LAST NIGHT - A Drabble :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sis Saima, Zanu, Navi.
And a special mention...Gita Iyer, for asking very nicely. Hee!

Oh and all SaAhilians!

This one's for you!



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Why didn't I say anything. Do anything.


I was...shell shocked. Fearful. Leave talking, I'm quite certain I quit breathing.


And just when I was getting over my initial shock, it slowly dawned upon me what was really going on. What was going on? I'm not like this. Oh how I remember feeling helpless. So very helpless.


The removing of my dupatta. The tug on my dori. And the proximity.


My dori came undone, untied more like. And the touch on my shoulder. I shuddered even then. Forget the tears rolling down my cheeks. I was helpless.

So very helpless.


And I had to turn, was I made to..? I don't know for sure. Yes, of course. I have to face the devil.



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Y'all know what happened next.


No? Not enough? Want more?


Yeh lo..


*****

Junoon...tere ishq ka...Junoon, tere ishq ka...
Tere ishq ka, haan ishq ka, tere ishq ka...


Last night... That girl in my room. That..that was the new cook? I cannot believe my ears. Oh goodness. What have I done. She...the same one with those...those beguiling eyes. That kept me captive. Spellbound I was.


Enthralled.

Beautiful.


Oh what have I done.


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Thanks for reading!

⭐️FaRz




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Saima-Syed thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mine!!

A beautiful piece of writing...and no not being biased as it made me go and watch the episode and not only that inspired me to write a little Drabble on it too


Keep them coming Einstein

Love you lots
Edited by Saima-Syed - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PERFECT!
Well, let me come to Aahil first.

FaRz, mah dawg. Spot on.

When the realization dawned.. I loved loved loved that part.

He regretted it.
It wasn't like he would do every single girl he comes across.
At least he felt ashamed of doing things he did.

The aftermath of the Dori scene, Sanam's monologue. Wow!
You described it perfectly nigga.

WHY did she not stop him?
WHY did she not resist?

She could've pushed him away.

HOW could she let him rob her like that?

Did she want the same? Did she want him to touch her?
No.. She loathes it. She loathes his touch.
She loathes the man he is.

That scene was bitter. So very emotional.
You brought out the essence.

Why?

Coz you rawk yo!

*claps*

😎


Edited by Zanutix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is it related to qh 2 farz ?
I ddnt gt it fully but i liked the way u penned it..

Main qh nai dekhrahi..
Nd em not a sahil fan :/

nd here i m cz of i saw ur name again :*
asya pe bhi likhona..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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How did my three most favourite person got it first?


You guys stalk me?


I'm impressed!
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gowtu

Is it related to qh 2 farz ?
I ddnt gt it fully but i liked the way u penned it..

Main qh nai dekhrahi..
Nd em not a sahil fan :/

nd here i m cz of i saw ur name again :*
asya pe bhi likhona..

oh ho 2 gowtu madam qh2 nai dakhti i knw tou BI dakhti hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres

Lovely Farz, and thanks for this post - short, sweet, simple, full of emotions. It was long overdue.

Lovely insights into Saahil. While Sanam felt helpless at the time of the act (nothing happened though), Ahil felt helpless when the realisation struck.

Wonder what these both will go through when they hopelessly fall in love with each other.

And thanks for Ahil's POV. Everyone is gunning for his blood, poor guy.
Edited by GitaIyer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

oh ho 2 gowtu madam qh2 nai dakhti i knw tou BI dakhti hai



hi maha 🤗
nai woh bhi nai dekhrahi
kch acha nai lagraha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Farz! Awesome it was!
Superbly written! Bang on with all the emotions in their minds and hearts.
Loved and just loved how you described them. 😳
The last realisation part was awesome. And first part..even more. 😳
Please do write more of these..
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Farz! awesome girl 🤗 beautifully written. I just loved it. The emotions, that inner turmoil, embarrassment, shock when reality set in. Aaah just lovely. 😊
Edited by TVD-IANcrazy - 11 years ago

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