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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thanks for the PM.

Kya yaar kitna accha romantic morning thi raya ki ye phone ki ghanti aur idiot Rahul beech me ghus jate hai hamesha😡

the romance part was lovely, unki romance mein kabhi teasing nhi rahegi toh wo raya nhi kehlaayenge😆😆 , and you added so much to it , i can visualize them

i loved each bit of their romance and leg pulling and hayye bechaini.

awesome part👍🏼


aw..plsr dear...bina haddi ke kam nhi chalta kya kare...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Abhi jaldi jaldi aage badhte hain..need to finish it...main ekta ki trh kahaniyo ka juice nhi nikal sakti...lol..so moving on update hope u all like it...

Part 26

ram seedha rahul ke ghar ke samne aa kar rukta h aur tezi se andr jane lagta h...tabhi uski nazar rahul pr padti h...wo ghar ke bahar hi rhta h...kisi se bat kar rha hota h...ram ata h...isse pehle ki ram pas aata wo insan wha se chala jata h...rahul ram ko dekh leta h...

Rahul...aap yha??...ap to chale gye the na...phir yha kaise aa gye??

Ram...kaise aa gya mtlb??...nhi aa sakta kya??

Rahul...nahi aisi bat nhi h...pr...ummeed nhi ki thi mne..

Ram...wo aurat kaun thi???

Rahul...excuse me??

Ram...abhi abhi jo aurat gyi yha se tum use kaise jante ho??

Rahul...this is non of ur buisness ram kapoor...apne kam se kam rakho...

Ram...how dare u talk to me like this...agr priya ko pta chala na to...

Rahul...to kya??...kuchh nhi kar sakti tumhari priya...bht yakin karti h mujhpr aur ehsan bhi manti h...bechari...hehehe

ram...tumhe main chhodunga nhi...main abhi priya ko sab btane wala hu ki tum kya karne ki koshish kar rhe ho...

Rahul...oh really...waise kya btaoge...??...kya karne wala hu main??...pta h tum btaoge to mujhe kuchh karne ki jarurat hi nhi padegi khud hi ho jayega sab...cmon...bulau main priya ko...??...bta do jo btana h...

Ram sochne lagta h ki wo waqai kya btayega priya ko qki wo janta to sach me nhi h ki ye kya karne wala h...wo to bas use darane ki koshish kar rha tha...

Rahul...kya hua??...pasine kyun chhut rhe hain??...tum kuchh kar pao ya nhi...pr main to bht kuchh kar sakta hu...waise ek bat to h tumhari biwi bht bholi h...aur khubsurat bhi...

Ram ko gussa ata h aur wo khinch ke ek thappad lagata h rahul ko tabhi priya aa jati h...

Priya...ram...ye kya kar rhe hain??...aur aap yha kab aaye???...aap to...kya ho rha h ye sab???

Rahul...yar apke pati ko pta nhi kitna gussa ata h...bat bat pr chillate hain aur aj to hadh hi kar di...main sirf apki wajah se bardasht kar leta hu

priya rahul ko dekhti h but usko abhi bhi ram ki hi tension h...

Priya...i am sorry rahul...pls pr abhi tum jao yha se...i am vry sorry...

Rahul chala jata h ram khada rhta h gusse me hi rhta h abhi bhi...priya pas aati h..

Priya...raaam...kya hua??...ok...look at me ...kya hua??...aaj subah se aap aise...kuchh to problm h...

Ram...kuchh nhi...sorry

priya...achha theek h...hum nhi karte is bare me bat..are apko pta h...main abhi ma ke yha jane wali thi...jana to rahul ke sath tha pr...khair...aap le chalenge???

Ram priya ko dekhta h smile karta h aur gale laga leta h

priya...raaam..kya hua yar???

Ram...bas ab theek h...chalo chalte hain...

Priya chali jati h ram ke sath aur rahul ko msg kar deti h...dono sharma house pahonchte hain...sabko pta to tha ki priya ane wali h pr ram ke sath ayegi ye kisi ko nhi pta tha...ram abhi bhi tension me hai...sb dono ko dekh kar bht khush hote hain...pr ram wha hote hue bhi wha nhi h...thodi der bad ram jane ke liye bolta h...to Priya use kamre me le jati h she need to talk him...

Ram...are priya late ho rha h main jata hu

priya...sshhh...pehle meri bat suniye...kya hua h???wha isliye chhod diya tha bat ko..ki socha ap thode relax ho jaye tab karenge...pr aap to continuesly irritate hi ho rhe hain ...kya hua??...raaam...boliye na..

Ram...are yar m bht disturb hu

priya...main dekh rhi hu...pr kyun???

Ram...i want u right now...m abhi tumhe ghar le jana chahta hu...nhi jane dena h tumhe us rahul ke pas...bas aur kuchh nhi sunna h mujhe...tum pls apni sari sharte wapas le lo...mere samne rh kar jitna man karega utni saza dena main aram se seh lunga...pr ye nhi ho rha h...

Priya...apko kya lagta h main khush hoti hu apko takleef dekar...apse jyada tadpati hu...aur tadpi bhi hu ye ap bhi jante hain...theek hai...lijiye mne wapas le li apni har shart...nhi deni h koi saza...kuchh nhi karna h...chaliye jahan bolenge wha chalungi...mere liye sirf ap mayne rakhte hain aur koi nhi...

Ram...rahul bhi nahi na...

Priya...raam..aap pagal ho gye hain???..wo meri jindgi me sirf isliye mayne rakhta h qki uski wajah se aap mujhe mil gye aur kuchh mtlb nhi h uska meri life me...apne aise kaise socha??

Ram...qki usne bola ki agr main tumhe uske bare me kuchh bolunga to tum manogi nhi...

Priya...aisa bola us gadhe ne...are ram...wo bht nautanki h...apko chidha rha hoga...janta h na ki ap kitna pyar karte hain mujhse isiliye...

Ram...tumhe aisa lagta h??

Priya...han baba wo hamare beech kabhi nhi aa sakta..qki hum aisa hone nhi denge na...aur waise bhi..he hv his own life...hamare beech kyun ayega???

Ram...jo bhi ho pr main koi risk nhi le sakta...

Priya...ok fine...aap jo bhi kahe...i am always with u...bhadh me jaye wo rahul...

Ram...ok iska mtlb tum yha se uske ghar wapas nhi jaogi na...jab tak m tumhe lene nhi aa jata...

Priya...pr...

Ram...kya...tumhi ne kaha na ki wo itna mayne nhi rakhta...

Priya...han nhi rakhta...

Ram...to promise me...ki tum nhi jaogi uske ghar...

Priya...uski dadi...

Ram...kuchh nhi hua h uski dadi ko...main handle kar lunga...tum bas bolo ki nhi jaogi

priya janti h ki ram bht jiddi h aur jidd me kuchh nhi sochta h...isliye use relax karne ke liye han bol deti h pr use rahul ke liye bura lagta h...

Ram...ufff..now i am relax...main sabse bat kar leta hu

priya...kis bare me

ram...tumhe le jane ke bare me

priya...abhi???

Ram...han abhi...

Priya sirf muskurati h...dono bahar ate hain...ram gharwalo ko bolta h ki wo priya se phir se shaadi karke use apne ghar le jana chahta h..abhi...to sabhi pareshan ho jate hain ki abhi achanak se kaise hoga ye sab upar se rahul ka chakkr...to sab ram ko samjhane ki koshish karte hain pr rambabu to raja admi hain...kisi ki sunte kahan hain...jid aa gyi to aa gyi...

Priya...ok ok...ek min sab chup ho jao...ggrrr...ram ap kyun hamesha aise karte hain...mujhe apki ye jid wali adat ekdm pasand nhi h...jo kam aram se kiya ja sakta h usme bhi critical situation dal dete hain...main kahin bhag rhi hu...aram Se bhi to shaadi kar sakte hain...hadh h..main sochti hu ki ap par gussa na karu..pr ap kuchh na kuchh aisa kar dete hain ki gussa karna padta h...

Sab ekdm chupchap priya ko sun rhe hote hain..ram bhi...jab priya chup hoti hai to sare hasne lagte hain...

Shipra...haye priya kyun chilla rhi h...damad ji itna pyar karte hain tujhe isiliye to rh nhi pa rhe hain tere bina...

Ram...sorrryy

priya abhi bhi sabko ghur rhi hoti h...

Ram...achha theek hai yar 2 din bad rkhte hain...(priya abhi bhi ghur rhi h)...achha 1 week bad...bas ab tum kitna bhi ghuro isse jyada main nhi talne wala hu...

Is bar priya ko bhi hasi aa jati h...khair sabhi khush ho jate hain pr priya ko abhi bhi rahul ke liye bura lag rha hai...ram to chala jata h pr priya rahul se bat karna chahti h...lekin kaise kare phone pr kuchh samjha nhi payegi...aur ram ko promise kiya h to rahul ke ghar bhi nhi ja sakti h...to wo rahul ko phone karke kahin milne bulati h...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me first... yippe...
Wow... amazing di... it was nice update... I was so engrossed in reading that I missed my bus stop... ha ha...😆😆 I hope I ll be able to reach office on time😕
Edited by fan_forever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fan_forever

Me first... yippe...

Wow... amazing di... it was nice update... I was so engrossed in reading that I missed my bus stop... ha ha...😆😆 I hope I ll be able to reach office on time😕


hahaha...my plsr dear🤗...sorry meri wajah se miss ho gyi...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the pm.
Rahul Rahul Rahul, irritate ho rhi hoon main iss naam se.
Hayye rambabu kitne restless, possessive, protective, insecure feel karrhe hai yaar😆😆 itne bechain bechare ko priya samjh hi nhi rhi hai.
Rahul ko thappad padnewala tha hi , kyunki Mrs kapoor ko koi uss nazar se nhi dekh sakta, she is only his, gale bhi lag gye. 😆 I loved whole raya.
Rahul kamina toh lag rha hai, what is he hiding from priya?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm still reading it , read 5 parts they are very interesting plus confusing 😆 hope my confusion gets clear in further parts. The ff is really written in suspense manner still has element of humor.
Edited by Bunny_honey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update ...
ram itna possessiveness show kar raha hai kuch tuh problem hai ...
thanx for pm...

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u for the pm 😛
yeh rahul ka kya chakkar hai 😆 curious case of rahul ban gaya hai ba 😆
ram Priya ko sharma house le gaye n ab shaadi hogi wo bhi ek hafte mai...do din was good 😆
kuch gadbad zaroor hogi 😉 mujhe lag raha hai aise 😆

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