Arakshi OS - The River Flows in You

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

Heylooo!! Me back again totally refreshed and inspired from my Swiss holiday😆

And sooo you have to deal with a new story🤪

This one is a bit simple and a little different - it's written a little differently. Hope that you like it! (and hope it doesn't feel repetitive😕)

And this one is dedicated to all my friends who feel lost in this busy life (like me). Hope this helps you find and rediscover yourself😉

This was hugely inspired by the train journeys I did through the mountains... there was always a river. And then the piano music started playing in my mind which fueled the inspiration to write this. (music clip below!)

I highly recommend listening to it whilst you read (it's just a piano instrumental), but if not then koi naaa😃

OK, no more blabbering...happy reading!😃

P.S - Yes, I am taking you back to Himachal. And also, it's from Sakshi's POV.

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Don't know if the last few lines made any sense... and hope I was able to bring out the story the way I wanted to 😳 Don't forget to leave your comments and likes😃🤗

And a little request - please don't read it silently😛

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update Ritu di.

Loved it.

Wowww.

U described the nature and Sakshi's step of finding herself beautifully.

And Arjun helped her...

Really loved it.

Plz con ur other stories too.

Missing them..

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Kiya

@Kiyaa-Rhapsody

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

okay so when i first saw the subject of your pm, i immediately thought of the river flows in you song by yiruma. I absolutely love to play that on the piano whenver i can, gives me a sense of tranquility and peace, taking me to a parallel world of happiness.

ANYWAY, before i start to over-indulge about my love of piano and music:

ALKJSJKLSHF. Seriously, how do you even manage to do this every single time? Everything was penned down so perfectly, honestly! You really need to write a book girl! :) I would definitely buy it. It was such a beautiful, soulful read. The way you portrayed her journey was seriously... im speechless. Thank you for writing it so I could read something so magnificent! Really, kudos ritu! :))))

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--Iqra--

@--Iqra--

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was..oh my goodness, I'm speech less. It was serene. So, so beautiful. There was a past, a present and a future. I could see her eyes light up again, the confidence regained. His support, wow. Lovely, lovely job. And thanks for the PM! <3

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Rituuu 🤗 🤗
welcome back !!!!!!!!!!!
it was beautiful 👏 👏 👏 👏 (honestly... aren't you bored with this line ???)

very very well written yaar...
beautiful !!!!!!! 👍🏼

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

awe!!!!ritu...

it was so cutely written...

welcome back after ur vacation...

hope u enjoyed well...

they are married couple...

he was a great husband who understand her well...so sweet...

all the parts are written so lovely...i loved trust part the most...

superb👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼.

waiting for ur other stories...

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@Arakshiya_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

supereb...awsome...amazing...
its THE BEST..
U ROCK AGAIN WITH ARAKSHI...
its magical...the way arjun help her to find herself back...u write it beatifully...
love u for this wonderfull OS...
miss ur other stories plz update it soon...

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

wow this was awsm

it was so beautifully written

the way you portrayed their emotions and feelings was fab

loved it

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sakshiarjun

@sakshiarjun

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

First of all,welcome back...🤗 Missed u and ur stories dear...

As always, this was also a perfect piece of work...

The music was very soothing... Now I hold it very close to my heart...❤️

The story just not only depicts the case of Arakshi but every person in this busy world..

But everyone are not so fateful to get a partner like Arjun...

He is a perfect husband material😆 He sprang into action when felt that he is loosing her... And he did knew what was exactly needed to bring her back to her true self...😊

HAPPILY EVER AFTER...❤️❤️❤️

If this is the outcome of ur vacation then I will suggest u to go on such vacations frequently but come back soon with such creative works which we could cherish forever...

Love u so much sissy...