zains confession * zaya ss* chapter 5 updated

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zaya ss zains confession</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Everyone were in the living room except zain all of them were sitting on the couch when
aaliya came and served kheer shorma to them . </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Usman : aaliya beta wah aaj toh dil kush ho gaya
bahut acha bana hai .. zain kaha hai .. use bhi pata chale uski biwi kitna acha
khana banti hai </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Chand bi:
bhai zain rizwan ke ghar pe gaya aaliya ne uske liye side mein nikaal ke rakha hai </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Barkat :wah bhabhi itna tasty bana hai ke bhai kha
ke pagal ho jayenga </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aaliya gives a smiles.. thinking when will zain
come back .</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Suddenly they hear a crash at door ...</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Evryone is shocked
they see zain fallen on the floor ..
rizwan trying to pick him up ...zain was muttering something ... everyone where shocked to see zain drunk
again ... usman Abdullah was very angry he
got up from the couch .. others followed him .. zain looked uo and said "koi
meri chinta mat karo mein theek hu ... mujhe aapko kuch bolna hai ... I m fine
rizwan I m fine" he leaves rizwans hand and moves towards aaliya he keep on
loosing balance and tries walking "aaliya
zain Abdullah ...tum bahut buri ho" </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Usman :zain </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain :nahi dad mujhe
bolne dijye aaj pls ... ha toh mein kaha tha aaliya zain Abdullah tum
bahut buri ho phele ek toh mujhse nikaah kar diya meri marzi ke bina </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(aaliya had already
started crying she thought that zain ann
she were friends now but this is
something wired ...tears were flowing from her eyes zain continued) </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain : abb mere
jaanbuj ke mere dil aur dimaag mein bas gayi hai </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(everyone looked
confused.. aaliya wiped her tears but yet another followed down her cheeks) </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain :maine bahut
sataya na tumhe har kosish ki tum yaha se chali jao ..par tum maamu ki bhanji bahut zyada smart
nikli mere har waar ko palat diya har bar kuch aisa kiya ke tumhe yaah se nikal
ne ka decision change ho gaya ... </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(others looked blank
except rizawan he expected this coming ) </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain : maamu ki bhanji
tum baHUT ACHI HO </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(he walks towards his
dad )</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain :dad aapne sahi
kaha tha aaliya perfect hai ... who bahut achi hai (and falls on the couch aaliya
and usman rush to hold him he pulls aaliya and makesher sit next to him)</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain :aaliya tum bahut
achi ho ... tumne mere ghar ke liye bahut kuch kiya barkat ... fahad bhai sabko help
ki thank you ... bas mein tumhari achayi na dekh paya tum ek perfect biwi ho
perfect bahu bas tumhara naak thoda lamba hai </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">( and gives a smirk
and he was badly drunk ) </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Usman :aaliya isse
kamre mein le jao .rizwan yeh kya hai .</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Rizwan :uncle yeh
actually by mistsake usne pe liya use pata bhi nahi tha ki drink me kuch hai
aur rasta ek hi chees bolte aaya ...</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Usman: kya </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain : I love u aaliya
</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(rizwan
makes the face and nods his head giving a hint that zain just reapeated I love
u aaliya the whole way . tears were
rolling down her face .. usman gave smile others also were smiling except the 2
chudails </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain:
aaliya I love u .. ilove u aaliya .. mamu ki bhanji I love u ... (he kept on
repeating in drunk condition. Others where laughing) </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Usman
: aaliya zain ko upar ke leke jao </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain
: nahi dad ruko aaliya zain Abdullah tum sirf meri ho sirf meri .. I love u ...
thanks dad aapke wajah se aaliya meri life mein .. I love u aaliya ...aaliya I love
u ... </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(others
smiling and aaliya was still crying) </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aaliya
:zain chalo upar pls </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(she
pulled up zain put his hand around her shoulders and took him)</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(zain
kept on repeating the same thing ... I love u I love u . they reached the room aaliya was crying she
made zain sit on the bed removed his shoes ... zain pulled her and made her sit
on his laps )</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain:
mamu ki bhanji kyun ro rahi ho tum (he kisses her cheeks and wipes the tears) ...
I love u I love u ... and he falls back on the bed and dozes of to sleep </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aaliya
makes him sleep covers him with blanket ...still tears rolling down</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">NEXT MORNING </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aaliya
was sitting near the window tears still flowing she thought "is din ka intezar
mujhe kab se tha par yeh aise hoga pata nahi tha meri zindangi ka sabse acha
pal aise nahi hona chayie tumne mera sabse acha pal mujhse se chin kiya zain I love
u ... but I always wanted a filmy style .. u spoiled everything" she hears some
noise ..she turns around to see zain holding his head on the bed </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain
:mamu ki bhanji mein yaha kaise aaya ...kal raat toh mein rizwan ke ghar pe tha
na? (zain looked confused )</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain
:oouch mera sir phat raha hai </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aaliya
was shocked </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aaliya
:zain kal tumne bhul se pe lii thee aur tum nashe ke halat mein the...rizwan
tumhe ghar pe le aaya aur tumne ..</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(aaliya
was about to say when zain got uo and ..</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain
: ohh shit dad ko bhi pata hai ... shit meine kuch bola nahi na warna dad mujhe
iss time nahi chodenge ... shit mujhe kuch
yaad nahi kal ke barre mein </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aaliya;
nahi zain kal kuch nahi hua tum jab ghar pe phauche tab tak tum so gaye the ...and
rizwan ne mamu se baat kar li hai .. don't worry koi tumhe kuch nahi kahe ga </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(that means zain kuch
yaad nahi ... aaliya thought and tears started flowing again)</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Zain :thank gods
..bach gaya tumhe kya hua tum kyun ro rahi ... Mamu ki bhanji ...</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aaliya :kuch nahi
aankh mein kachra gaya hai ..</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(zain comes close to
her and blows in her eyes trying to remove the kachra)</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aaliya thinks mein kya
karu jo tumhne bola hai kal who tumhe yaad bhi nahi yaaa aalah pls help me ...and
tear rolled down her eyes </font>


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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Chapter 2 aalia tells family member that zain dosent remember
nething (will zaain again propose her in a conscious way ... ) </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"> </font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">chapter 2</font>



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105629714</font>



<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">chapter 3</font>

<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105669968
</font>


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">chpater 4</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105744400
</font>


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is this going to happen in upcoming episode ?
If it is then OMG OMG - I'm going to watch this episode more than 100 times cause this is just truly amazing ! :) hope this happens :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I also wish this happens ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update,i can imagen that scene.waiting for next part.update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow it's just awesome, plz pm me the next, so eager to know if Zain will really propose her again in full conscious!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it hahaha loved how aliya already kept sheerkorma aside for zain and his drunk confession was the best literally I loved it! Hahahaha zain ps cd on repeat I love you aliya aliya I love you and I could imagine rizwans face to indicate to usman that's all he'd said and when zain made aliya sit on his lap I was like :O hawww blush blush!!!! Awhhh Aliyas uoset and ontop of that zain don't remember he confessed lol! Loved how he went to see her eye so cute :) please pm me when you Uodate :)
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Chapter 2

Zain was still trying to remove the kachra from aaliyas eyes ...aaliya starts walking...

Aaliya :zain neeche sab tumhara wait kar rahe neeche aao

(and left the room )

ON DINNING TABLE

All other were already seated .. waiting for breakfast ... aaliya reaches the table

Barkat :bhabhi bhai uth gaye who theek hai na

Aaliya : ha ..par wohh

Usman :par kya aaliya beta

Aaliya :mamu zain ko kuh nahi pata kal raat ke bare mein use kuch yaad nahi hai ...(tears welled uo in her eyes0

Aaliya : mamu isliye mein chahthi hu ke zain ko koi kuch na bole iss bare mein ...

Suriyaa : but aaliya ...

(both barkat place their hands on ssuriyaa and nod their head telling her not interfere surriya nods accepting what they said)

Suriyya : theek koi nahi bolenga kuch ...samaj gaye na sab (looking at the 2 chudails .. they nodded )

(aaliya went to the kitchen... zain came and sat on the table )

Zain :kal raat k liye I m sorry dad

Usman : its k beta ... but tumhe thank you aaliya ko khena chahyie kyunki kal ussne tum sambhala tha ...

(aaliya comes with a plate of paneer parantha .. she serves it to usman first then fahad and then barkat others nod that they want .. zain was staring at aaliya ...waiting for her to save the prantha but aaliya starts going to kitchen)

Zain :mamu ki bhanji tum mujhe serve karna bhul gayi .

(aaliya looks at zain angrily and puts all paranthas in the plate and bangs the empty plate on the table and leave the room zain thinks "yeh mamu ki bhanji ko kya hua hai"

AROUND 11'O CLOCK

(aaliya and barkat were sitting in barkats room arranging clothes .zain enters )

Barkat: bhai aap office nahi gaye aaj .

Zain: nahi mera sir phata jaa raha hai

Aaliya murmers : pee ke aaya toh sir dukhenga na

Zain :kya bol rahi ho mamu ki bhanji

Aaliya :nothing (she leaves the room angrily)

Zain :yeh mkb ko kya ho gaya hai

(barkat laughs )

Zain:tum kyun hass rahi ho

Barkat:kuch nahi bhabhi aapse ghussa hai

Zain:par kyun yeh mkb bhi na bahut zyada kitkit karti hai

Barkat: par bhai bhabhi ko pura hak hai ghussa karne ko kal raat ko aap ne jo kiya ...aalah (and removes her tongue and hits her head)

Zain :kya kiya

(barkat turns away and starts arranging the clothes in closet)

Barkat : aap bhabhi se kyun nahi puchte aise bhi mujhe bahut kaam hai toh bhabhi ko puchye aap

(zain wonders "aisa kya hua tha kal"

AROUND 5 IN EVENING

Zain was searching for aaliya everywhere he coudnt find her in their room nor in kitchen he was moving restlessly in the corridor of barkat ... he heard the chuckling sounds of the 3 angels from saifs room . he entered the room. He saw aaliya playing with them he kept staring at aaliya and thought how beautiful and innocent aaliya was ...

Saif:chachu aap yaha kya kar rahe ho ..

(aaliya looks up at zain and then makes a face and stars moving outside the room ..)

Zain was still standing near the door he saw aaliya going out he stops aaliya by catching her hands

Zain :mkb kaha thee pura din may bore hogaya kitkit karni hai

(aaliya starts moving in the corridor and zain was following her )

Aaliya :mujhe tumse koi kitkit nahi karni

Zain :par kyun

(aaliya ignores and continues walking zain pulls her back and pins her hands above her head on the wall

Zain:kal raat ko aisa kya hua kit tum mujhse itna naraz ho ...

Aaliya : zain I don't wana talk to u on this pls leave me

(aaiya tries to move but zain holds her more tightly )

Zain :nahi tum mujhe batao .. yaad hai who wada jo humne kiya tha ek dusre se har baat share karne ka ?

Aaliya :ha yaad hai par tumne bhi toh mujhse chupaya hai .

ZaiN: kya (and holds her more tightly tears flow down her eyes ..he loosens the grip and let her go ..after aaliya goes zain hits his fist on the wall.and thinks "aisa kya hua tha kal raat ko jo mkb naraz hai"

AROUND 10 IN NIGHT

Aaliya had already slept

Zain entered and thought "yeh mkb bahut zyada ghussa hai dinner pe bhi nahi aayi"

He sees her blanket on her head he pulls it down and stares her ...he then pushes the starnds of hair on her face behind

And was about to cuo her cheeks with his hands but the phone rings ...he gets up and picks it up hurriedly and looks back at aaliya confirming she wasn't disturbed . he goes to the window and talks softly "ha rizwan bol"

Chapter 3: will rizwan tell zain what happened ..will zain ever come to knw what he did ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...thank god Barkat didnt reveal anything to Zain...thoda toh silent treatment milna chahiye tha Zain ko...hope Rizwaan says everything to Zain
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update.aliya giving zain silent treatment and he was all furstation.waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What an Uodate truly amazin I loved how zains like to aliya you forgot to serve me a hahahahahaha and she puts them all in his plate angrily and then he figured she's angry lol!when Barkat nearly revel as what he did I'm like surely zain will get it out of her but no he searched for aliya to ask... And then when he held her hands tightly wanting to know its was that scenes where as much as it hurts you you love it :) and I really hope Rizwan tells him what he's done else who else will? Thanks for the pm can't wait for the next oart :)

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