Arakshi OS - The River Flows in You

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

so beautiful ...👍🏼...love it ... i wish ... u should right something romantic ... like first night of Arakshi .😳... i mean u write so beautiful ... ur way of writing ... Awesome ... now i want ... u should write something sooo romantic ... i trust u ... u will write that so beautiful ... so pure :) feelings ... plzzz think ... something 🤗

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manurocks

@manurocks

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

what do i say????????????//

ur stories have that magic which takes me into their world...i just forget where i am reading ur stories...!!!!!!!!

u & ur stories both r really awesome...!!!!!!!

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Simple and innocent thought
Good try to find herself in this busy
Schedule
Nice work love to read surrounding area detail
Feel presence there

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Once again beautiful
very well written
thanks for pm

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

👏 once again u have given us this beautiful story with beautiful words and scenes

i could almost feel what sakshi felt the nature , water rocks grass etc may be because i

also am back from holiday in nature

and ya this one was different in this one arjun helps sakshi to rediscover herself and then their love

thanks for pm

just reading ur story abt water i remembered 2 songs u should listen they r among my

favorite songs

1. silli hawa choo gayi -movie is libaas

2. khamosh sa afsana pani pe lihka hota - same movie libaas

u should listen these songs and if u like them use them in ur story 😊

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Rituuu rituuu welcome shelcome back ji 🤗

I totally love it...the way you wrote the story from starting to the ending was awesome blossom ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Reading about how arjun never did complain about sakshi job and then when he felt it was too much brought her in the nature to rediscover herself and their love was beautiful 😃 😃

Though when i read about arjun standing with the suitcase did make me scared but then while i continued reading i was blown away with your ideas and how you penned it down 😳 😳 😳

And and the instrument song was a perfect blending with the story 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thank you sooo sooo much and biiig biiig wala hugs to you 🤗 🤗

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Beutiful again

and yes u said it right that music was soothing

I then listened to other pieces by the same person too

The way that u brought back every feeling was mesmerizing

apt choice of words and situations

good job Ritu

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Awesome one Ritu
The music was so soothing
It took to me an other world just like your OS
This was much needed after a stressful week
It was just amazing,Magical
Loved it
Great job👏👏👏👏👏

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Trust,Comfort,Hope,Dreams,Ambitions.All in one is difficult to find in a relationship but it can only be your Arjun who can make impossible possible. 😉
Your writings lands me in a dream world wherein I actually visualize the two not only in this but other fics as well.

P.S:Soothing piano notes that goes in my favorites.😃

P.P.S:Hope you had a rocking holidays 😉

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Glad ur back!

was eagerly waiting for u..to return...too mch of sefish i am u see 😛

it ws a beautiufl journey to rediscover oneself...yes its true ritu...w get busy in our busyy nd hectic scheduled lives so mch dat we somehow forget to be what we really are...
and in such lost world...we crave for such a moment of comfort...moment of hope...moment to trust ourself again...moment of love!

thnx a lot for such a OS...whch make us all realise...dat we should step out of this mechanical lives atleast often, nd should step on th path to rediscover ourselves...

keep writing!