From Paro to Rudra

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wenever the night is at its peak
And silence is an unending streak
Wenever u feel abandoned
And future seems bleak

Just look back over ur shoulder
till the end ov ur gaze ...
I'll be right there
waiting for u in all the haze ...

neither will i solve ur problems
Nor wud i be able to take away ur pain ...
But I'll hold ur hand ,look u in the eyes
And walk with u till the end ov the rain...

P.s this is the first tym i hv made any thread in this 4um nd this is my first attempt at poetry too i hope i didnt make a fool ov myself plz do 4give me 4 any mistakes nd tell how wz it in cments ☺️😳




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanku😳
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Lovely dear..I miss u a lot. ..nice to see you.
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Originally posted by: sukhminderkaur7

Lovely dear..I miss u a lot. ..nice to see you.

Thanku 😳 i missed u too🤗
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Its truly Awesome. 👏 Keep it up. 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: Joseph_A

Its truly Awesome. 👏 Keep it up. 👍🏼


Thankuu!! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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152 Views nd only 4 cments? itna bura hai kya guyzz?
Edited by Maano_billi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such. A. Nice. Poem! 👏
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Originally posted by: aruni50218

Such. A. Nice. Poem! 👏

Thankuuu😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: TitliBaisa

Aaawww it is SUPERB!!! 👏

Thankuu m glad dt u lyk it😊

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