VIRIKA~ Is ThiS LOVE???

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HI friends...i am here with a NEW story i hope u guys like it.this one is my second attempt so hope you will like it and appreciate it as well as u have appreciated the first one!!!! PLEASE tell i should continue or not!!!


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CHARACTER SKETCH~

Viren vadhera- a 19 year old boy who is the smallest in his family and hence most pampered boy.he is mamma's boy.he loves his family a lot.his father is business man and mother work's on their own office. He has his elder sister named Vishi who is doing MBA to which he loves the most.a short happy family lived in Mumbai.he is the most hot and happening guy loves being around girls.

Jeevika malhotra - a 19 year old girl the most pampered girl and smallest in her family she has her dad,mom and her big brother Nayan which is so protective for her. They have their own business and all the three works their.she is bubbly, moody loves her family a lot and her friends too.she is beautiful lives in Mumbai.all are stunned seeing her beauty.

Ansh Sharma - best friend of viren they know each other since 10 years.an outgoing boy.

Palak pandey - best friend of jeevika they know each other since childhood they are family friends also.her father works on jeevika's office.

*others will be introduced as the story moves...



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part 1 - page 1

part 2 - page 4

part 3 - page 7



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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 1 ~

At first day of college~

Viren came to the college with his bestie ansh.they both reached the college viren parked his car at the parking and got out with ansh.they walked towards the notice board looking for the class.Ansh noticed that many of the girls were looking towards viren and was staring him but he didn't notice this.

Ansh - bro dekh!yaahan bhi saari girls tujhe ghoor rhi hain!
V - oyee...kahan kuch bhi bolta hai!
A - look back and see the girls.
Viren looked back and saw most of the girls staring at him.he was so naughty he gave a flying kiss to them and went from there.this made all girls faint there.
A - oyyeee hoyeee...phle din hi famous not bad haan .flying kiss hann.good going bro!!
V - thanks bhai...you can too join me u know!!!
A - well I will I will don't worry after all we are partners in crime(he said high-5 him)

They both saw the notice board and headed to their class rooms.they sat down together on the second last bench as they were not interested in studying right now and they loved sitting on the last bench.they sat there from school on the 3rd row and second last bench that was both favorite seat!!!


Jeevika entered into college wearing an orange frock with her friend palak.she was looking so gorgeous.both went towards the notice board for checking their class they found there class room no. and headed to it. On their way one boy came and asked
Boy - hi beautiful can we go for a dinner today?
J - (Starred him for a min and said looking into his eyes)sorry!i have fast today!
Both went leaving a shocked boy behind.
P - yo...jeevs that was cool (she said hi5ing her)
J - I know (she said giggling)

Both reached class as they entered they found whole class full only an empty space was left behind viren and ansh's seat both went and sat there.soon there teacher arrived and gave long welcome speech to the class and was telling about their college facilities etc...all were getting too bored.

J - yaar this is so boring.the first day and I m getting really bored. How much time she will take to give her so called introduction?
P -I too don't know yaar.seriously this mam is getting on my nerves now.if I would have a gum I would surely go and stick her mouth.
J - I agree and I would have just told her to never come again.oh god!plz save us from this red vampire.(actually her teacher was wearing a red suit)if she will take more than 5 min more than I m going out for sure!

Both viren and ansh were listening to their convo and was enjoying it.they turned around to join their convo.

A - u r absolutely right girls true yaar this is getting on my nerves too.
V - I agree bro.girls u r right. anyways let's do something to avoid this boredom.
J&P-(together)yeah... we know. Let's do something
V - by the way I m viren(he said extending palak)
P - hi viren nice to see u!
A -hi I m ansh (he said extending his hands towards palak)
P - hi
J - hi I m jeevika!nice seeing u both(she said shaking hands from both )
V - well I must say u r beautiful jeevika
J - thank u. u r also handsome.
V - is this is just because I said u that u r beautiful or I m?
J - ohh... no I mean it!u r!
P - hi both of you look forward that teacher is seeing u both continuously. Now turn.
Both turned .soon finally the long speech came to an end and the class was dispersed.
V - hi u would like to join us in canteen?
J - yeah...sure

The foursome went to the canteen on their way again that boy saw jeevika and came forward palak started giggling seeing him.jeevika was ignoring him.he stopped all of them.

Boy -hi I m rahul?can we be friends?

J - Can't u just understand I m not interested in u (she said in anger )just mind ur own business and get lost(she stomped her foot and went from there followed by three of them)
She went to the canteen and sat there.in the mean time viren asked palak what's wrong? She explained the whole scenario to them.they all went to her and saw her fuming in anger. They all went to her and sat around her.

P - jeevika listen cool down ok why are u getting upset bcoz of that idiot rahul?
J - so what should I do?i should go and tell him yes u know her na palak he is mad,a total bhoot.(her temper was raising more now)pta ni kahan se aa jate hain idiots.
V & A were smiling seeing her.viren liked her attitude. viren thought to change her mood.
V - u know what u r right! She should find some other girl why he is wasting time on u?u know
There are better girls then u (he said teasing).
J -(he glared at him)what do u mean?
V - I mean he deservers other girl right?
J - Are u saying that I m am not good looking ?
V - I didn't say that. I said he deserves another one. Have u seen his face just like monkey so he should flirt with monkeys rather than human beings!(he said while making faces like monkey)
Jeevika smiled and soon her smiled turned into a big laughter.they all were laughing and joking .her mood changed and she was again in her bubbly mood.
J - thank u so much viren . I never expected my first day in college would be like this thank u. u r so good mann.(she hi-5ing him)
V - my pleasure madam. Well lets order something! I m starving now .
P,J&A(all together)me too...

All laughed and ordered their food they enjoyed their lunch and went back to class.
The class went good all the foursome chatted during lectures. At last they exchanged their numbers and went back together at the parking and went home to welcome another day together.





hope u guys like it..if comments and like will be enough then only its going to be continued!!!!

PLEASE LIKE AND COMMENT!!
And friends wish a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO our own MyKryan aka MANSI

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ress!!
unresss!!
yayy im first!!
a new story!
that tooo by sweetzz!!
woww!
anyways nice character sketch!
luvin it!
read it few times now!!
luv chap 1!
cont soon!
tc
thnxx!!

Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res...
I'm no first😭
But anyways i'm first one to lyk it..😊
*Unres*
Thnk u for mentioning about my B'day...👏
A New Story...
Awesome...👏
Girls starring at viren...😉
He gave them a flying kiss...😆
Aww the girls faint ... 😛
Naughty viren...😉😆
loved foursome convo.😃
if that idiot rahul will irritate jeevs...
I surely will kill that monkey...
Virika exchanged numbers...🥱
The story sounds interesting...
Looking forward for it...😃
Continue soon

Edited by MyKryan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
aww viren is hot & handsome all girl flat on him 😉
so virika plak & ansh become friends 👏
plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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new story
it's beutiful
thanks for pm
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start!!! Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A New Story!? 😃

Awesome Start!

The Concept Sound So Dead Interesting!! ❤️
The Title I's Gorgeous As Well! 😃
Eager To See How The Twists And Turns Occur In This Story! 😃

Update Soon Aaayu!! 😃 😆

A Great Start!! 👏

Love You! ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb yaar u write awesum stories
luved this story alot
luved jeevs attitude and virens flirty nature
good goin gal continue soon n ya thnx for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
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super nice concept aayu...
i loved it alllooottt !!!!!
its so so so amazing !!!!
viren nd jeevika is marvellous !!!!
cont soon :)

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