Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes I:Thread II Link on Pg 146

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Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Part 6 ! Sweet update! Asya forgot their argument ! Aww welcome baby mehak!

Thank you for liking every update 😃

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Ankahee

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Res😎

Asad...

Zoya...

Just the non conversation these two can have in midst of everything else around them, those fleeting moments seem to last forever. Of course Asad just knows that she does not want to drive, just as Zoe knows that he will enjoy the beach too. So Asad does not like the imagination game that Zoe has initiated with Ayaan 😈, just a tad bit of possessiveness or a bit protective about how she blunders into well intentioned situations? It is going to get so much more interesting. 😆

And the fault finding has been practiced and polished to an art since Zoe was born?😆 Being annoyingly affectionate does come naturally to Asad where Zoe is concerned, it is accepted and acknowledged with such warmth and camaraderie, they have to know this. 😊 How can they not? Bachpan se hi shuru ho gaye the. 😳 It was really cute, this part. In very tender, loving and caring way. TLC that they don't even realize has been in works for years now.

The beach outing is absolutely beautiful, the sea, the breeze, the sands. ❤️ That moment when they resist it, the yearning, that impulse to act out something that would have been natural between best friends and did not, is the cusp of that feeling, the threshold of to be. And when Asad says " I know" the crossover began. Zoe did not have to clear it, yet she concedes, it is a complete circle and just as sea reaches anyone who it wants to, they both will reach where they have to. Noe, you wrote that so beautifully, it becomes the moment that outlasts the fleeting time.

I am so glad that Anwar brought up the Akram issue and his POV, even Jeeju is pretty smart and can see where that setup is leading. And when Zoe will have to retrace her actions it will not just be Asad but another close family person who would have seen the situation as it is. I only hope that Zoe is a good learner. She is in for a rough time. The best thing about this is she surrounded by folks who love her genuinely.

One thing that I am really curious about is will Asad move oceans for Zoe? Will he bring it to Bhopal for her? I have a feeling about this one, he will find a way when he has to. Or am I just shooting in dark empty uncertainties? 😳

Noe, absolutely stellar update . Just brilliant. 👏👏👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I could imagine asad and zoya as kid ...zoya breaking things and asad taking blames

Asad learing A B C D ...and zoya baby distubing him with her cries 😳😆

Always love their bickering 😳and that smile of his behind the coffee mug !☺️

I hope somewhere inside asad himself knows why he gets irritated with ayaan 😉

Loved their phone convo...😳

And the beach talk ...Asad go man hug her don't stop ...😆

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Zanutix

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Finally! Chapter 7 is here!

THANK YOU!

Yes, I'm the reader who so badly wanted AsYa as Emma and Mr. Knightley that she lost her mind! 😆

Anyway, the beach scene. Oh My God. 😳

Unconsciously, he mirrored Zoya's action. Literally and figuratively, he dug heels of his shoes deeper in sand to stop himself from taking two forward steps and hugging her.

"I know." He finally said. Zoya looked up.

"I know." He repeated this time with a small smile that reflected on Zoya's face. Smile was followed by a small shrug as if to say forget it'. Her smile widened as she held his gaze. His hair was falling on his forehead. She knew he didn't like it, but didn't reach out to move it. Suddenly she was afraid of making any movement, afraid of breaking the gaze.

This. This part. I fell in love.

I was screaming! Like literally. HUG HER ALREADY ASAD. PUSH BACK THAT STRAND OF HAIR ALREADY ZOYA!

Sorry, I didn't mean to scare you! 😳

And,

The waves had been doing their work - diligently, slowly, quietly, singing an age old song. They had done it thousands of times before. They would do it thousands of times again. They had reached those who were not willing to get wet and they had done it without them realizing.

Perfect.

The waves made them realise that there was more to 'them'. There was more to their friendship.

I loved the adjectives you used - so apt! Just like the age old songs, the feelings that have been building up since time immemorial will surface and come to light. And boy, I can't wait for it to happen. ❤️

Also, the part where Asad gets irritated by the attention Ayaan is getting! 😈

Well, Zoya is no different! She gets jealous of Humeira too!

I so wanted them to stay at the beach - the whole night.

I felt a void when Asad left for Bhopal.

OMG, GURL. You're story's making me crazy, in a good way! 😆

I love it love it love it!

I won't tell you to update soon. You can take your own sweet time.

I'll spend my time reading and re reading and re reading the 7 parts! Haha!

Thanks for the update!🤗

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Ridzi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice update
Thanks for the pm
Asad Zoya beach scene was superb-Loved it

when will be ayaan coming? Maybe there will be new twists with his entry

Will be waiting for the next update

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Luckyforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

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amazing update...
please continue soon atleast this time dear ...

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marcoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Such a beautiful update

At last we get to see progress among asad and zoya

Asad was irritated of ayaan

K m starting to think he is unaware of his feelings for zoya

Same for her where she has a folder in her pc of his pics

Hopefully she stresses on anwars words

Update soonishhh

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Anjinie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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awesome loved it! esp the part with Asad and Zoya at the beach as well as Anwar n Zoyas conv

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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"Khud ko dekha hain? Utha ke le jaaoge..."

"Your head is very heavy for sure."

"Nonsensical girl."

🤣

I just love AAK vocalizing witty dialogues! 😳 Fantastic prose, which has remain consistent from the beginning! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

"One moment she was talking him into getting her to beach and now stood before him like a little girl ready to be reprimanded one more time. Unconsciously, he mirrored Zoya's action. Literally and figuratively, he dug heels of his shoes deeper in sand to stop himself from taking two forward steps and hugging her.

"I know." He finally said. Zoya looked up.

"I know." He repeated this time with a small smile that reflected on Zoya's face. Smile was followed by a small shrug as if to say forget it'. Her smile widened as she held his gaze. His hair was falling on his forehead. She knew he didn't like it, but didn't reach out to move it. Suddenly she was afraid of making any movement, afraid of breaking the gaze.

The waves had been doing their work - diligently, slowly, quietly, singing an age old song. They had done it thousands of times before. They would do it thousands of times again. They had reached those who were not willing to get wet and they had done it without them realizing."

This scene was amazing! ❤️ Asad has great self restraint! 😲 Why didn't he just hug her? 😉

Delightful chapter! 😎 Calm before the storm!

Great work! 👏 Love your interpretation and justification to the book!

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