PaRud OS: Coalescence *Based On Promo* - Page 5

You have beautifully depicted the Difference of emotions felt by Rudra towards both the women.

And You know while reading the emotions were flowing in my mind as the scene is playing out before me.

Amazing Write up...👏

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

Arre Vaishu, this was fantastic! I loved the sneak peek inside Rudra's mind and heart! You portrayed the difference between Paro and Laila beautifully.

Brilliantly written hon! < 3

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..

Simply amazing

Originally posted by: binimoti

Brilliant OS. You wove feelings of Rudra very beautifully. It was a process and I loved it.

Originally posted by: aishu3003

wowwieee🤗

vaisuuu🤗

simplyy fabbb❤️

loveeddd how u described d feelings of rudra😳

amazinggg write-up👍🏼

thankoozz for d pm anky dii😊

Originally posted by: farana786

wow amaxingly written
what a beautifull os dear.
really enjoyed reading it

Originally posted by: Bharati27

You have beautifully depicted the Difference of emotions felt by Rudra towards both the women.

And You know while reading the emotions were flowing in my mind as the scene is playing out before me.

Amazing Write up...👏

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

Now this was new to me! 😆

And surprisingly, I didn't feel ignorant at all! You wrote it so well! It didn't take long to understand the situation where Rudra was seeing two ladies of his life dancing in front of him! I realized that unfamiliar has its own charm!😳

You wrote Paro and Laila in Rudra's milieu very well! How these two girls have loved him and how differently yet similarly!

I totally loved it how you showed him fearing about loosing control! It's like soft dismissal! 😳

umm! I can go on telling your own points to you like a revision! 😆 So I better shut up! 😛

in short, It was some awesome stuff! I totally loved it! :* Well done papi pants! :*

Originally posted by: sirivalli.t

Beautiful os dear...!!!!

loved it..!!!!