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HappilyLost

@HappilyLost

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Ok so grey took my heart away!!( rhyming see??😆😆)

They say that there is no white, and there is no black either! Human emotions and psychology whirl around this shade: gray. So can't blame Rudra for his colour choice.

I loved how he described Paro with a multitude of colours and himself as a dull boring grey, one who was lucky enough to have her.

And that thought, anout getting a child bride because Paro can be too innocent was damn funny.😉
Ah yes the kiss, unexpected yet perfectly fitting. I love how this is shaping up with amazing directions to a pallet of nothing but ordinary colours. You have great imagination Ankita baisa! Bravo!!

I can't help but think that there are only two left. Please make them long Baisa, that's a heartfelt desire ⭐️ Hope you will consider that!

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Aww such a cute piece of drabble

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Rudra and grey...matches his persona..

A mix of good and bad. And the good in them was wearing off each passing day of his existence.

^this is the line that perfectly captures what Rudra is..sort of a cynic..believing that people are grey..yet that they tend towards the darker side even then...loved how he realizes the changes Paro brought in his life...

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Anita

@neet2407

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

who thought that grey could be such an exciting colour!

another lovely drabble - I am going to miss this series already even though it hasn't ended yet!

The colour maybe grey but Rudra's love shines through in this and of course Paro's cuteness, and I love the colours of love (Rangrasiya!) reference where he thinks of her as every colour you have already mentioned

The last lines of course are the cutest - of course Paro doesn't think grey is a colour! ( my Hindi is improving too - I didn't have to use google translate as much to work out the Hindi bits woohoo!)

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

I gotta read the rest before I come back with a comment!!!!

Thanks for the PM...

Green and jealousy go hand in hand...

Laila was sure to be jealous of Paro 'cause she is the one took away Laila's Rudra, turned him into a reasonable human being and broke into their 8 years of "togetherness" (if it can be called that!!!)

Very true... "She wanted her devil back to play with the monsters in her head." Extreme obsession at its heights...!!! 😆

Blue and skies... Heavenly!!!!!

Hah, the poor guy had spent so much time being alone and a wanderer on those vast desert sands, he would be tricked into believing that whatever has happened since Paro landed in his world, would be a mirage...

He is lost for reason... "Maybe he was in some deep slumber, or Coma from a war, and his mind was dreaming about the existence of a woman so beautiful, divine and perfect like her."

Orange and fire...

Fire can destroy you, but here Paro has healed from much of her childhood trauma of fires... This one was a sweet one... Felt good reading about a day about the couple, somewhere in the near future... As they say, all's well that ends well... They have moved past their initial misunderstandings and that what matters... Moving on, you just can;t hold onto your past pains and troubles!!!

"Instead, she reminisced about another scene, which was so far way, it almost seemed like another birth."

Yellow and sun... Or to say anything that glows so bright that you are either burnt in its flames or you are nurtured by its heat...

And Paro is the flower to this glowing, burning sun called Rudra... She is so enveloped in his warmth and embrace that she blooms like the sunflower, glows like anything!!!!

What caught my eye were these lines: "So what if the heat was unbearable a few times?

Some fires were worth burning in. " Perfect for Paro!!!

Edited by shutter - 11 years ago

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

It was so cute when he thought of her as a child bride :*
And the color grey defines Rudra !!
This Drabble has a depth I loved to read !!

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Third res??

You write faster than i can comment..

Unres...

The first few sentences were brilliant!!

I could totally imagine Rudra looking at her in shock and exasperation, as she asks him such questions!! Balika vadhu 😆

And also could visualize how his expression would soften...kinda like the way he shook his head and smiled in yesterday's episode...when she bade him goodbye...

Loved how he thinks of her like this wild palette of colours, comprising of every bright and warm shade imaginable...signifies how she brightens and colours his otherwise dull and bleak life...

He sees people as gray...more significantly, darker shades of grey...pessimistic view...

And she...innocent, simple, straightforward person that she is...doesn't like to deal with all this ambiguous business...

Give me black or white, she says...

And he knows her, understand her so well...he is not surprised by her answer..

It is this innate, guileless forthrightness of hers that he loves...

So this is where you deviated from vibgyor...

It's lovely...after all rainbows and dark grey clouds go hand in hand...

Much love

Maya

Edited by What_the - 11 years ago

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
Got its...
apan donon kinne velle hai nah.. 😆

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See I was just about to say.. reading the line that Rudra doesn't strike me as a grey person...

hear me out...

he has such a ruthless.. brute personality.. aura.. *i swear... i have started to abhor the semblance, ruthless and control.. after writing it so many times.. help me to find new words.*

so i always believed that he his more of black and white person..

and then paro.. apart from the multicolor personality she possess.. *in seedha sense.. not in ganda sense* i always believed her to actually see people in grey..

Okay no i am writing then i am reminded of our profound MerDer... but still.. this thing kind of makes sense to me..

I know I am just flipping the entire thing of the OS.. but u get me..

Its because... Paro is such a sweet soul.. that she would actually try to see good out of eevry bad thing.. she will try to analyze.. before passing statement.. i know tejawat incident opposes it.. lekin you get me nah? she tries to see good..

as for rudra... u pointed out he was shifting to darker shades.. agreed.. but then.. he sees everything through only one pane.. and if one passes that test.. good... nhi toh not good.. so that way..

but these are my feelings then..

See How well you can write fluff.. its such a cutsu wutsu piece.. when u expect it to be all dark and twisted owing to the color grey.. Awesome...

I unresd.. You forced me to.. through your write up... :* *this is the reason that u get excluded from we... :P*

And i just love how you end your OS's with a moment.. Canon.. a beautiful canon..

amazing.. :D

Toh jaisa ki tune mujhe subah phone pe bola. I am going to be completely superficial and love the length of the comment instead of brooding over the fact that how you just completely negated the whole drabble and called it OOC.

i don't suggest new words. Ittu si meri khud ki dictionary.. Teko de dia toh bachega kya?

Matlab you think that he sees either black or white?? Beta iss pe mai bilkul bhi agree nahi kar sakti.. andar se aatma tadap rahi hai.. ispe argue karne ke liye! 😛

I know you said multicolor in seedha sense. 😆

How the hell did you go to MerDer?? Okay, Derek I understand. He sees things as Black or White.. But Mer?? And colorful??

YOU. ARE.

YOU ARE FLIPPING THE WHOLE DRABBLE.

par wohi toh.. Paro sees good as entirely good. Matlab insaan accha hai toh poora accha hai.. Aur bura hai toh jallad hai..

Rudra's personality was like an eye opener to her.. Ki ek insaan mei shades ho sakte hai.. Par I think he is her exception. Like she is his.

And yeah, he does see everything through one pane.. And that pane isn't black. its grey. Cuz, Baapu-sa, kaaku-sa, Aman.. and his other military brothers.. Unko nahi toh kis pane se dekhta?

I know right! I am so ashamed. Mai aisa intensely likh rahi thi.. Aur meko naa aisa dhyaan hi nai raha ki 200 words ho gaye.. I told this to KD too.. Jaise HI mei nahi hota.. Waisa iss drabble mei hua.. Kya socha tha, kya nikal aaya.. Sharam aati hai jab aisa hota hai..

I don't get excluded from WE. Bas.

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Toh jaisa ki tune mujhe subah phone pe bola. I am going to be completely superficial and love the length of the comment instead of brooding over the fact that how you just completely negated the whole drabble and called it OOC.

i don't suggest new words. Ittu si meri khud ki dictionary.. Teko de dia toh bachega kya?

Matlab you think that he sees either black or white?? Beta iss pe mai bilkul bhi agree nahi kar sakti.. andar se aatma tadap rahi hai.. ispe argue karne ke liye! 😛

I know you said multicolor in seedha sense. 😆

How the hell did you go to MerDer?? Okay, Derek I understand. He sees things as Black or White.. But Mer?? And colorful??

YOU. ARE.

YOU ARE FLIPPING THE WHOLE DRABBLE.

par wohi toh.. Paro sees good as entirely good. Matlab insaan accha hai toh poora accha hai.. Aur bura hai toh jallad hai..

Rudra's personality was like an eye opener to her.. Ki ek insaan mei shades ho sakte hai.. Par I think he is her exception. Like she is his.

And yeah, he does see everything through one pane.. And that pane isn't black. its grey. Cuz, Baapu-sa, kaaku-sa, Aman.. and his other military brothers.. Unko nahi toh kis pane se dekhta?

I know right! I am so ashamed. Mai aisa intensely likh rahi thi.. Aur meko naa aisa dhyaan hi nai raha ki 200 words ho gaye.. I told this to KD too.. Jaise HI mei nahi hota.. Waisa iss drabble mei hua.. Kya socha tha, kya nikal aaya.. Sharam aati hai jab aisa hota hai..

I don't get excluded from WE. Bas.

These are like epic facepalm moments..

And moreover I toh accepted ki I am flipping the whole drabble.. And am happy and ashamed about it at the same time

How could you not see that I was contradicting my own arguments in my own comment... I mention Mer for Grey.. and Der for B&W..

Its weird.. You know you are trying to convince me how much you are right... Jabki I am getting convinced how much I am right...

And the basest weird things... I can make all arguments to support my arguments... but examples support nhi hota.. coz Grey characters ka nature is shaant... B&W wale are chirpy and that makes difference in a way...

You say Rudra ka character revelation proved that he can have many shades... But.. there's a but... Paro didn't know at that time nah.. ki Rudra was right.. It was patti bandhna.. or color blindness since we are talking colors... coming to the blindness write that Paro OS nah... :D

haan.. Paro ki aakhon pe patti bandhi thi.. that Rudra was wrong.. But.. and but again... you cannot counter the fact with the thing how rudra was treating her when he brought her home.. he didn't give her benefit of doubt.. and that is seeing in complete black.. how does grey come in b/w...

Haaye mereko toh khoob accha lagta hai jab aisa hota hai.. kuch likhne jao kuch ho jaaye.. I want to make them cry and I make them happy... Isse I bask in the personality ki my writer brain is nice.. You should do too..

Did you notice we stand at polar ends.. like 90% of time... and still fit together perfectly.. we are yin and yang... :P

And I would just pretend that you accepted the argument.. that you are at par with all the awesomest writers out there.. I think so people making res here.. so that they can comment acche se will agree to it.. ^_^

Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago