SEVEN Shots~Laal Ishq~*HOLI SPCL* ESP UPDATE*SR* ON PAGE 38(COMPLETED) - Page 21

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When is the next update coming yaar?? Its been sooo long 😭

Sorry😭 for late comment for review

... but every time I start writing comment... I started to read chapter again... I am also surprise at myself I am reading again and again same chapters...

Really I have no words left for your talent. Every time I read new chapter and thought can't get better than this... U have awestruck me with every update

I completely pictured she said thank U... and with his eyes he responded back... They are so in love... they don't need to talk to communicate their feelings.

Ruku and Maham... I am so happy seeing their face...hooray

Mirza brought tears in my eyes... Vow... He wants to call her Bhabhi Maa... Salute to your creative mind... Can't get better than this... Entire part touched my heart... It shows how divine and selfless she is... Maan and Mirza both of them are really loving... The way both of them apologies... commendable writing... Each and every dialogue of that part is mind blowing , It's not fair to point on one... What Mirza requested really enthralled me... Such a emotional and loving part...."HUM APNI BHABHI MAA KO ROTE HUE NAHI DEKH SAKTE...HUM TO HUMESHA AAPKO MUSKURATA HUA DEKHNA CHAHTE HAI..."... I could imagine Jalal... How proud probably he was felling at that time... How sweetly Jalal complains... that what she told him in Bhaang effect... JALLD...KHADOOS, seriously I was laughing while reading... I love Jodha's reaction... DUST AATMA... hiii love their fight... they are so cute... I loved how Jalal pulled on a side and requested her admit her love for him... and her witty answer... vow... nirdayi Jo ... tu mere jallu ko sata rahi hai... pallu me tuje nahi chodungi...

Thank god Mirza ne thodi romance ka gyaan apne bhai ko diya... varna ye log... Jalal...ladki nahi Baagin...

Finally Love Letter arrived with red rose... uff... Raat ko Jalal ke kamre me... mera GM activated... I loved how creatively letter dress and everything planned by Jalal... Jodha is talking to Kanahji... are buddu kanhaji usme kuch nahi kar sakte... jaldi ja Jalal ke room me... Jalal is still playing with her... found another rose... he can very well read her mind and heart...

"Na nihariye is kadar is nazuk se gulab ko apni nazro ke suroor se

Kahin rushk khaker murjha na jaaye bechara...aapke chehre ke pakeeza noor se"

Kya likha hai... me to teri shayri ki bhi fan ho gayi... mere dil ko chu gayi... ab me isse chura lungi... Vow another letter... and Mughal dress and jewel... vow... Jallu ...Jo ke sath sath muje bhi pagal kar raha hai... (Anklet...) wo apne hato se pehnayega...

Masha Allah me to teri shayri ki fan ho gayi... kya likha hai... Tu sach me multi talented hai... love U sweetu...

Mind Blowing update... I am speechless... Yeh tu kese likhte hai... Abhi to dono mile nahi aur mera yeh hal... hai ... Pallavi can't wait any longer for SR update...

pallavi, hope u feeling better!! when u get time, plzzz update.thx

Hello friends...so i m back with an update..sorry for making u guys wait for so long...but what to do...i told u aboutmy problem...i m not very sure about this one...as wrote it after a long time...

again the shayaris used are written by me itself...hope u will like them too...and please excuse me if it went a bit over the top...hope it wont disappoint your wait😕

PART 7:-

(Jodha looked at the chit glued to the mirror...with a clueless face...and stacked out that chit with amazement and read it with a curious expression)

Wallah aaj chere par aapke jaise khuda ki rehmat baras aayi hai...

Mujh gareeb ke dar per jaise allah ki niyamat simat aayi hai...

Mukhatib nahi aapse to kya...phir bhi esa ehsaas hai meri dhadkan ko...

Roshan karne mere khwabgaah ko mano aaj falak se chandani utar aayi hai...

(Jodha lowered her eyes in extreme shyness...she couldn't help...but smiled with a shiver running across her nerves...she closed her eyes and took a deep breath to feel his compliment...she read further)

Tere husn ki jitni karu taareef kam lagti hai...

Na duniya ki koi misaal teri khubsurati ke paimane per khari utarti hai...

Sabra rakhna utna hi mushkil hai ab mere liye bhi e humsafar...

Teri justaju me to tanhaai bhi Milan ki raat si hansi lagti hai...

(the last two lines made Jodha's body tremble with some thundering sensations...she immediately closed her eyes...not able to bear this much admiration...his intentions were clearly visible In those lines...even Jodha's state was not very much different ...she had already felt the craziness that she went through when he had just touched her slightly...her breath rate increased at once...for a moment her mind struggled with her heart whether to stay back or leave...she was not able to tolerate this suspense any more...she desperately wanted to see him now..She opened her eyes slowly ...but was confused what she has to do further...he had yet not come back...where is he??...she wondered in her thoughts...when her eyes again caught a roll near the jharokha...now this made her a little annoyed...it was really making her restless and desperate...she thought to herself..."why can't he just come in front of me and say whatever he wants to say...why making me impatient by this game...I can't handle it now..."...she hastily moved towards the curtain and took the chit in her hand...)

Achi nahi hoti itni besabri mizaz ke liye...

Na maathe per shikand layiye itni choti si baat ke liye...

Nazar ghumaker to dekhiye huzoor...raah khud hi mil jayegi...

Bus karte jayiye in naazuk kaliyo ka picha...yehi aapko manzil ki taraf le jayegi...

(Jodha turned around and found a rose lying at the floor...she wondered to herself..."who is putting these things inside...a few moments back...nothing was there...if its him...then why he is hiding from me...why increasing my restlessness...since when u became like this shenshah??...I wonder..."...she chuckled a bit and moved towards it and picked it up...while picking that...her eyes again landed on another rose..lying at some distance...she advanced and picked that one too and smiled widely...she understood in no time...what he meant by that chit...that these flowers were guiding her towards a path...towards her destination...she hesitantly moved forward looking for another rose and found it at the door step...and soon she came out of the khwaabgaah collecting those roses..."hmm..ab kaha jaana hai??"...she asked in an anxious tone...then only she found a long line of beautiful blossomed red roses...kept at even distances...looking like put together to form a way...she moved further and started picking them up and following the route...her smile was growing more and more wider with every passing rose...her heart beating so hard as if it will pound out of her chest anytime...she stopped for a while and prayed to kanha..."kya hume aage jana chahiye kanha??...pata nahi kyu bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai...kintu phir bhi swayam ko rok pana asambhav hota ja raha hai humare liye...hum rukna chahte hai per humare pair humari sun hi nahi rahe...sahayata kariyega kanha...ab to matra aapka hi sahara hai..."...and she kept on following the track...)

(On the other hand, as soon as Mirza found Jodha coming out of the room...he rushed towards the terrace...where Jalal was roaming back and forth...rehearsing his lines...and confession dialogues...which Mirza has told him...dressed in a MAROON AND PEACH COLOR RAJWANSHI OUTFIT WITH DIAMOND ORNAMENTS...*somewhat like in their first meeting*...as he remembered once Jodha telling Moti that she admired him in Rajwanshi outfits...and even he chose to make her wear Mugul and decided Rajwanshi poshak for himself...to symbolize that no matter what...they belong to which tradition or religion...but the most important thing was that they will always belong to each other...will symbolize each other in every particular way...their union will be the union of two hearts..Two souls...two cultures...regardless of...who belongs to which one...he will be hers and she will be his only...there will be no differentiation b/w them apart from their names...today they will accept each other whole heartedly...Jalal continued murmuring his lines hastily...)

Jalal: -(trying to memorize) aapki aankhon me kho jaane ko dil karta hai...aaj apni dil...umm...kya tha wo... (Remembered suddenly)...haan...aaj apni dil ki baat aapko batane ko jee karta hai...palako tale...umm...palako tale... (With a heavy sigh...nervous.)...yaa Allah...kitna mushkil hai ye sab...kahin esa na ho ke ghabrahat me humare muh se kuch ulta nikla jaaye...madad karna mere maula...

(then only Mirza came running towards Jalal...calling his name out..."Bhai jaan...bhai jaan"...Jalal turned at once to look at him...his heart beating like anything..."kya hua mirza??"...)

Mirza: -(gasping hard...observed him for a while)aapko kya hua hai bhai jaan??...aap itne sehme hue se kyu lag rahe hai...humne jo kaha tha wo yaad ker liya na aapne...??...

Jalal: -(terribly nervous) haan koshish to kar rahe hai hum mirza...magar ye shayari bolna zaroori hai kya...hum yakinan unhe dekhker sab bhul jayege...tum dekh lena...sidhe sidhe keh de to koi taklif hai kya...

Mirza: - are bhai jaan...samjha kijiye...shayari me apne dil ki baat kahege Na...to alag hi asar hoga aapki baat ka...fikr mat kariye...sab acha hoga...

Jalal: - hume bahut dar lag raha hai Mirza...ek kaam kare...kal keh dege unse...wo kaun sa kahin bhaagi ja rahi hai...

Mirza: - (angry) pagal ho gaye hai kya aap bhai jaan??...bhabhi maa hojre se nikal chuki hai...kisi bhi waqt yaha pahuchati hogi...aur aap esi baaten kar rahe hai...hume aapse ye ummid nahi thi...

Jalal: -(at once...scared) kya...hojre se nikal chuki hai??... (Now with a bit soft expression)...acha...WO...wo libaaz pehna kya unhone...??

(Mirza nodded with a wide smile...Jalal quizzed him further...not able to hold his excitement with a little blush..."acha...kaisi lag rahi hai??"...Mirza tried to tease him a bit..."hmm...badi bekarari ho rahi hai...kyu??"...Jalal frowned at him..."Mirza...ye mat bhulo ke hum tumhare bade bhai hai...tum hume ese chida nahi sakte ho...samjhe..."...Mirza a bit scared now..."Are bhai jaan...hum to bus itna keh rahe the...ke hum aapko kaise bata sakte hai ke wo kaisi lag rahi hai??..."...Jalal with confused expression..."kyu??...kyu nahi bata sakte??")

Mirza: - bhai jaan...khubsurati to dekhne wale ki nazro me hoti hai...aur hum to humesha unhe apni maa ki tarah dekhte hai...aur ek bte ko apni maa to humesha hi sabse zyada khubsurat lagti hai...magar aap to humse apni begum ke bare me puch rahe hai na...ab ye to sirf aap hi tay kar sakte hai ke aapki begum kaisi dikh rahi hai...

Jalal: - (smiled at his witty answer...caressed his hairs lovingly) hmm...bahut samjhdaar ho gaya hai humara chota bhai...chalo nahi puchte tumse...

Mirza: - (in excitement) acha...bhai jaan...ab hum chalte hai...bhabhi maa aati hi hogi...best of luck... (and he turned to leave but jalal held his arm...Mirza looked at him with a question mark face..."ab kya hua?".....Jalal extremely nervous..."are wo aakhiri jumla to batate jao...palko tale ...kya tha wo??...")

Mirza: -(annoyed) palko tale khwaab hai sirf aapke...aaj in khwabo ko mukammal banane ko jee karta hai...bus itna hi to hai...aap bhi na bhai jaan...acha hum chalte hai ab... ...dariyega nahi...aap to humare bahadur bhai jaan hai na...puri himmat se ankhon me ankhen dalker izhaar e mohabbat kariyega... (Patting his shoulder)...all the best (with a cheerful smile)...shabba khair bhai jaan...

Jalal: -(with a nervous smile...nodding his head...) shukriya Mirza...shabba khair...

(As soon as Mirza left...Jalal again started memorizing the last lines...that Mirza just told him...he kept on pacing around the terrace in impatience...when suddenly his feet stopped at once automatically...as the wind blowing changed its direction and now was hitting on his face directly but softly...giving him some soothing sensations...informing about someone's arrival...and then suddenly he heard a light tinkling of bangles and some slow sounding footsteps...he at once stopped mumbling the words...as his tongue dint support him to do so anymore...esp. after sensing her arrival...He turned around slowly...only to find her rising up from the terrace stairs...like a budding blossoming delicate flower...thus first revealing her forehead looking like a perfect piece cut off from the full moon...adorned with a side mogul style mang teeka with no bindi hiding her shiny skin from him...her mang filled with dark red sindoor...which was the symbol of her belonging to the one and only man she had in her life...giving a glimpse of the combination of two different cultures...covered with a sparkling white along with maroon border transparent dupatta...sheltering her silky locks that were left open...as if only put up to make his heart skip a beat...as she moved further...Jalal got to see her beautiful doe like big innocent eyes...that were able to drown anyone just like a deep ocean but were lowered in shame...showing her beautiful eyelashes adorning her eyelids...complimented with thick kajal teasing it's edges...her nose having not a very big but a bit tiny nose ring...which really suited her perfectly...and soft cheeks that were turning crimson due to excessive blushing...adding more charm to her angelic face...and then her lips...shaped like a perfect bow...having shining pink with a faint shade of red...looking so deliciously attractive...and thus slowly her whole face was revealed to him...followed by her lower body...so cylindrical...petite and perfectly curved...the attire chosen helped her curves to be enhanced...though it made her body all covered but yet the accurate fitting of the attire was enough to highlight how well shaped she was...just like any shayar's imagination...)

(Jodha...slowly but steadily came up but stopped...her heart was beating so hard that she could listen to her own heart beats...she first closed her eyes to gather some strength before looking for jalal...On the other hand...Jalal was just spellbound...he had been blown away by her beauty from the very moment when his eyes caught first sight of her...he was going all numb...all blank...just standing like a statue and gazing at her without even a blink..."MAHSALLAH...!!."...a sigh escaped his lips unknowingly...that caught Jodha's attention...she slowly opened her eyes only to find a completely mesmerized Jalal standing near the terrace railing...Now it was Jodha's turn to get mesmerized...she looked at jalal from head to toe...moving her eyelashes willingly...and was surprised to find him in a Rajwanshi outfit...the Maroon and peach color combination suited him extraordinarily well...the perfectly fitted attire was finely giving her a look of his lean...muscular..attractive body...the diamond necklace and his appearance reminded her of the time when she had seen him for the first time in Gangaur Festival...she never really noticed how handsome her husband was...who could be any girl's fantasy...even she couldn't move her eyes from him for a while...but alas she couldn't match the intensity and passion that was there in his eyes...she lowered her eyes and stepped forward towards him...as she moved towards him...her shiny skin of her face started coming in direct contact with the sparkling moonlight...thus making it glitter like a KOHINOOR diamond literally...till the time she reached by his side...Jalal's heartbeats literally went nil...he got so lost in her trance that he almost forgot for what purpose he was there??...what he had to say??...what he supposed to do??...What he planned??...everything...Jodha came and stood in front of him...At first she was a bit hesitant to look at him...but seeing Jalal not even budging and just staring at her like anything...she looked up in his eyes that were glued over her face..."shenshah..."..She said in a very soft tone...no response from jalal...instead of responding...he slowly approached her...his eyes caught a thread coming over her face again and again...he gently raised his hand and put it aside by running his fingers smoothly over her cheeks...still gazing at her intensely...Jodha immediately closed her eyes with that soft touch...Jalal moved his face really close to hers...their forehead and cheek now caressing each other's...whispered softly observing her beauty with his obsessive stare..."Subhanallah*emphasize*...tum itni khubsurat kaise dikh sakti ho Jodha...koi bhi itna khubsoorat kaise dikh sakta hai...allah kasam jannat ka noor hai is waqt tumhare chehre per...hume khud me mila lo jodha...hume apna bana lo...ab ye diwanagi aur bardashat nahi hoti...Jodha...*whispered really intensely while sliding his face to hers a bit to reach her lips...*"...but then only a voice drew him out of his dreamland...this time a bit louder...waving her hand in front of his eyes..."shenshah...??"...Jalal snapped out finally from his spell...he was already way too nervous and now this dream made him forget everything...."Kya baat hai shenshah??...aap kuch bolte kyu nahi??..."...Jalal replied in a confused tone..."haan??...kuch kehna tha kya hume??")

(On the other hand though Mirza said Good night to Jalal...but yet he decided to stay back for a while...to see whether his newly found student is applying his tactics correctly or not...so he hid behind a pillar at the corner of the terrace...Mirza felt like coming out from his hiding place and shook Jalal really hard...as he was looking like a child who got lost in a fair...he murmured all annoyed..."What are you doing bhai jaan??...For god sake...say something...kitna acha mauka hai...ya Allah...ye bhai jaan ko ho kya gaya hai...are kuch to boliye...?"...But Jalal was going all blank...he tried really hard to remember the lines but couldn't succeed...while each second of his silence was troubling Jodha to extreme...she was asking him almost for the third time and yet no reply...she thought to herself ..."he wrote so many things in those letters admiring me...so why this silence now...now when I m standing in front of him..Waiting for his one word of appreciation...he is not uttering even a single word...first raised my expectations to this much unimaginable levels and now crashing them all down by his silence...was he again playing around with me...no I can't handle it anymore...I should leave"...Jodha waited for a while for his answer...but not getting anything...she felt really dishearten and turned to leave from there...she had just moved few steps when an intense and firm voice made her stop in midways as Jalal started singing at once...)

SUNO NA SANGEMARMAR... KI YE MINARE...

KUCH BHI NAHI HAI...AAGE TUMHARE...

AAJ IS DIL PE MERE...RAAJ TUMHARA...

TAAJ TUMHARA...

(and complete pin drop silence for a moment...the wind blew really hard making Jodha's hairs swing with the rhythm of the song...she turned with a startle with a amazed expression on her face...she looked around but was unable to find him...a sudden restlessness formed in her soul as a shiver ran down her spine...but as she moved her eyes down...she found him sitting on his knees with his head lowered...at the same place where he was standing a few moments ago...she couldn't believe her eyes for a moment...she prayed to god...not to prove it as a dream of hers...but her doubt soon turned into a false one as Jalal repeated the same lines with even more intensity ...but this time raising his head...looking directly in her eyes...)

SUNO NA SANGEMARMAR... KI YE MINARE...

KUCH BHI NAHI HAI...AAGE TUMHARE...

AAJ IS DIL PE MERE...RAAJ TUMHARA...

TAAJ TUMHARA...

(Mirza's mouth got wide open in shock...these were not the lines that he taught him...even he got to know for the first time that his elder bother sings so well...it was far better than the lines he told him...he smiled surprisingly seeing this hidden side of his brother..."aap to bade chuperustam nikle bhai jaan...I m impressed"...Mirza smiled widely and decided to leave the love birds in their sweet word of love alone...he gave them a final look and left from there all smiling...)

(While Mirza felt surprised and left...there was no limit to Jodha's astonishment...Jodha was pleasantly shocked to see jalal like that...he had done something beyond her imaginations...his soothingly melodious yet manly voice definitely had a majestic charm in it...that was pulling her towards itself like a strong magnet...she wanted to listen to it till eternity...till the last breath of her life...and unknowingly she started moving towards Jalal...completely lost in his magical voice...with her eyes locked with his...while Jalal was just singing what was coming there in his heart...he was just pouring his feelings out...and the words were coming out from his mouth effortlessly...as it was the call of his love...his heart ...He continued his song...)

BIN TERE MADHAM MADHAM...

HI CHAL RAHI THI DHADKAN... (Putting his hand over his heart...)

JAB SE MILE TUM HUME... (Jodha reached by his side...)

AANCHAL SE TERE BANDHE...(Dramatically the wind caused Jodha's dupatta to fly and it coincidently landed over his face...covering his upper body with it...*lol...maine kaha tha na filmy...*)

DIL UD RAHA HAI...(He smiled beneath that sheer transparent wall...kissed it slightly then moved it aside and looked at his angel...who was staring all dumbfounded at him...he looked at her with a proud smile and sang the next line stretching his arms ...indicating at the whole world...)

SUNO NA DO JAHAANO...KE YE NAZAARE...

KUCH BHI NAHI HAI...AAGE TUMHARE...

AAJ IS DIL PE MERE... RAAJ TUMHARA...(Indicating towards his heart with his palm...)

TAAJ TUMHARA....(he tends to move his head down again but this time Jodha stopped him by putting her hand on his shoulder...he looked up at her...she nodded her head in a "NO"...them smiled cutely at him with tears in her eyes)

(Jalal slowly forwarded his hand towards Jodha...still sitting on his knees and pleaded with his eyes to hold it...Jodha held it sensing his request with a blushing smile...Jalal then picked out a diamond studded big round golden ring...and adorned it in Jodha's ring finger...then pecked over her hand passionately...she closed her eyes with the intense touch...she couldn't explain what she was feeling at that moment...she dint know what to say...how to react...this all was seeming to her like the most beautiful dream of her life...his gentle touch made her realize how much she was in love with this man...a lone tear made its way down her cheeks...Jalal left her hand for a while and now moved his hand towards her feet...as he touched her tow...she opened her eyes with a jerk...as her whole body got goose bumps due to that touch...she wanted to stop him...to prevent him from touching her feet as it was against her hindu customs...but she had not left with the strength to do so...as by the firmness of his grip...she could sense that there is no way...he will stop here...Jalal then lifted her feet a bit...holding it tightly and kept it on one of his folded knee...Jodha clutched the piece of cloth at his shoulder to maintain her balance...Jalal then took out a broad and heavy beautiful anklet from his pocket which...Jodha recognized to be the same one she lost last year at the GANGAUR DEEPDAAN...her heart skipped a bit...tears started flooding her eyes...did he love her that much...that still he had kept her Nishani so safely...Jalal slowly caressed her feet and removed her skirt slightly from her toe...that left Jodha with some thundering sensations...she almost crushed the piece of cloth located at his shoulder...Jalal sensing her impatience...decided to swipe it once and for all...and slowly put the anklet around her ankle...made her wear the first momento of his love...then brushed his lips against her toe slightly while having his grip tight at her anklet...and let them linger there for a while...Jodha breathed really heavily...and moaned slightly...That caught Jalal's attention...he looked up and sang the last lines with tears in his eyes...as he found Jodha not protesting his touch for the first time...rather enjoying it...it filled him with utmost happiness )

YE DEKHO SAPNE MERE...NEENDO SE HOKE TERE...

RAATON SE KEHTE HAI LO...HUM TO SAVERE HAI WO...

SACH HO GAYE JO...

(He stood up at once and held her by waist and lifted her up...with her belly touching his lips...trying to give the moon and the pleasant night a closer look of his angelic lover come wife...making them realize that their charm is nothing in front of his Jodha...Jodha's hand swiftly got shifted towards his mane...she got a bit shocked with his sudden move...but his tender yet firm touch made her comfortable enough in the next flick of second...she looked at him surprisingly so as to know...what he was trying to convey by this...when Jalal replied her by the last lines of his song...)

SUNO NA AASMANO...KE YE NAZARE...

KUCH BHI NAHI HAI...AAGE TUMHARE...

AAJ IS DIL PE MERE...RAAJ TUMHARA...

TAAJ TUMHARA...

(Jodha giggled a bit listening to his hyperbolic admiration...Listening to her musical laughter...he grinned widely too...he slowly put her down still not losing his tight grip over her waist...thus making her body come down caressing with his thoroughly...both of them felt each other's proximity to the core...both of them knew it very well at that moment ...that the other was too deeply in love...that they had fallen for each other completely...that they belong to each other only...that they are each other's destiny...and that they have found their soul mates in each other...now words were just a formality...to give a way to their feeling to reach upon each other's ears...to declare the helpless sates of their hearts that were beating in sync just for each other...though there was no need of it but yet they had to pour their heart out...and esp. Jodha as Jalal was dying to hear those three magical words from her...Both of them came back to their senses only when Jodha's face reach near Jalal's and their noses kissed each other slightly...Jalal's one had shifted towards her back a bit to land her down comphortably...Eyes in eyes...their breaths intertwined with each other...sensing his extreme proximity...Jodha at once blushed really hard and tried to move apart and faced away for loosing herself to him...but before she could move any further...he held her arm and pulled her back at the same place... )

Jalal: - (with an intense whisper) humne itna kuch keh dala...aap kuch bhi nahi kahegi??

Jodha: - (shyly) kyu kahe??...hume kaise pata ke aapne jo kaha wo humare liye tha??...

Jalal: -(teasing with a naughty smile) acha to ab aap ye bhi kahegi ke aapko ye bhi nahi pata ke humne aapko yaha bulaya tha??

Jodha: -(smiling away) aapne bulaya??...hum to yu hi khuli hawa me sair karne aa gaye the...hume kaha pata tha ke aap yaha hoge...

Jalal: - (moved towards her and put his hands around her arms...) hmm...matlab aap yaha humare liye nahi aayi hai...hmm??

Jodha: - (blushing heavily) ji bilkul nahi... (Still not protesting his touch)

Jalal: - (smirking...nuzzling her neck...) acha ...agar esi baat hai to...aap yaha...humare diye hue libaz me...humari pehnayi hui anguthi aur payal me...humari baahon me kya kar rahi hai...haan??... (Kissed lightly on her earlobe)...jawab dijiye...

Jodha: - (trembled slightly...said in a shaking voice) wo...wo to aapne pehnaya to humne pehen liya...aur wo payal humari hi thi...jo aapne churayi thi...humne to sirf apni cheez wapas paayi hai aaj...

Jalal: - (tightened his grip) haan...kyuki ab hume is nishani ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...kyuki ab to puri ki puri jodha jo humari ho gayi hai...

Jodha: - (pushed him lightly...moving away) kisne kaha aapse esa??...Jodha to sirf shenshah ki hai...aapki nahi...

Jalal: -(pulled her again...this time with a jerk...) acha...kaun hai ye shenshah...jo jalal se uski jodha ko chinne ki himmat rakhta hai...

(Jalal said it with a bit angry face...though a fake one...but yet was enough to make jodha scared a bit...she thought he misunderstood her..."Shenshah...aap hi hai Jalal...aap hume galat samajh rahe hai...hum aapki hi baat kar rahe the...hum to bus aapko ched rahe the.."...she bit her tongue instantly as by mistake she uttered his name...Jalal smiled widely at her innocence...his name sounded so pure and divine in her soft voice...his little move scared her like a little baby...now he loosened his grip a bit and cupped her face with both of his hands...looked deep down in her eyes...."Hum jante hai Jodha...kyuki aap sirf humari ho sakti hai...aur kisi ki nahi...kyuki aapki aankhon me sirf humara chehra dikhta hai hume...magar hum chahte hai ke wo chehra Jalal ka ho...shenshah ka nahi..."...Jodha looked at him with a confused face...he continued..."jaisa ke humne khat me bhi likha tha...ke ye bulava ek shauhar ka hai uski biwi ke liye...na ke shenshah ka uski begum ke liye...ye duniya bhari padi hai shenshah ko chahne walo se Jodha...lekin is bheed me agar koi akela reh jata hai...to wo hai sirf Jalal...Jodha(with an emphasized manner..in a husky voice)...kehne ko to sirf ek lafz...ek naam...magar ye wo naam hai...jisne us sangdil shenshah ke ander chupe Jalal ko uski tanhaai ka ehsaas karaya hai...jis naam ne use ek humsafar ki kami ka ehsaas karaya hai...Shenshah ko sahare ki koi zaroorat nahi...kyuki uske paas uski avaam hai uski jay jaykaar karne liye...hazaro begumen hai uski hokum farmaani karne ke liye...sipahi aur audhedaar hai uski ek aavaz per khud ko kurbaan karne ke liye...Magar Jalal ke saath kaun hai...koi nahi Jodha...itne saare chahne walo ke hone ke bavjood bhi Jalal tanha hai...akela hai...janti hai kyu...kyuki uske paas esa koi nahi jo bina kisi swarth ke uska haath thaam ker apna sab kuch uske naam kar sake... kyuki uske paas uska humsafar nahi hai Jodha..."...Jodha was shocked at Jalal's words...his eyes were full of pain...that was the moment when she saw the real lonely Jalal that he had been hiding behind the almighty king...her eyes were full of tears...tears of the pain of his loneliness...tears of the helplessness that she sensed in his voice...she badly wanted to heal his pain...to give him assurance that he is not alone anymore...but she waited for him to pour his heart out to her completely...Jalal continued...and again knelt down in front of her..."waise kehne ki zaroorat to nahi hai...lekin agar apne jazbaato ko lafz ki shaqal na di to shayad ye naisaafi hogi humare ehsaaso ke saath...hum aapse sirf ek baat kehna chahte hai Jodha"...he kept his hand on his heart to indicate the honesty in the words that he was going to utter...Looked up in her eyes..."AAJ HUM AAPSE UMR BHAR KE LIYE AAPKA SAATH MANGNA CHAHTE HAI...BHALE HI AAP HUME MATLABI HI KYU NA SAMJHE MAGAR HUM AAPSE AAPKI ROOH PER SIRF HUMARA...SIRF JALAL KA IKHTIYAAR MANGNA CHAHTE HAI ...KYUKI...KYUKI HUM AAPSE...AAPSE BEINTEHAAN MOHABBAT KARTE HAI JODHA...AUR AAJ SE NAHI...YE WO JAZBAAT HAI...JISKA EHSAAS HUME US ROZ GANGAUR KE JASHAN ME HUA THA...AUR JISKA YAKIN HUME AAJ HO GAYA HAI...AAJ SHENSHAH E HINDUSTAAN NAHI...BALKE JALAL...JODHA KI TARAF HAATH BADHATA HAI...AUR UNSE YE ILTEJA KARNA CHAHATA HAI "...with it he extended his hand towards Jodha...."KE KYA WO USKI ZINDAGI KE KHALI PA KO DOOR KAREGI...KYA AAP HUMARI HUMSAFAR BANEGI JODHA??...BANEGI JODHA??"...echoed back from every direction...Jodha's eyes began to flow down her cheeks involuntarily...she wanted to reply to his question immediately...but her throat has become so heavy because of the overwhelming feeling...that she couldn't utter even a single word...she tried to smile to show her consent but could only sob...A lone tear trickled down Jalal's cheeks too...seeing the happiness gleaming in her eyes...but he wanted to hear those words once...so he again asked her..."BOLO JODHA...KYA TUMHE JALAL KI MOHABBAT QUBOOL HAI??"...Jodha...not being able to say anything...just got on her knees instantly and cupped his face tightly in her little hands and touched his lips with hers...Jalal at first was shocked at her sudden gesture..But his shock soon turned into passion as she took his upper lips b/w her both and sucked it...then slowly broke the kiss...Joined her head to his...and said in a sobbing whisper..."QU...QUBOOL HAI...DIL...DIL SE QUBOOL HAI..."...now she asked futher..."AB HUM EK PRASHAN PUCHE AAPSE??"...Jalal...with tears continuously flowing down his cheek with little sobs..."HMM??"...Jodha with a bit firm tone..."KYA...KYA...JALAL KO JODHA KA PREM... USKA SAATH ...JIVAN BHAR KE LIYE USKE NAKHRE... ...USKE TEVAR QUBOOL HAI??"...Jalal giggled slightly while sobbing...he cupped her face tightly and moved his face more closely...peeping deeply in her eyes...."BESHAK MERI BAAGHIN...TAHEDIL SE QUBOOL HAI"...and with it...he crushed her lips over her...taking them completely in the warm embrace of his lips...kissed them and literally worshipped them with his lips running passionately over hers...he slowly moved his one hand down on her waist with other digging deep in her hairs...pulled her into his lap...and deepened the kiss more further...the craziness in Jodha returned again...as her dream seemed to be turning true to her...she entered her hand in his mane with other resting and caressing his cheek...surrendered herself in his arms...and they got lost in each other's obsessive embrace...and forget to notice the time...as they were lost in enjoying their first complete love kiss...)

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res... OMG!!!! VOW...UFFF... PALLU... I AM IN DIFFERENT WORLD... Hey bhagvan... OMG!!! Pallavi this is way beyond any words... Yaar I am going to stop writing... This chapter each and every words... I have no words for it... Yaar me same words meri comment repeat kar rahi hu... My mind freeze again like... when I read chapter 3... How U wrote this much romantic with such an amazing dialogues... Your creativity I have No words...Yaar I knew you can write shyari... but this intense... Every word of shayari touched my heart... I wish in serial bilkul aesa hi ho... Yaar the way Jalal give her one by one surprise... I was so lost in the chapter ...muje pata hi nahi chala ...I felt I was dreaming entire chapter... How romantically he predict her every action and expression... Marvellous... She wears Mughal outfit... Pallavi yaar tune muje ab bhayankar bahot bada complex de diya hai... ab muje lagta hai ki meri writing sach me bakvas hai... yaar jitni baar teri yeh story padhti hu...me sach me itni khush ho jati hu... tu yakin nahi kar sakti... Pallavi U R going through lot of problem still U have wrote this intense yaar... commendable writing... BEST PART... Jalal try to memorize shayari and his nervousness... seriously I was laughing and blushing hard... then when he realize she leaving him.. he started to sing for her... Yaar this is the best part... then passionate kiss... How can Jodha resist herself... Vow me sach me tere haath chum lu... tune to sabki chutti kar di... TUJE ME ABSE NAYA NAAM DETI HU... ROMANCE E MALIKA... 😆 I bow down ... I salute for your writing... I think me kuch jyada hi bhavuk ho gayi hu... par... Malika e Romance aap hai hi aesi...LOVE U JAAN...🤗 ME PHIR SE COMMENT AUR DETAIL ME DUNGI...YEH TO SIRF TOKEN HAI😆

Love u pallu for such a beautiful confession... 👏 loved it and u rock in shayari's... They were just awesome... 😳

beautifull!!!!!!!!!!😳 ... pallu pls sword fight vala bhi aaj hi... i beg infront of u😭 kab degi😡