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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4

Aaliya was sleeping on the bed it was 8 in the clock ... zain came out of the bathroom in his orange boxers ... he then got ready he wore smart suit... he then was wearing the tie ..which he coudnt he than saw towards aaliya ..and felt that it would be better if she does the tie for him but then on second thoughts he didn't wanted to disturb her ...he was fidgitng with the bottles of perfume thinking which to use .. the sound of bottles made aaliya wake up from her dream ...she sat up on the bed looking at zain

Aaliya :zain tum itne jaldi uth gaye ...

Zain: mamu ki bhanji its 8 o clock ..

Aaliya : haaye aalha mujhe late hogya aaj uthne mein sorry ...

Zain:its k mkb (still trying to tie his tie but this time he looks innocently at aaliya signaling aaliya to help him aaliya gets up from the bed and does the tie but not looking at zain .zain thinks "itni naaraz hai yeh ohh god"

Aaliya :waise tum itne ready hoke kaha jaa rahe ho ...

Zain:mkb aaj aalah se dua mango jo kaam mein karne jaa raha hu who pura ho jaye ...

Aaliya was confused ... Zaon leaves the room picking his mobile ..aaliya was doing the bed when she hears a knock "aur mkb aaj mein late aaunga mera intezaar mat karna" says zain and leaves

Aaliya: aalah mein kya karu mujhe pata toh hai ke yeh kitkit mujhe pasand karta hai par ...

DINNING TABLE

Everyone was talking happlily they aaliya coming down ... usman signals everyone to be silent

Usman :gm aaliya

Aaliya :gm mamu gm mami

Surriya :zain kidhar hai aaliya

Aaliya :mami who koi hotel ke kaam se bahar gaya hai

Fahad :ha who bahut important deal sign karne gaya hai mom...

(barkat giggles with usman ...aaliya feels something fishy .

Suriyyas phone rings ... she picks up .. she seems to look tensed ...she keeps the phone)

Usman:kya hua surriya begum ...aab itni pareshan kyun lag rahi ho

Surriya:who razia chichi bahut bimar hai .. hum sabko waha jaana hoga ..

Usman: ha begum hum abhi nikalte hai ... bacho hum sabko abh nikalna hoga ...jaldi se tyaar ho jaao .. fahad tum gaadi nikalo

Aaliya :jee mamu

(usman coughs others look at each other ...)

Usman: nahi aaliaya beti tum humhare saath nahi aa sakti ..

Aaliya :par kyun mamu ...

Usman:zain duphare ko ghar pe aajayenga phir tum dono saath mein aana ...

Aaliya :theek hai toh mein zain aur barkat sham ko saath mein aayenge .

Barkat :nahi bhabhi

(aaliya looks shocked)

Barkat :actually bhabhi mom theek nahi lag mom ko meri zarurat hogi isliye aap aur bhai majje kariye (she removes her tongue surriya stares at her )

Aaliya :huh

Barkat : matalb aap aur bhai baad mein aana

Aaliya : hmm theek hai

AFTERNOON AROUND 12

Chand bi and aaliya were in kitchen

Aaliya :hand bi yeh zain bhi nahi hee tiffin leke gayaa aur abhi msg karta hai lunch baar karenga abh mein akeli khan kaise khau .. mann nahi hai ..

Chand bi: dhulhan thoda khalo tumhari sehat bigad jayengi ..

Aaliya :nahi chand bi baad mein kha lugi

Chand bi :dulhan mein soch rahi thee ghar pe kaam nahi hai to mein darga jaaake aati hu

Aaliya :theek hai bhi chalti hu aapke saath aise bhi zain ne bola who late aayenga toh mein bhi aati hu ..

Chand bi : nahi nahi dulhan

Aaliya :par kyun

(chand bi was confused she start moving towards the door and without looking at aaliya said "mujhe der ho rahi hai dulhan tumhe tyaar hone mein time lagega mein jaa rahi hu aur sham ko market bhi jaake aauogi )

Aaliya :par chand bi

(till that chand bi had left the kitchen)

Aaliya :theek hai

EVENING 6

AALIYA WAS IN HER ROOM

Aaaliya :aaj ka din khatam hee nahi ho raha yeh kitkit bhi nahi aaya aur aajeeb baat hai koi mera phone bhi nahi uthaa raha hai ...

(She sees the only window in the room the swimming pool window)

Aaliya:yeh window band kyun hai ..

(she gets up and tries to open the window but it dosent open)

Aaliya :strange ..aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi hua ...chodo mein nah ke aati hu ...

(aaliya goes for bath )

SWIMMING POOL AREA

The whole area was decorated with beautiful lanterns ...near the pool was one table and a chair there were red and white balloons round the table there were roses and orchids decorated at various corners ...it was also decorated with pink duppatas ...zain was ordering two mens to do things right ..he turned and smirked "mamu ki bhanji ready ho jaao ..for the most amazing night ... thank you bhai aab tum yaha se watko ..."

ZAIN AND AALIYAS BEDROOM

Aaliya had eneterd the bathroom and locked the door from inside but somehow she had mistakenly swithed on the steam switch ... and she didn't knw that the steam system wasn't working while she was bathing she felt that the temperature was rising she hurridly had a bath and then got ready and tried opening the door but the door was locked .. she wasn't able to open the door and the steam had increased in the room she was coughing and trying to open the door she had began to sweat also ... she started panicking and was shouting for help ... but she knew no one was there in house ..so it was vain shouting yet she shouted for help

Aaliya: help ... Help koi hai pls mujhe yaha se bahar nikalo pls

(steam ha entered her lungs she was hardly able to breath she was coyghing and whispering zain pls help mamu ...)

Chapter 5 :will zain come to knw about aaliya will aaliya be saved

Sweta... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhh I loved how zai got ready earlier than aliya but couldn't tie his tie and debated whether to wake her but he didn't but by debating which perfume she woke up and he signalled to help hahahaha amazing :) and when she's asking where he's going and he's sooo secretive and she don't figure and the whole family Barkat fahad usman all making comments hahah and aliya still not figuring out something's up bless her chand bi was the best I mean she walks to the doors and is like your going to take too long to get ready I'll go hahahahha-!!! Lovely :) I feel mega bad Aliyas suffering :( I hope zain gets to her in time and his surprise isn't ruined... Thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update.mamu,fahad and barkat knew everything.aliya is in danger hope zain save her in time.waiting for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update...Zain is arranging everything ..but Aliya is in danger..hope he saves her in time..
Chand bi..lol...Dulhan u takes time to get ready🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ty guys ... Last part coming soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweta...

Ahhh I loved how zai got ready earlier than aliya but couldn't tie his tie and debated whether to wake her but he didn't but by debating which perfume she woke up and he signalled to help hahahaha amazing :) and when she's asking where he's going and he's sooo secretive and she don't figure and the whole family Barkat fahad usman all making comments hahah and aliya still not figuring out something's up bless her chand bi was the best I mean she walks to the doors and is like your going to take too long to get ready I'll go hahahahha-!!! Lovely :) I feel mega bad Aliyas suffering :( I hope zain gets to her in time and his surprise isn't ruined... Thanks for the pm can't wait for the next part :)


Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful update the family vacated the house so that they can spare some lovely moments for themselves, Zain is so excited to propose, But then the accident. I am so damn nervous, what will happen, hope Zain comes to her rescue at time... Update soon and pm like always 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Zain is going in full swing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg the tie tying sessions are sooo ooh halal ala I can just rerun it in my mind forever and ever. .and poor thing pura din she had to be alone...par koi na raat ka nasha abhi baki hai. ..hope zain saves her in time for them to share their moment of togetherness. .can't wait for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely updates...
Ohh no hope zain comes at the right time

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