Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes I:Thread II Link on Pg 146 - Page 81

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

awesome update dear !!
loved it !!!!
so zoya finally realised akram's true intentions !!
godh man !! the whole car incident was really hillarious !
i never thought i'll say this but still ! poor tanveer !
i'm glad she's coping well !
fabulous update !
do continue soon :)

Originally posted by: p_s05

"Mere paas pepper spray hain...Wait, main kyon paidal chaloon? Car start karo, verna tum pe pepper spray use karke is highway pe chhod ke chali jaoongi aur main aisa karne se ek baar bhi nahi sochugi.""

""One more word...and you would be out of car." Zoya raised her finger and spoke emphasizing each word. Akram looked back at the road dejected."

"Sunroof bandh karo." He did.

"AC kam karo." He did.

Feisty Zoya! 😎

""Stupid...stupid...stupid...How can I have been so wrong? Akram was interested in me. Me? Zoya Farooqui? That buffoon!" She was again angry. She remembered Anwar's words and hid her face in her palms.

"Jeeju saw it in one meeting and I was so busy matchmaking that I didn't see it coming at all. Allah...ye kya ho raha hain." As she thought of one Khan brother, another Khan brother came to her mind. She slowly took her hands away from her face and looked at her reflection in the mirror. "You will regret." Asad had said. He was so right. And, he had been right about the kind of man Akram was! He had judged the man long before she had and judged him well. Oh...what a fool she was!"

And realization dawns!

"Next chapter - much awaited son and precious niece arrives."

😵 😆

Lovely chapter! ⭐️

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

Ah zoya i knew u would regret it but definitely was not expecting Akram to propose!!! oopss!😵

Asad would have definitely told her- "I told u so!" LOL!

waiting for her conversation with Asad...👍🏼

beautifully written update dr!

Originally posted by: anopama

nice update
so zoya got her reality check
akram burst the bubble she is in 😊
really u now figure asad is right how
many times will u realizes asad is always right
she doesnt like that she doesnt like not getting her own way
asad is so in love with her but I just guess he is scared
so she went to mumbia with tanveer and promise no more
matchmaking
finally
continue soon

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

awesome update dear...
and vd akrams proposal our zoya gets some senses...
i loved the way zoya reacted to akram...
she is so sad n sorry for tanveer...
specially bcz she is the reason for that ..
she doesnt evn talk to asad n leaves vd tanveer to mumbai...
so declared no more match making...i hope she stands to it...lol
she is feeling alone n wants to talk to asad...
continue soon

Originally posted by: swapno

Wow wow wow...

I am really enjoying the updates...

I read Emma before but Emma version of Zoya is really a treat to read.

She was heart broken when realized what had she done...

Awww...that was really heart touching...

So Akram is out...but more things are coming...😉

be prepare Zoya begum...😆

Congrats you are now Dazzler...🤗

Thank you so much...

Wonderful update...👏

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 6...

The whole fight to get ready for the baby was fun...

rushing .. entertainment...

Zoya and asad... for got about their argument

and their welcome Zeenat Jr.

res

Res 😊

Ayaan 😆🤪

Perfect update. I really like it how Dilshad and him started off on a good understanding, the part where Dilshad insists on Ayaan cooking kheer was sweet. His entry in the story is really well written, refreshing. So Zoe finally meets the chor, 😉 oops Ayaan. Subah ke 9:00 baje bhi chori ho sakti hai, depends kya chori karna hai. 😆 So they do get along really well. Most of it is the excitement of meeting someone you have been hearing about for a while. Surprises are mixed packages, this one turned out to be a mixed one for AsYa too.

They did get to the point of acknowledging Akram fiasco. Asad made an effort that was obvious to both him and Zoe. They know. I like that, how they know. 😳

Dinner at Samarkand? The needling feeling has kinda started to irk Mr Khan? What can it be? The restaurant? The middle of week? Status reports? Surprises? Zoe finally meeting Ayaan? Or all of it? 😈

This part, absolutely lovely, their conversation with reference to dinner, it is perfect. ⭐️

Tanveer is finding harder to be convinced that she is not in love anymore? 😛 It is usually tougher to fall out of love.

Asad was reluctant for this dinner, and there is an undercurrent beginning, with Ayaan around, hopefully he will overcome this reluctance when it's needed.

Noe I must say you write Asad's character so well, the understanding, his actions and reactions, his thoughts, every minute detail, it is absolutely brilliant. Zoe and Ayaan were awesome in this chapter, but this man doesn't have to say a lot or do a lot and he is still all pervasive, the context of Asad is so strong always, and you write this and everything else so perfectly. It's a joy to read all the characters we fell in love with, in your stories, just the way it should be.

Shireen and Humeria next? Bring it on...soonish please. 😳