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Hey all.. Well, am back with another short story .. and without much talks.. Lets have a look at the chrs ...of A Compromised Relation (ACR)

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CHARACTER SKETCH

Geet- 23 years old. A typical Village girl, belonging to conservative family... Just got hold of her dreams and with lots of pressures putting on her parents ... She went to pursue her dreams ...came out from her village life towards the city of dreams..Mumbai...

Maan- 25 years old, a shy guy.. Belonging to conservative family.. His parents died when he was kid..Just have an uncle in the name of elder. having High hopes for his own carrier... trying to complete his Business studies as well as doing a part time job in a reputed Detective agency... Got trained in that and now he is detective cum officer in this field... guiding and ordering his sub-ordinates...

yash- 25 years old ... Geet's brother... He is Maan's assistant in that agency .. and a very good/ close friend of Maan...

Meera- 24 years old.. Maan's friend... she left her home back at village so to live her life as per her own wishes... and met Yash fell in love with him and got married to him...when in actual she was to marry Maan...Her father and Maan's father, were friends and they fixed their alliance in childhood...

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PART 1

Geet entered her village premises after 3 years .. Back then, she was just 20 years old when she left her village for study purpose... and then due to her parents wishes, she never went back at her home... Even when her father died, her bro came there but her father took promise on his death bad from Yash to not to let Geet come here in this village ever... Her father knew, once she will be here she will not be allowed by the oldies of the village to go back.. and so for her happiness he made her part from her own family...
Geet had later come to know after like a year abt her father's demise and since then she never talked or contacted her bro.. she kinda felt hatred and betrayed by her own brother...

And today, when her mother called her home urgently .. she rushed back to her home...scared for her mother's well being...

Entering her home... she recalled her childhood memories .. .with her bro...and her parents ... she smiled and moved ahead to see her mother.. who was faintly smiling at her ...

Geet (ran and hugged her mom like a small child):- Mama... I missed you so much... How are you??? (She scanned her mother) was afraid ... your voice was shaky and I thought you were in trouble ...

A man ( in 40s from behind said):- she is not .. But you are ... going to be..

Geet (turned and looked at the man):- who are you??? and what do you mean by that ??? (Geet looked at her mom, who was looking down shedding tears)mama ????

Mr singh:- Am Sarpanch of this village...

Geet(looked at him in confusion):- so???

Mr singh:- And I have taken a decision...

Geet:- what decision???

Before Mr singh could say more... someone interrupted ... Gupta... father of Meera...

Gupta:- you will know soon.. He looked at both Geet and her mother in anger and went out .. followed by Mr singh... while Geet tried to ask her mother... who was helpless to speak a word even...

Geet tried to go from there but as soon as Gupta and Mr singh left, few men came in and dragged her to a room and then locked the door... Geet's screams went unnoticed even by her own mother as she was afraid they might harm her daughter more... so she just waited for the MAN to come and marry her daughter... as this was the only solution... to the prob Her son had put them both...

But she too was unaware of the thinking of those oldie ppl... of her village.. what they were planning .. what they were telling and then what they were to do in actual... with Geet...

After 3 hrs...

Maan reached his village...angry as to why his uncle was calling him ... there ... that too urgently... He entered his uncle's home and his uncle smilingly went and hugged him...after some talks here and there Maan came to the point...

Maan:- what uncle ??? why you called me here????

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Different ...ab Maan Geet ko kuch hone ne dekh saktha na...

ab what has Yash done that Geet is getting punished... n if Yash is working under Maan ... what will happen when Geet knows it

yaar this seems to be a mix of MLS...FROL...RM ... aur kuch hai kya 😉

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