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Frustration built up inside of her as strands of her hair continuously tried to cover her face. Finally, irritated by the disturbance they were causing her, Bhavna walked towards the dresser to acquire a rubber band that would keep her long hair out of her eyes. While searching for the rubber band on the dresser, her eyes fell on a pair of anklets that were lying on the dresser. Happiness filled up inside of her and a slight blush adorned her face as she thought about the day she had received these special pair of anklets.

-Flashback-

Drops of rain were continuously hitting the hard ground and the beauty of nature began to show its true colors. The scene that was laid out in front of the house was beauty at its finest with only a slight hint of imperfection. The monsoon weather gave a blissful feeling to Bhavna and she opened the doors to the balcony. Being careful enough to close the door behind her, Bhavna started to twirl in the rain and jump with joy. Unknown to her, Bhavna's playful antics in the rain were being closely observed by her husband, Suket. Their marriage had been an arranged one and both of them had reached a mutual decision that they would live as friends. Over time, their feelings for each other had grown something deeper than friendship but were too scared to admit it.

*Music*

Watching her enjoying in the rain, a sense of desire, that he never knew he possessed, took over Suket. Unconsciously, he started walking towards the balcony and in one swift movement, he had opened the doors. Too involved in playing in the rain, Bhavna didn't notice the approaching Suket. Seeing the drops of water on her and the clinginess of her sari, Suket's senses were loosening their grip from his mind. Suddenly, she felt hot breath projecting on her neck and she turned to see Suket looking at her with intense eyes. She shivered under his gaze and turned to go away. She felt a hand wrap around her waist and Suket pulled her to his chest.

labon ko labon pe sajaao

kya ho tum mujhe ab bataao

labon ko labon pe sajaao

kya ho tum mujhe ab bataao

Her back was facing his chest and her long hair was gently touching his face. Keeping one hand on her waist, Suket removed some hair from the left shoulder with his other hand. He started to place kisses from the tip of her shoulder to the crook of her neck. A prominent blush had adorned her face and her eyes had closed due to shyness.

tod do khud ko tum

baahon mein meri baahon mein meri baahon mein meri

baahon mein

baahon mein meri baahon mein meri baahon mein meri

baahon mein

Feeling embarrassed and shy, Bhavna quickly turned around and gave a hug to Suket. Surprised by her act, Suket stumbled back but quickly recovered and engulfed her in his arms. Burying her face in his chest, Bhavna felt happiness growing inside of her while her blush was driving Suket crazy. Slowly, he pulled her away from him and held her by the shoulders. His intense gaze was piercing through her and Bhavna looked down shyly.

*Music*

"Mein nahi janta kab se aur keh se, lekin mein sirf itna janta hoon, ke main aapse behath pyaar kartha hoon. Aap ki hassi, khushi, aasu, aur ghum se mujhe farak padta hain aur aapki bina mein jee nahi sakta. I love you, Bhavna", Suket proclaimed the love he carried inside of his heart. Shocked by his confession, Bhavna stood there silently but at last, gave the awaited reply. "I love you too" A smile played on Suket's lips and he quickly seized her into his arms.
tere ehsaason mein

bheege lamhaaton mein

mujhko duba tishnagi si hai

teri adaayon se

dilkash khataao se

in lamho mein zindagi si hai

After a while they broke the hug, and a smirk was evident on Suket's face. He brought Bhavna closer to him. Realizing what his intentions were, Bhavna's cheeks grew warm and she ran inside into their room. She stopped in the middle of the room and caught her breath, that had increased due to their earlier proximity. Suket, who had followed her inside, wrapped his hands around her waist and pulled her towards him. She linked her arms around his neck and looked down towards the ground.

haya ko jara bhool jao

meri hi tarah pesh aao

kho bhi do khud ko tum

raaton mein meri raaton mein meri raaton mein meri

raaton mein

Suket tilted her face towards him with his finger and place a kiss on her forehead. She closed her eyes at the feeling of his lips on her wet forehead. He moved down a little and kissed both her eyes, occasionally sucking some drops of water off her eyelids. Clutching the sides of her face, he placed a gentle kiss on the tip of her nose. He turned her face to the left side and placed a kiss on her right cheek, replicating the same process for the other cheek.

labon ko labon pe sajaao

kya ho tum mujhe abb bataao

He stopped to look at her and found that her eyes were closed. Taking it as a sign of approval, he gently and slowly placed his lips on her lips. The gentle kiss soon turned into a passionate one as she started to respond, after coming out of her bubble of shyness.

*Music*

Still looking in her eyes, Suket bent down and crouched on one knee, in front of her. Confused by his action, Bhavna looked at him with questioning eyes. As if sensing her confusion, Suket pulled out a pair of anklets that he had bought for Bhavna. Happiness filled up inside of her and tears formed in her eyes, seeing the love he possessed for her. He wrapped his hands around her ankle and placed it on his knee. Taking the anklet, he wrapped it around her ankle, where it shimmered with beauty. He replicated the process for her other ankle and stood up to face her.

tere jasbaaton mein

mehaki si saanso mein

ye jo mehek sandili si hai

dil ki panaaho mein

bikhari si aaho mein sone ki khaaish jagi si hai

Not being able to control his desires any longer, he picked her up in his arms and trailed towards the bed. He gently placed her down and immediately came on top of her. He placed kisses on her neck to the shoulder and removed the dupatta of her sari. Moving down, he placed kisses on her waist, occasionally biting it with desire. Feeling shy, Bhavna turned around and faced the bed, digging her face in the sea of pillows. Unfazed by her act, Suket continued his sweet torture by pulling the dori of her blouse. He placed kisses on her back and slowly turned her around to face him.

chehare se chehara chupaao sine ki dhadkan sunaao
dekh lo khud ko tum

aankhon mein meri aankhon mein meri aankhon mein meri

aankhon mein

He looked at her for a sign of approval, to take their relationship further. Sensing his question, Bhavna placed a kiss on his cheek and gave approval to him with a silent nod. Not wasting another minute, he peeled of his clothes and engulfed her in his arms. He placed a trail of kisses on her whole body and made her writhe in pain and pleasure under his sweet torture. Finally he entered into her and made her his. He quickly, placed his lips on her lips, to soothe the pain.

labon ko labon pe sajaao

kya ho tum mujhe abb bataao

Pulling her into one final kiss, he pulled the blanket over them and snuggled her close. That night they had cherished their undying love for each other.

-Flashback Ends-

The blush was still on her face but she was brought back into the present, when she heard footsteps. Knowing it was him by her quickening heartbeat, she ran to open the door of their room. He met her at the doorway and they silently hugged each other with passion and love.

Edited by -NautankiAsh- - 11 years ago

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Author's Note

The credit for the banner goes to appy di. Here is the link for the song that was portrayed in the one shot.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kRBREnYm8Oo[/YOUTUBE]

Salaam Namaste APHGians. My love for SuVana compelled me to dedicate my first one shot to them. For me, they are a very cute and sweet couple. In the one shot, I portrayed them as a young couple during the flashback sequence because I felt that I was able to connect with them more that way. If anybody was offended by this action, please accept my apologies. Onto the writing portion. This one shot contained some mature content and if you felt uncomfortable reading it, then I am truly sorry for that. I tried to keep it as minimalistic as possible with some passionate scenes. As for the storyline, this idea just popped into my head when I was listening to the song, Labon Ko. If there are any grammatical or spelling errors, please do tell me because I want to make this one shot enjoyable to read. Please hit like and comment because it encourages me to write more. Constructive criticism is always welcome and I encourage you to help me become a better writer. Thanks for reading this one shot.

Keep Smiling,

Ash

Edited by -NautankiAsh- - 11 years ago
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Open for reading, likes, and comments😳

Word for NL Game is [Birthday]
Edited by -NautankiAsh- - 11 years ago
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ash dear 🤗
thanks alot 4 writing a suvana os
first of all congo 4 the first suvana os. wud love to read more suvana os/ff/ss
the banner is so drool worthy
its raining here and ur rain sequence <3
amazing job .
awww romantic suket <3
hope cv show romantic suket also
hayeee blushing bhavna <3
amazingly written
do write more plz
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Chutki!
I'm speechless on this spectacular detailed perfectly written extremely romantic OS. ☺️👏

Every single moment I went through one sentence to other its just perfect. Truly dedicated one and professionalism at its peak!

Cant relate more writing spoilers of OS here but its superb! I.m wondering what if Suket turn up like this! 😳😆

I'm a fan of your work!😳

Please do write one for AvRaj.. This one was really very romantic with pure flowing love.. I like RomCom.. 😆

My Stars..
⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️.⭐️./5

Just one caution to readers! Not for under aged! Lol! 😆😉

See ya...

Yours,
//SammyExpress!!
Edited by Sammy11 - 11 years ago
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Its very nice..Ash..Superb..👏
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sorry dont watch this show

watch only EBP
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nice os
as a story
don't watch the show so can't relate
more over welcome back to if
write on taarey soon
miss u
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still lost in suvana dreams <3
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Wow its Amazing !!!!!
Just loved it!!!
Keep Writing 👍🏼
Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago

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