Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes I:Thread II Link on Pg 146 - Page 74

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

Zoya, just enjoy your stay in Mumbai, cause very soon the storm name Akram will mess up everything 😆

as usual very nice update. the beach scenes were beautiful. i didnt ever realise Mr Knightley and AAk can be so similar, wow!

update soon.




Oh...storm Akram is going to turn her world topsy-turvy. Bechari Zoya! Bechari Tanveer! And, bechara Akram, too.😆

Thank you for reading!

Asad and Mr Knightley
Edited by Noe123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

I love how Zoya and Asad balance each other in this story. Asad wants to take no risk in life and Zoya's life is all about them. Both extremes are wrong and I believe they both try and fill up for that. The scene on the beach was really well written, I found myself lost in the moment. I can't wait for the next.



Yes, they both balance each other very well. Though Asad is a lot more sorted out than Zoya.

Glad that you liked the beach scene!

Hope you like new phase of the story as well! 😊😊

Edited by Noe123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 😎

Aaahhh Zoe, Zoe, Zoe...

Finally it happened. How ridiculous it all turned out to be and kept getting worse till it was not just annoying, but took a turn towards nastiness. To be proven wrong by someone close is usually a pain, to be proven wrong by your own wise judgement is a big ouch indeed. Tto be completely blindsided on something as important this, a relationship predictor of all things. The best part of this mess is how she realizes, accepts and eventually is confronting it.

So at least the end result of this is that Tanveer has started the process to move on, Zoe understands how much pain it must have been, she is at least trying her best to mend it for now. She realizes not everyone can be generous in forgiving and forgetting, whatever faults Tanveer has, this is definitely not one of them. It is good to have Akram out of the way for now.

And Asad is probably one guy who does not go into "I told you so" mode. 😳 He must know that something is not right at all. I like how he lets her be and gives her time and space, it is rare to find that part.

Next update better be sooner than this one. 😳
Edited by notagain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update dear
Finally Zoya ke dimag ki batti jali😆
I am eager for next update
Pls update soon
I loke everything in it
I like dil_zoya bond &Asad's concern for zoya
Teri pm milne se pehle hi meine pad liyaa😃
Edited by aseelashah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mine! :)
That phone call.


Will we be privy to it?

Yeah..?


Good good!



Can't wait.



Oh my Noe! It's so horrible to see Zoya feeling all low and being all forlorn!

You write so well, even I feel bad to have been aware of her intentions! Tsk tsk!


Well, Akram being amused is a real nice touch. Confident, huh?


I'm glad she's finally come around and feel better. Hmm, the sea's effect. And a memory...


Which brings me to...I'm here. Why did it die in his tongue? Poor thing. I'm glad he didn't push her. He's smart, he'll guess what happened.


I want that phone call!!!


Okay...wish I could write more...am actually catching up on work...due tomorrow!!!!

Kbye


Mwah mwah mwah

Love ya!
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally read the 7 part!!
It was amazing!! Now I guess zoya will understand the akram part!!
I love ur asad!! He's witty !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
zoya got,it finally!!
stupid girl!!
Not much asad so itna sannata kyun tha bhai?? LoL!! 😆
Edited by A.Kh_20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Zoya understand akram after he confessed his feeling
Zoya felt guilty for hurting tanveer
Asad & anwer words replaying in her mind
She didn't speak to asad for this as well
Continue soon
Thanks

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