Because I love you (A Swaron one shot)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awesome ! OS. it stright forwardly touched my heart. beautifully penned and magnificently laid out ! please do PM me when u write another story :)

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: fanista
😭 😭 this is fab !
Please please please on readers request can you write a second part where all falls in place ?? 😲
pleasse 😳
i loved it 😃

Dear. I would love to. But I think I will wait for a few more comments. If there are enough people asking for further updates, I might turn this to a three shot. Glad you loved it though.

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Karishma

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ikki215
awesome ! OS. it stright forwardly touched my heart. beautifully penned and magnificently laid out ! please do PM me when u write another story :)

Glad you liked it. 😊 It is a pleasure when readers extend the courtesy to write a heartfelt comment. And I sure will.

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@Mystique.Kishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli
it was a heart-touching piece
the way you narrated the story
adding emotional touch thru thr pain
was very beautifully penned
making them inseperable
connecting them wit an invisible thread
was heart-touching
as a writing you hav an art to show
a connection b/w ur characters
do write more
looking forwrd to ur updates 😛