arshi ff: not cut out for love #2, chapters 11 - 20 **completed**

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Sunshine80

@Sunshine80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#711

aha...came early this time😆

OK...ASR who was so confident with his feelings on khushi...got distracted because of Shyam's issue. As usual he did what he thought is right...Khushi is distraction for his important wrk so bhaago and added to that word Love and marriage scares him because of his past. But what I didn't understand is Khushi...she went on a official date with him...he was nice to her throughout...so she shld be eager to meet him right...or I missed something. Though she missed him...but she was not so eager to jump on him...I wld have loved when ASR is trying hard to not to get distracted and this paagal eager to meet him😆

Good update di..👏

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#712

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I absolutely love the trailer...it so much reflected this update, especially.

Arnav trying to run away from all these feeling which Khushi evoke in him, he try to shut his brain and heart to stop thinking about Khushi, but highly unsuccessful. In all this running away he keeps looking for stars just like Khushi hoping like her these stars may also provide him some guidance and in a way this mere thought itself connects him with Khushi.

He call himself not cut out for this, love, marriage as it did no good to his mother. But then his good bye to Lavanya isn't it an attempt to be faithful to someone he not able to take out of his mind?

I loved how you wrote this goodbye between ASR and Lavanya... Not exactly the words but the meaning well conveyed and received ...

"thank you," he said.

she wondered why she thought she heard him say goodbye.

"for what, asr?" she asked quietly.

"for taking me just as i am," again that half smile flitted by.

lavanya knew then yes, indeed this was goodbye, tears seemed to find their way to her eyes, her nose."

And then they both are restless to not see each other and as usual not ready to accept to they resume to the only way they know ... Fight. But in their heart they know better...

"he wished he could say, "yes, tell miss gupta to pack her bags and be ready, captain raina will pick her up first thing tomorrow morning..."

they reached rm and khushi braced herself to meet the unpredictable man who had turned her world a little, no a lot, crazy. then she heard anjali ji say, "chhotey bhi na! did he have to leave for bali today itself!"

a vast emptiness seemed to rush in and fill khushi."

Finally, ASR is going to Bali to know the truth of what Khushi said about Shyam. I will be really happy if that slimed truth comes out sooner. But at the same time i fear that it will reestablished his belief that love and marriages are not forever that no one can stay faithful in love all your life.

And yes Akash and Payal and Khushi described a perfect coy love story just like Prem and Suman from Maine Pyaar Kiya...

Edited by rk2127 - 11 years ago

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#713

fabulous update Di... if only he understood why he only thinks of her, why this pyaar-shaadi is for, what his heart wants then he wont be Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada, right... loved him more when he said he will convince mami... and Khushi's innocence... her confusion... her restlessness... her feeling empty...wow, so beautifully written... loved it so much...thanks for the PM... and wonderful trailer... just perfect...

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GunM

@GunM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#714

hey

thanks for the pm

the day was super for Akash and Payal

but our Arshi had a real bad day

just want Arnav to realise that he loves Khushi

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 11 years ago

#715

I love your attention to detail - sugar free jam! Anjali cupping Aakash's cheek dressed in diaphanous sarees! (Every time she saw her Chotey her hand lifted involuntarily 😆)

Good that Khushi stands up for her belief in her Devi Maiya.

Poor Arnav is seeing stars in everything. Even the sun is likened to a shining star at the centre of the solar system. Just as she is becoming the centre of his universe - if only he'd allow himself to admit his vulnerability.

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shiv456

@shiv456

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#716

so he is running away nice update

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

@cinthiann1758

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#717

Indi Just loved it. Everything. I see it all, feel it all, brings me right back to IPK. What is it, why is it that this character makes us want to write about him.

Him running away from her and his feelings... what the? Loved the thought Anything else? yes call Ms. Gupta loved that thought.

Sweet Payal and Akash, they always make me smile. The two were so similar.

The love of Nani and Anjali, I can just feeel it!

Mami ugggh she always aggravated me. Still does.

Thanks for this refreshing FF having fun with this one!

Edited by cinthiann1758 - 11 years ago

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#718

fantastic update..lovely one...

good that arnav has taken a break to bali...will be able to understand himself properly

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#719

another wonderful update from you...i wonder how many times ASR would deny himself of Kushi...he is attracted to her vares fro her ..but is still in denial...and trying to push her away while pulling her to him at the same time...Kushi poor think would be feeling like a pendulumm with ASR blowing hot and cold...driving the already crazy Kushi crazier...

cant wait until next update...

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#720

Even I believe the news about Shyam cheating on his Di has made him more apprehensive and scared of marriage and love ... and that's why he ran away to Bali.
can't wait to see what happens next week.