BEING VULNERABLE:TWO SHOTS(based on the current track)(PART 3 UPDATED) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Ress..
Unressed...😃

Lovee 🤗nice update...👏 Loved it😃
Very well written...👏
Sanyu misunderstood randhir..😲.Bechara randhir...
I know am late... shorry... 😛
Thanks 4 d pm...waiting 4 d next update...😃
Keep writing more...😃

With love ❤️
Karthika😊
Edited by DEVU46 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
wow amazing update
can't wait to see what happens in the next part
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i wanted some like this to happen i the serial...
so sad of randhir
when it comes to sanyu all the members of FITE r great people & parth is god except randhir who is always a jerk 4 her...even if he helps her only he is at fault
i hate this character of sanyu
loved 1st part
awesome upt
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you soo much guyzz, i felt good that you loved my 1st part. So here I m with the next part
PART 2

Parth woke up early in the morning, he decided to talk to Randhir as soon as possible. He saw, Randhir was not there on his bed. He thought

"Randhir subah subah kaha chala gaya hoga, mujhe usse dhundne hoga"

Parth quickly got ready and leaves to find Randhir. For almost 1 and half hour he searched for Randhir, in canteen, in library, in storeroom, in mech lab , near water tank everywhere, but he was no where to be found

Sanyu was going in the lab, just then she saw Parth. Sanyu called him

SANYU:- PARTH...PARTH WAIT

PARTH:- Ha bolo Sanyukta

SANYU:- Parth, kaha itni jaldi jaldi mai jaa rahe ho aur itna pasina kyu aa raha hai tumhe

PARTH:- Sanyukta, Randhir subah se pata nahi kaha hai

SANYU:- Randhir...?? par tum usse kyu dhundh rahe ho, wo kahi bhi rahe kya farak padta hai

PARTH:- Sanyukta itni bhi stone hearted mat bano, Randhir subah se gayab hai, 2 hours ho gaye wo kahi mil nahi raha hai, isn't it serious...??

This time Parth was a bit serious

SANYU:- Par Parth.. (interrupted by Parth)

PARTH:- Sanyukta (serious) kal tumne usse jo kuch bhi kaha, kya wo sahi tha...??? tumne dekha nahi wo kitna hurt ho gaya tha, usne ek baar bhi tumhe back answer nahi kiya kyu pata hai, bcoz he was deeply hurt Sanyukta. Mai hamesha tumhare saath, tumhare support mai khada rehta hu, par kal tumne jo kiya wo bohot galat kiya.

Saying this he left behind a shocking Sanyu. She was thinking again and again thinking of Parth's words and was confused as to why is he taking Randhir's side. She was on the ground were the incident occured. She saw a wall scribbled with the same equational language which Randhir had scribbled on the wall of the whole clg. She thought

"Randhir iss wall ko paint karna to bhul hi gaya. Thank you Randhir, M gonna expose you now"

She was having calculator and some book with her. She immediately sat down and started solving it. After about 15 min she decoded the code and was shocked to read what Randhir had written about her

"I don't know why I keep thinking of you Sanyukta. I hate you, I cannot fall in love with you. Just leave me alone Sanyukta, leave me alone"

Sanyu just sat over there and kept thinking again and again of Parth's words:-

"Usne tumhe back ans nahi kiya, kyu pata hai, bcoz he was deeply hurt"
"Mai hamesha tumhare saath, tumhare support mai khada rehta hu, par kal tumne jo kiya wo bohot galat kiya"

Sanyu had a flashback of Randhir's shocked and hurt face, Randhir leaving quitely from medical room with pain in his eyes. Sanyu realized what she had done and thinks

"Randhir mere bare mai aisa sochta hai...??? Ohho god mene ye kya kar diya. Mujhe usse sorry bolna hoga, bina soche samje mene usse bohot kuch bol diya. Jara soch Sanyu, Randhir aisa kyu karega, mana ki wo MCP hai lekin wo aisa nahi kar sakta. I have to find him."

Saying this she went in search of Randhir

Randhir was with some peons interrogating with them, he asked them which who was having the responsibility to fill the water tank. One peon said, it was Santosh's duty. Randhir was searching for him, he was near Prof. Rao's cabin

RANDHIR:- Listen, water tank mai paani bharne ki duty apki hai kya...???

SANTOSH:- Ha meri duty hai wo, kyu...???

RANDHIR:- Kal bhi aap hi ne paani bhara tha na...???

SANTOSH:- Ha

RANDHIR:-Kal aap pani bharne gaye the to water tank ke waha Sanyukta thi...???

SANTOSH:- Nahi, wo to nahi thi par ha Vidushi thi. Mene unse kaha ki unhe administration office mai bulaya hai

RANDHIR:- Vidusha ha(in mind)... Ok thik hai thanks

Randhir was madly searching for Vidushi, he was controlling his anger which was boiling at every passing second. Randhir searches her in canteen, library, room, lab etc.
Here Sanyu was searching for him for almost half an hour. Randhir was passing by the corridor, Sanyu saw him. She tried to call him but in vain. Randhir was so angry that he wasn't able to hear anyone's voice. Randhir was finaaly going on the spot were the incident occured. To his luck and Vidushi's bad luck, Vidushi was there. Randhir wet upto her and grabbed her hand with force.

VIDUSHI:- WHAT THE HELL...!!!!!!!!! Just leave my hand, m not Sanyukta

RANDHIR:- JUST SHUT UP VIDUSHI, MUJHE AUR GUSSA MAT DILAO

Sanyu reached the spot and was surprised to see Randhir shouting on Vidushi

VIDUSHI:- Mene kya kiya..??

RANDHIR:- Tumne kya kiya yeh tumhe hi nahi pata, Vidushi

VIDUSHI:- What do you mean, tum kya bol rahe ho, mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai

Randhir tightened his grip on Vidushi

VIDUSHI:- Oouch Randhir, leave me, its paining (due to pain her eyes were filled with tears)

RANDHIR:- Just blurt it out Vidushi, you did it or not...??

Till now his eyes had became red with anger. Vidushi was now very scared looking at Randhir

RANDHIR:- SPEAK UP VIDUSHI...!!!!!!!!! (He shouted at the top of his voice)

VIDUSHI:- Ha mene hi kiya hai, I want to teach Sanyukta a lesson. Usne mera mazak bana ke rakha hai, clg mai sab log ab mujhe nappy nappy karke chidate hai, mai bhi usse wahi humiliation feel karwana chahti thi. Par trust me Randhir, mai bas usse 10 min andar band karke phir kholne wali thi, mene pani nahi chalu kiya, aur itna usse hurt karne ka bhi mera koi intension nahi tha. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki itna bada serious matter ho jayega. M sorry Randhir (said in between sobs)

Randhir's anger till now had reached to his peak. Sanyu sensed that the situation can get worse if she doesn't step in between.

RANDHIR:- VIDUSHI...!!!!!!!! I WILL MAKE SURE THAT YOU ARE RESTIGATED FROM THE CLG.

Sanyu comes in between

SANYU:- Chodo Randhir just leave her.

Randhir wasn't leaving Vidushi at any cost

SANYU:-Randhir please, leave her. Chodo usse please Randhir

Seeing Sanyu pleading, Randhir leaves her and she runs away from there crying.

Sorry guyz, this is not a last part, there is one more part. I hoped you like it. Thanks for reading.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Yah me first plz continue...plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
great yaar she realized... good pls update soon the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
chalo atleast sanyu ko thodi akal toh aai nd vidushi seriously deserves 2 b expelled
waitng eagerly 4 d nxttt
thnx 4 d pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
hey it was nce but y so small yaar ???? update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
it was nce but small😛
Edited by vinti_dali96 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
awesome.. Love it.. Mu is sorted.. Thanks for pm..

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