My First Fan Fiction: Beintehaa Mohabbat

Hi guys I've started writing a fan fiction based on Beintehaa, as you guessed from the title. I have added some new characters and deleted some characters from the original show.

Characters Sketch:

Zain Usman Abdullah - Zain is a guy who likes to fly high, whether that's in the sky or on the ground. He gets what he wants and that's final. Although to everyone he is the rude rich guy, he has a heart of butter. Zain has only two aspirations in his life; flying and Aaliyah Ghulam Haider, his childhood sweetheart. Will he be able to fulfil both?

Aaliyah Ghulam Haider - Aaliyah is a simple girl, she is happy with what little God has given her and her family. She does not dream big nor does she want any riches. Her motto in life is: Good deeds are more important than money.

Rizwan Zia Hussain - Rizwan is Zain's friend although he is two years older than Zain having failed at college twice, he is the closest thing Zain has to a brother. Although he acts like all he wants is money, he is a true Robin Hood from the heart.

Zeeshan Ahmed - The only mutual friend Zain and Aaliyah had. Although he was is the third musketeer, as they started growing older, Zeeshan starts taking an interest in Aaliyah romantically. As honest as he sounds he is hiding a secret, but what is it?

Saarah Raheem Khan- Aaliyah's only friend in the mohalla. She is the total opposite of Aaliyah and loves to have loads of fun. She gets excited on the smallest things and loves role play.

Usman Abdullah - Zain's father and maternal uncle to Aaliya. Usman's outlook on life is simple and religious. He is a god fearing man who loves his family more than anything. He is very close to his sister and his niece.

Suraiya Abdullah - Zain's mother and totally opposite Usman, to her Rutba' (Class) is everything and she makes sure that everyone around her knows this. She is a strong yet demanding woman and knows how to do business well. Zain tries his best to make her happy.

Fahad Usman Abdullah - Zain's Brother, the ideal son. Favorite amongst the two boys, Zain's mum always complement him on his hard works, and Zain sometimes takes the brunt of it.

Nafeesa Fahad Abdullah - As her husband is the ideal son she tries her best to impress her mother in law. Married for 5 years, she is yet to have a child, something her mother-in-law never forgets to mention to her.

Mohammad Ali Abdullah - Zain's grandfather and the Hitler of the house. Zain is very close to his strict yet lovable grandfather.

Mohammad Ghulam Haider - Aaliyah's sweet and caring father. He wants what's best for Aaliyah and her brother. Her father is very gullible and nave. Although he is very hardworking, due to illness the family have seen hardships.

Shabana Haider - Aaliyah's mother and Zain's paternal aunt. She is the mother that every girl wants. Friendly and caring, she cares for Aaliyah and her brother as their mother and their friend.

Adil Ghulam Haider - Aaliyah's older possessive yet lovable brother. The most important person in world to him is Aaliya. Leaving all his dream and aspirations aside for his mother and sister he now owns a Halwai (sweet shop)

Plot

22 Year old Zain has everything he can imagine; he is good looking, rich and the bad boy attitude completes the icing on the cake. He tries everything to stop the flashbacks he has in his dreams about his childhood but fails every time.

When Zain was 14 his family moved to Mumbai from Bhopal, leaving his cousin and sweetheart Aaliyah behind. 8 years later when Zain hears that Aaliyah has moved to Mumbai from Bhopal to attend a college for further studies he tries to hunt her down. Romance blossoms and against his mother's wishes he proposes to Aaliyah and both are set to marry. Although on the Wedding day Zain's loyalties are called upon, will he marry the girl that has been haunting him all these years or will he give her up for his passion? Will Aaliyah and Zain find their Beintehaa Mohabbat?

This fan fiction is inspired from Enrique Iglesis's song I finally found you'.

What do you think? Please let me know if you think I should continue writing. Any suggestions on the plot or ways of improvement. This is my first fan fiction ever.