I was asked to write a romantic and intense scene between Raj-Naina.....
I have posted it at the "Hotseat" section.....I daresay, I liked it!
Do check guys........
That golf match between two old friends and dialogues of Amitabh Bachhan film…said everything to Abhimanyu…. everything…that rajveer said he had yet to know…the expressions he did not understand ever since his arrival…. the weird silence between two people who seemed so close and yet so far apart…who seemed in intense love, but in acute pain…
…Abhimanyu understood everything….
"Abhimanyu, main aapse akele main kuch baat karna chahti hoon…."
His expression altered…and her eyes remained determinedly fixed on Abhmanyu's face…
"Sure, Cadet…"
And they walked out…he saw…him turn around…. to hide…hide…. hide what?
"Abhimanyu, w o h main aapko batana……"
"Nahin Cadet Naina…..yeh sahi waqt nahin….."
"Suniye…..poori baat….yeh bhaiyya ke bare main….."
"Cadet Naina, aap mujhe Ambala Sunrise point par milengi…tomorrow morning sharp 0400hrs…aur akeli aaiyega!" and he walked away…she stared at him…confused.
He entered the room…. and saw him standing by the window…hands folded in a knot…eyes motionless….
"Hmm…"
He stood there…. without a reply…
"…Agar tum hoti to aisa hota…..agar tum hoti to waisa hota….."
"Mujhe yeh dialogues mat suna…."
"….Hum to aise hi hain….par aap aise to nahin the…."
"Waqt…..aur….."
"Aur….?"
He didn't reply…. rather gave a hollow laugh.
It must be around 3.30AM, when the room's lights suddenly switched on…. making him wake up in a second…alarmed…
"Is waqt?"
His hand moved to his side…. and found the left side of the bed empty…he sat up with jerk…
"Is waqt kahan chala gaya?"
He got up and went near the bar for a glass of water…but as he reached there…he found a piece of paper.
Meet me at Ambala Sunrise Point….sharp 0400hrs….Urgent….Cadet Singh awaits us there….
His facial expression changed a million times in a second…. he re-read the letters…. "Cadet Singh…."….. It couldn't be…. she couldn't have…he cant…no…his mind raced…. and his heart beating fast…unable to comprehend his emotions…fright…guilt……….shame…sorrow…grief……….anger…pa in………love…
He freshened up within 2mins and pulled on his shirt and sprinted towards his jeep…
…. He saw heel-marks in the wet soil of KMA ground…. she has already left…
His jeep flew with the early morning wind…. morning? With that heavy rain last night…it was too dark to call it morning…. but his jeep was fast…. but his heart raced faster…early morning chill gushing past him…. his open jeep racing through empty roads of Ambala city…then the mountain ghats…and finally, he reached that peak…the Sunrise point…
It was a hill top, but people called it the Sunrise Point to attract tourists…the place filled with dew…and chill…trees and wet soil made it more green than ever…. the railing by the last point wasn't visible even from 10 steps from there…nothing but the rustle of lush green trees could be seen…. and scent of wet soil filled the atmosphere…a common man could dance in joy in such a place at such a time…. marveling nature's beauty…but…
…Nothing was important…nothing mattered…as he stepped out of his car…. his eyes constantly searching for two people…. as if someone was going sentence him death…in no time…death…that sounded better…
…He couldn't take it anymore…. he took a few hurried steps towards the end of that rock…
There was the last rock where one could climb to see the valley…big enough for 3-4 people…he stood below the rock for a few seconds…. his eyes closed…his mind blank…. and heartbeat gave up on speed count…..........To be continued......
Kumkum Bhagya
Anupamaa
