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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 28

dadi, sab kuch badal gaya pichale 3 saalo main sab kuch , pura ghar khander banke rahe gaya ,iss ghar ki jaan geet wo to chali gayi saath main mere bache ki smile , kushi ,life yaha tak soul bhi saath main le gayi , main yah bed pen a hil sakti hu na bath kar skti hu , adi bhi nahi hai maan ke saath jo sirf patther banke rah gaya hai , geet ke liye 6 month pehale hi waapas aa gaya lakin na usse geet mili na pari , oh god why you do this to my children when they have to happy in their life they living in hell , maan in this house and geet don't know where ...

night 11 pm in KC office he just working like robot last 6 month after his coming back to India he become only robot , emotionless Robert , just working working and working , where where he try to search them but he cant found them and upon that he even don't know reason of her going like this away from his life ...tear want to come in his eyes but he don't give them chance and lost in work , at last his mobile ring on 1 pm and he just went to home , look for dadi and went to his room without having his dinner

nakul have tear in his eyes ...it is routing of maan beta , but he cant do anything , pata nahi maan aur geet ko kiski nazar leg gayi

wo khud ek bachi hai pata nahi pari ko lake kaha chali gayi ...

In Mumbai

three and half year old girl running like tornado from her own mother who try to feed her milk ,poor girl just tired with this small devil , doodh ke naam se hi bhagna chalu ho jata hai , at last she sat on sofa and say loudly RAT if you don't come near before I count 1,2,3 you will not get your papa new letter that sit poor little soul just make face and come near that women and took milk from her hand and give angry glare to mother and drink in one go

that women want to laugh but control herself

Pari - Mrs Geet maan singh Khurana never threat me on name of my papa name an don't called me rat got it or you will have to face pari singh kh khurana got it

yes that is geet now 19 year old living in Mumbai with her little pari , her life only smle with his pari , maan ki pari living for his dream Pari , tear come in geet eyes just than door bail start to ring ...

geet weep the tear and went to open door

there smiling adi on door

yes adi is staying with geet , after that day he come with geet in Mumbai , he cant send them alone , he become her true brother in all sense , pari just hug adi and say maamu , maamu my chocolate

adi make face , first my kissi

pari just give kiss on his cheek and adi give her big chocolate geet just roll her eyes

Adi bhahia , what about my job

adi sit on sofa and say yes geet its done , you are selected as secretary of Sujal garewal , garwal company md and you have to joind on 10 may ok

geet nodded in yes , adi just cant you smile once for me

geet give fake smile which is not reaching to her eyes , she make excuse that she brought tea for him and went from their , she just reach to kitchen and just put her duppata on he mouth to stop her crying voice m she just crying maanji ...maanji in her mouth so nobody hear her , but she don't know that she cant hide it from her brother adi

adi just come in kitchen took crying geet in his hug ...geet wo aayega geet wo aayega , geet just shaking her head in no no no geet I know him better than you and trust me he will come to you one day tear come adi eyes

maan in early morning talking with anger on phone what Mumbai , what the hell , who is that second party , hu Garewal company ok make oppinment with them and took that on 10 may ok , he just cut the called

sujal garewal I am coming you have to face Maan singh Khurana , Mumbai I am coming




precap

near garewal company


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi
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please give her
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Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haha...
mai toh bass dekhne aayi thi ki mere jaane k baad kya hua...
parr ye kya... 😲
an upd 😊
me dancing...for coming firrsst...
last upd ka comment abi tak pending hai mahi 😛
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 27...
finally maan ne sabse bada kaam kar liya...telling thm abt going abroad...
bt geets reaction amused him...
y the hell ws she leaving...
bt as she opened her mouth saare confusion clr ho gaya...
sge thot its due to the moment they shared...bechara maan kais esamjhae apne emotion ki dukan ko...
n thn wht geet did ws unxpected...becahar...how to control... 😲
n nauggtty2 pari...complaining abt me...ye sab maan k pampering k karan hua...huh...
dekh lungi tumko...

part 28
new twist...
and a leap...
seedha 3 saal baad...
uss wierd kiss k baad kya hua...u did not tell...
n y did geet leave n go...?
pari is sooo cute abb toh badi b ho gayi hai...n shes daring Mrs MSK
aftrall jr. MSK jo hai...
n geet crying...fel bad for her...
poor soul..
glad ki adi moved in wid geet else wht could''ve she done...in the cruel world
16 yr old gal alone wid a kid...omggg...!!
aur maan ka b bura haal hai...obviously he's a robot without his emtion ki dukan n his life pari...
bt ur wait is ending maan...u'r heading towards ur happiness 😊
👏 for mahi...!!
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sad
what is this twist
why geet left maan
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
i'm shocked maaneet saperted pari so sweet she talk to maan way adi helping geet get job geet crying adi consoulingprecap interestingwaiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Congrats fr new thread
awsum update
love d twist
want maan to meet pari

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