her on nearby bench
PARTH:- Sanyukta, aankhe kholo, come on Sanyukta open your eyes
Parth was rubbing her palm, pressing her stomach to spill the water, rubbing her foot. Sanyukta wasn't opening her eyes. He immediately took her to medical room. Doctor was attending her and said Parth to stay away for sometime as she needs to check Sanyu
Randhir was going to mech lab just then he heard Yoyo saying
YOYO:- Pata nahi Sanyukta ko tanki mai kisne band kiya aur Sanyukta ko bhi kya jarurat thi tanki mai jaane ki, wo to aacha hua Parth bhai time pe aa gaye aur Sanyukta ko bacha liya
Randhir came towards yoyo and asked whats the matter. Yoyo told him everything. Randhir was very worried and was running towards medical room.
Vidushi also overhears the convo and mentally slaps herself for forgetting Sanyukta inside the tank.
Meanwhile in medical room Sanyu came back to her conscious state and saw Parth in front of her
PARTH:- Thank you, thank you so much doc
DOCTOR:- Its ok (looking at Sanyu) What were you doing in water tank...???
SANYU:- Wo mai apne task ki preparation kar rahi thi, to kuch check karne ke liye aandar chali gayi aur lid upar se lock ho gaya.
DOCTOR:- Ok, take care of yourself, henceforth (and leaves)
Parth comes and sits beside Sanyu's bed
PARTH:- Pagal ho kya tum, agar tumhe andar jaana hi tha to pehle mujhe bula lena chahye tha, phir ye musibat nahi hoti.
SANYU:- Parth, kuch nahi hua. Ab mai thik huna, bas
PARTH:- Par lid upar se band hui kaise, ya fir kisine jaan buj ke band ki. Par kon karega aisa
SANYU:- RANDHIR
PARTH:- Kya..??
SANYU:- Ha Parth, Randhir, ussine kiya hai. Pata hai parth, jab uska code crack karne hi wali thi mai tabhi usne mujhe ek store room mai lock kiya aur pure clg ki walls paint kar di wapis aur wo code mita diya. M damn sure yeh ussine kiya hai
PARTH:- Dekho Sanyukta, yeh tum bohot bada illzam laga rahi ho uss par. Randhir utna bura nahi hai, wo aisa kabhi nahi karega
SANYU:- Parth, tum aache ho iska matlab yeh nahi ki sab aache hai
Randhir was heading towards medical room. In mind he was cursing Sanyu
"Stupid girl, kya jarurat thi usse tank mai jaane ki, aur agar jaana hi tha, to pehle kisiko bula leti aur phir chali jaati andar. Ohho Sanyukta, i hope you are safe"
He reached medical room and saw Sanyu on bed and Parth sitting beside her
RANDHIR:- WHAT THE HELL SANYUKTA...!!!!!!! ARE YOU STUPID, KYA JARURAT THI ANDAR JAANE KI
SANYU:- Wow, ulta chor kotwal ko daante. See who is talking now
RANDHIR:- What you mean...????
Till then Vidushi peeps inside the medical room to check whether Sanyukta is fine
SANYU:- Dont try to act innocent Randhir, i know yeh gandi harkat tumne hi ki hai
RANDHIR:- WHAT...!!!!!! What have i done...????
SANYU:- Kitna jhoot bologe Randhir, ok fine mai hi batati hu. Tumne hi tank ki lid band ki even after knowing ki mai tank ke andar hu and tumne hi paani chalu kiya aur mujhe uss halat mai chodke chale gaye.
RANDHIR:- WHAT...!! Have you lost it Sanyukta, mai kyu karunga yeh sab
Vidushi thinks
"Wow, mene sab kiya par Sanyukta ko mere upar bilkul bhi shak nahi hua, bichara Randhir avehi phas gaya, mujhe kya mai to chut gayi na, bas"
smirks and leaves the medical room
SANYU:- Y not ha, y not. Pehle bhi tumne mujhe store room mai band kiya tha, to abhi kyu nahi
RANDHIR:- Par Sa..!! (interrupted by Sanyu)
SANYU:- Mujhe laga tum jaise bhi ho sirf bahar se ho, from inside you are very nice but u prooved me wrong today Randhir, i wasn't knowing ki tum itna niche gir sakte ho. You must have planned ki Sanyukta ko tank ke andar band kar deta hu, kisiko pata bhi nahi chalega aur tumne paani bhi jaan buj ke start kiya taaki mai tumhare raste se hat jau bcoz m the only one jisse tum darte ho, jo tumhe compete kar sake. And agar mai chali gayi to eventually tum jeet jaoge and mai hamesha ke liye haar jaungi. I wasn't expecting this from you Randhir, you are such a JERK
PARTH:- Sanyukta shaant, plzz
Randhir was very shock after hearing so bad about him from her. He was deeply hurt by her harsh words for him. Hw didn't answered her back and quitely left the medical room with pain in his eyes. He straight away went to his room. While going to his room, constantly Randhir was remembering her harsh words and was getting hurt more and more. He just went to his room and tried to sleep
IN MEDICAL ROOM
PARTH:- Sanyukta, ye sab kya hai.
SANYU:- He deserves that Parth, and ha ab tum uski side mat lo, chalo hame abhi hame project work bhi karna hai. Chalo
PARTH:- Nahi Sanyukta, abhi tum rest karne jaogi
SANYUKTA:- Par Parth
PARTH:- No par, no Var. Chalo
SANYUKTA:- Ok
They both went to there hostel
Parth was on his way to his room, thought
"Sanyukta ne aaj jo kiya, aacha nahi kiya, usne Randhir ki baat tak nahi suni aur Randhir ne kuch bola bhi nahi. Mujhe Randhir se baat karni padegi"
He goes to his room. Randhir sees Parth cmg and pretends to sleep as he was not wanting to talk on the topic which happened a few minutes ago. Seeing Randhir sleeping Parth thought to talk to him tomorrow.
Plzz plzz plzzz, dont throw tomatoes and chappals on me, i know i have promised you to cheer a bit in this sad atmosphere, but bcoz of this part tum log aur jyada sad ho gaye ho. But i cant help it, this part was necesarry for my next part. And next part i definitely promise u with SANDHIR scenes and may be you will be happy after reading my next part. Till then again M SORRY for making u sad again.
But plzz tell me na how was it...????
Edited by --FaRziMcP-- - 10 years ago

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..Mellifluous.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
res
unres,,,
actually i was expecting this in d serial..
u came wid d idea here...
u penned it beautifully...
sanyu arhh this is heights...
well she shld ask for his sry...
she cant blame sowmone...gosh!!
am eagerly waiting for next chappy.
thanks for d pm!
love,harika
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago
Sheron18rockerz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U should surely continue and in next plz make sure that "sanyu rd ki maafi ke liye papad zarur belle" aur "vidhushi ko apni galti ki saza mile"

It was grt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear,

Omg...;. poor Randhir... how can she thought like dat... my sweetheart he is in so much pain... yaar... pls continue soon and hope Sanyu will realize dats its not Randhir and even Randhir and Parth will search for the Culprit devil Vidhushi...

thanks for the pm and jaldi update karo na... waiting...

Love,
Mickey
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear.. Amazing.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pls pls next wala bhi aj hi update karna...and pls pm me...plsss
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...
Plz pm wen u update...
Will be waiting...
Update next part ASAP...

Love
Ayesha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i wish to throw chappal on sanyukta .
i really feel bad for randhir
just superb and fantastic do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing poor randhir plz upload next soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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uff ye sanyu humare hero ko kab samjhegi??
Waitng 4 next part
do pm me wen u update

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