New OS: Let it go {Warning: My philo mode is on high in this one} - Page 4

Originally posted by: greensakthi

oh god dr ri where are u now?

standing in the rain and two ice creams r impossible!

tell me the place now -no no just to send a doctor for u!

and if u could get one there then i'd send ar. there!😃

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

nice..

thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: farana786

such a sweet and filmy story
beautifully written yes and described well each part was aowsum
nice song selection lol
ice cream. .. my fav too hehehe
but over roll out standing piece of work
ending was quite good too and yeah i would prefer u too continue as its different.

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

wow nubs dear

it was awesome and mind blowing os

just loved it.

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: -DreamWeaver-

Edited.. Finally ;)

Wow, Nabii dear its such a cute & beautiful read. I felt as if IF was reading some poetic fairytale.. Very cute Imagination..
Could see Riya Mukharjee enjoying the moment of freedom before my eyes.. Beautifuly depicted her emotions with the song lyrics.. Absolutely loved nd enjoyed it.. Loved youf heartfelt writing 🤗

Originally posted by: devildiva21

Err.. how come I never got a pm for this story???🥺 😡

Anyways superb yar...

Beautiful portrayal of Riya's emotions. . Loved the way she got so happy on getting her desired freedom...

And that rain mai dance cute...

Lovely song...

N yes continue soon