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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow dear..
Awesome and mind blowing update.
Just loved it.
Do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Sushma is back...!!!!
Cont sooon
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please check the earlier posts for the replies...thank you for the comments everyone...here comes the next part...hope you like it...loads of investigation going on for a couple of updates...so a bit lighter part to relax your mind and mine too...

ishi hope this covers up my absence for so long...😉

pretty long part ahead..hope you people dont fall asleep..😕


Chapter 30

Dixit wasn't unknown to the ways, ETF interrogated criminals. He knew he would not be able to keep shut for a long time. They would make him speak anytime now. Specially Arjun Rawte, who was famous for his rough interrogations which had opened the most sealed lips as well. All he could do now was divert their minds to something else. But what confused him was how much they already knew and what was they wanted to know from him.

He knew well sushma was aware of his arrest and had already taken steps for the plans ahead. The plan needed amendments if ETF had come to know of it already but before that he needed to know how much ETF already knew before he informs her through his secret informers.

Dixit was lost in his own thoughts rubbing the bandage on his arm when Rathod and Arjun marched in followed by chotu, who waited at a distance. Shree and Ayesha was at the control outside the room, recording the interrogation.

Arjun dragged a chair in front of dixit and stepped one foot on it, balancing the another on the ground. Rathore stood beside him with his hands on his hips.

'Dixit last time, agar zinda rehena hai to tell us, sushma ka plan kya hai?' rathod asked him calmly this time,

Dixit looked at Rathod and then at Arjun with teasing eyes. He was not getting the positives vibes whether ETF knows anything at all about their plan. So he had to play his cards safe with them.

'Sushma ka plan mujhe kaise pata hoga ACP Rathod?? Wo to apko pata hona chahiye na, akhir ap usse kitne saalo se jante hai, aur fir ap dono ke beech,' dixit replied with a sarcastic tone and a smirk playing on his lips,

Rathore fisted his palm on the arm of the chair and glared back at him. Arjun was looking at the ground but everyone knew he was in the verge to blast any moment of time now. Shree was hearing the conversation with shocked eyes and looked at Ayesha but found her calm and waiting attentively for the return statement from rathod or Arjun.

'pehele bhi kaha hai,firse kehe raha hu, zinda rehena hai to humari madaat karo, waise bhi tum logo ka plan kabhi successful nehi hoga, aur gaddari ki sazaa pata haina tumhe,' rathod again spoke up, losing his patience gradually,

'Ye ap kya kehe rahe hai ? Sushma ke saath apne itna sara waqt bitaya hai, apko to pata hoga wo kaise,kab,kaha kya karti hai. mujhe kaise pata hoga? ACP Rathod agar apka kala chitta maine khola na to samajh ayega gaddari kise kehete hai,' dixit spoke up sarcastically,

Rathod gave a wicked smile and stepped forward towards him. In a jerk of a second he held onto his color and pulled him up, facing him straight in his eyes,

'dixit, hume achi tarah pata hai, tum dono ka rishta kya hai. waise tumhare jaise pati sushma ke liye hi thik hai. Akhir ek gaddar hi to gaddar ko sahi maine mein pehechan sakta hai. Jaise sushma ne desh ke saath, begunaah logo ke saath gaddari ki hai waise tum humare department ke saath gaddari kar rhe ho.
Tumhare jaise kuch corrupt officers ke liye log pure department ko galat samajhte hai..per ab tumhara asli chehera sabke samne aa gaya hai. natak band karo aur sach batao, shayad tumhari sazaa thori kam ho jaye.' rathod shouted at him, pushing a shocked and angry dixit,

'department? Kiski baat kar rahe ho ACP? Yeah department kiske saath insaaf kar paya hai? Yeah department khud ek gaddar hai, jisne humare saath gaddari ki hai. Hum sirf uska badla le rahe hai..aplog ke saath bhi to hua hai, kyu ACP Arjun ap ka bhi to ek badla baki haina, department ne tumhari madaa ki hai? tumhara badla insaaf aur koi aur le to wo gaddari?' dixit replied with a disgust look on his face,

Arjun gave an angry glare at him and stood up in front of him. He held Dixit by his hair and pulled back making him look up at him,

'agar tumhe itna kuch pata hai, to itna to pata hi hoga, mere samne koi bhi chup nehi rehe sakta, usse muh kholna hi parta hai. Ab tum sidhe se bataoge ya mein apne tarike apnau jo tumhe aur tumhari so-called patni ko bilkul pasand nehi ayega,' Arjun spoke up in a threatening tone,

Dixit smirked back him. Arjun left him and walked to his back.

'Dixit, we can make a deal, agar tum hume plans ki sari details bata te ho, to hum tumhari sazaa kam kar denge, tumhe sirf suspend kar diya jaiga lekin agar nehi bataya to tumhe bhi pata hai, tumhare saath kya hoga, lekin tumhe ye nehi pata ye interrogation tumhare liye kitni bari sazaa ban jayegi,' Arjun spoke to him and waited,

Dixit started laughing at this. He was now completely sure ETF doesnt have the least information about their plan.

'ACP sahab, ab jab aplogo ko pata hai, mere aur sushma ke bare mein to itna to samaj gaye honge ki mein sushma ko kitna pyar karta hu..aur pyar ke liye insaan kya kuch nehi karta,ek gaddari to bohot mamuli si baat hai. aur humara plan, tum to kya koi bhi hume nehi rok sakta samjhe ya fir tumhari bhasa mein samjhau ? tabahi to hogi hi..'

'pyar? Isse tum pyar kehete ho? tumhara badla department se hain, to uske liye nirdos logo ki jaan kyu lena chahte ho? Unlogo ne to koi galti nehi ki, fir unhe sazaa kyu milti hai harbar? Sushma ne abhi tak hazaro jaan li hai, najane kitne parivar toot gaye hai, kitno ki zindagi bikhar gayi hai, kitno ne apna pyar khoya hai aur ab wo firse aisa hi kuch karne wali hai, aur uski madaat karne ka naam tum pyar kehe rahe ho?' rathod spoke up giving him a meaningful look,

'bare maksad ke liye choti choti qurbaniya deni parti hai. humara maksaat sirf insaaf pana hai, aur uske liye agar kuch jaan chali bhi gayi to kya fark parta hai. Abtak atank failaya ab apno ke liye lar rahe hai, tum log nehi rok sakte hume, sab barbad ho jayega,' dixit replied with lots of arragance and started laughing hysterically,

'Dixit,'Arjun had lost it again. He pushed back the chair he was resting on and pounced on dixit, making him lose his balance and fall on the ground along with the chair. Arjun again started hitting him hard. Rathod tried to stop him but all in vain. Arjun picked up the chair from the ground and banged it on dixit, breaking the chair into pieces.

Chotu helped Rathod and both held onto Arjun, who was fuming at a bleeding Dixit.

'Stop it rawte, bas karo, control yourself,' Rathod barked at arjun who frowned at him angrily,

Arjun jerked out of Chotu's hold and turned away. Rathod looked back at Dixit, who was again bleeding at places and might have sprained his forearm, for he was sitting on the ground holding on it tightly with closed eyes.

Rathod sat down in front of him with his gun held casually in his palm.

'pehele bhi kaha tha, sach bata do, shayad bach jao, per tumhe to jina hi nehi hai aur batana bhi nehi hai, rawte tumhe torture karke marega aur mein enconter mein. Aur case ko kaise sajana hai ye to tumhe pata hi hoga, tum to ye sab kafi karte aaye ho. Do minute soch lo tumhe kya karna hai..warna hum hamesha ready hai,' rathod unlocked his gun and caressed the metal with his forefinger.

Dixit was now in a fix. He didnt know what Sushma had planned for his escape. But whatever she had planned he needs to escape the clutches of these two animals now. He was sure from the previous encounters Arjun would not hesitate to beat him to death and rathod would efficiently turned it into an accidental death or encounter.

He looked at the two faces in front. Arjun was standing with crossed arms, his eyes never left him. Rathod was standing at the other side leaning on the wall playing with his gun. Chotu was at the door with a grumpy expression on his face and hands fisted tight.

Dixit looked at Rathod again and nodded his head gaining his attention. He sat up straight and chotu got a glass of water and a chair for him. He drank it calmly and then kept the glass aside and looked up at them.

'I am an orphan. My parents died in a plane crash when i was 10 years old. After losing my parents I started living with my uncle who sold me to a man who later smuggled me to Goa. I would have been put into begging if not for anna who took me with him once when i met with an accident with his car.

I was in rage for the behavior of my uncle and Anna knew he could use it to his advantage. He became my foster father. I loved him for the care and concern he always showed me. Sushma was just 6 when i met her. We were childhood friends and then fell in love. We wanted to get married and spoke to Anna but he plainly rejected the proposal and shoved me out of his gang. He thought i had misused his trust.

Later when i started helping him with department secret information and passing over his illegal activities without hindrance, he again started trusting me. Sushma too helped me in all this. I gained his trust back and we got married.

But then the department got alerted and planted an undercover agent. By the time we came to know of it, Anna was arrested in a raid along with dealers, consignments and his secret hideouts too. We had to get anna out of the prison before he was tortured to death. So the hijacking of the bus full of civilians. But department ne gaddari ki. Investigative officer Ranbir Singh. Mere saath uski training hui thi. I knew him and his lust for money. We paid him to know what the department was planning from inside and in turn help us with the rescue operation for anna and others.

He told us about Anna's release but he never told us a tracker and a remote controlled bomb was fixed with Anna when they left him. The woman who anna had taken with him during escape was tayi,' Anna's sister. She wasnt our real mother but loved me like her own child and for sushma, tayi' just didnt give her birth but was her mother.

We lost our parents and what happened next? The department showed it like an encounter. The bomb blast in the bus was also planned by them but the Interpol started operations against us. Our business, our lives, Sushma lost her child, our rivals were against our lives, our men were getting against us, they started joining the other underworld dons, Anna lost his power in the underworld, everything took a toll and we had to flee to dubai.

For some deals Sushma had to return to goa and thats when you met her, your SA, sapna arora, yahi naam tha na?' dixit spoke looking at Rathod who was listening to him attentively all this while but the mention of SA and he looked down feeling a slight thud at his heart. Dixit continued,

'Sushma ne mujhe bataya tha apke bare mein. But she was already playing her games with ravi, remember? He used to help her transfer weapons, currency and drugs unknown to his own self.

Wo blast Sushma ka first attempt tha but it was small. Just showing her presence and her power still in the country. It was a mean attack on her rivals. Ravi helped her unknowingly.

Later after the blast he was arrested which was quite usual and before he could make a sketch of sushma and reveal her, she killed him. Before the blast sushma flew away to dubai, yaad hai na ACP Rathore, her absence during her birthday.

Wo blast se police department aur underworld kafi had tak hil to gayi thi lekin badla pura nehi hua tha. Sushma apna badla itni asani se nehi legi. Ab wo dhamaka hoga. Aur iss bar wo bekar nehi jayega.'

'dhamaka? Badla? Kis cheeze ka badla le rahe ho tum? Sushma ne najane kitne logo ki tayi unse chin lihai, kitno ke bache yateem ho gaye hai, aur jab khud pe ayi to badla lene ke liye pagal ho rahe ho? Ye tumhari sazaa hai. lekin ye sazaa bohot kam hai. Tumhe usse kahi zyada sazaa milna chahiye aur milega, main wada karta hu tumse.' A furious rathod barked at dixit who seemed quite doubtful of his own analysis,

'blast kab aur kaha hone wala hai?' arjun asked dixit,

'mujhe nehi pata,' dixit replied,

Arjun unlocked his gun and pointed it on his forehead,

'batao warna..' he spoke up furiously,

'mujhe nehi pata, ye sab details sirf sushma ko hi pata hai,' dixit replied arrogantly,

Arjun looked back at Rathod who too met his eyes. They conveyed something through the gazes and walked out, tugging their gun back.

Shree stood up while Arjun and Sameer came out.

'disgusting, i dont believe sushma apne badle ki aag mein pura sheher ko jalana chahti hai,' rathod banged his fist on the table,

'chahti hai rathod, per jala nehi payegi,' Arjun replied back with an assuring gaze,

'Main commissioner sir se milta hu. Anna ke case mein kuch pehelu aise hai, jo hume nehi pata,' rathod informed to which everyone agreed.

'Shree mujhe interrogation ki recording chahiye,' arjun ordered.

'yes sir abhi deta hu,' shree replied hurriedly working on his laptop.

'Ayesha Chuahan ka kya hua?' rathod asked ayesha,

'sir wo aj lautenge, hum usse kal mil sakte hai,' she replied to which rathod nodded and walked away.

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Arjun had enclosed himself inside his cabin listening to the recording continuously. Sameer had fixed an appointment with the commissioner in the evening and was completing his pending works before that. Chotu had went out to meet his informer who had called him for some urgent help.

Ayesha and Shree were engrossed in decoding the third file on the chip and sakshi was still out for work and hadn't returned back.

It was evening and Sameer walked out after assigning others their duties and informing them their scheduled work. He drove towards the commissioner office but the busy hours in Mumbai road never allowed him to move freely. He stopped in a long traffic jam cursing the Mumbai traffic.

He started driving within several minutes but again had to stop in the traffic. His mind was continuously replaying back dixit's words and he was continuously trying to keep the thoughts away. When it was getting too suffocating with SA roaming about all over his head and mind he lowered the windscreen and looked outside. He was stuck beside a residential colony and since it was evening small kids were roaming about the roads in their cycles or some walking with their balls.

He too had went on racing on bicycles with his friends in his childhood days and had hurt himself loads of times. But the wounds were never treated by his parents, they were either treated by his friends family or the servants in his house. Later when he grew up bit more he avoided to heal the wounds. The wounds remained open, hurting him and reminding more of his loneliness.

He was lost in his thought of his miserable life when a dash of red caught his eyes. He looked around and found a small girl clad in a white top and red skirt, unkept small curls falling on her forehead, was jumping in front of a flower vendor.

She was shooting angry glares at the man and yelling at the top of her voice. Though Sameer couldn't really make out what she wanted to say or get but saw the vendor come out and drag her away from his stall to the side of the road. But the kid won't give up.

She stood almost in the middle of the road on the other side, counting something from a plastic bag in complete concentration. He looked at her amused when he found a young boy speeding towards her in a cycle. He tried to call but she was too engrossed in her work.

In an impulse Sameer opened the door and rushed out. He crossed the road between the waiting cars and pulled the girl to himself before the cycler hit her.

He held onto the girl tight and glared at the retreating bicycle. He would have checked her for any injury but to his utter dismay the little girl started wriggling in his hold, hitting and kicking him. He quickly put her back on the road bending down to give her a piece of his mind but before he could even open his mouth, the girl started scolding him in her sweet childish accent.

'ye kya kiya tumne? Dikhai nehi deta mein ek im..po..tant kam kal lai thi? Ab mujhe filse ginna palega. Ek to pehele se pa..leshun hu aul tum..' the girl glared back at him angrily, pointing her for finger at him,

Sameer hadn't expected this. It was getting difficult for him to decide whether to laugh or to scold her. He was angry already so decided the later.

'der foot ki larki..tum pareshan ho? Abhi agar mein nehi ata to chot lag jati. Aise beech raste mein kya kar rahi thi? Aur mummy, papa kaha hai tumhari?' he told her, trying to hide his laugh at her weird expression,

She didn't reply back. She glared at him and then looked back inside the plastic bag. She seemed thoughtful looking inside the plastic back with a sad face. Sameer kneeled down beside her and looked into the plastic bag. There was money inside, mostly coins and a few notes.

'paise leke kya kar rahi thi?' he asked her politely,

The girl looked at him.

'pehele batao, del foot ma..lab?' she asked him with furious eyes,

Sameer couldn't control his chuckle now. Her glare deepened with that and he control himself muttering a sorry softly. He kept his palm on her hair and said,

'itna hai der foot,' he gave her the measurement,

'ohh fil thik hai.' She replied and looked back into the plastic back almost forcing her head inside it.

'kya kar rahi ho? Aur itne paise leke kyu ghum rahi ho? Tumari mummy papa kaha hai? Kiske saath ayi ho yaha?' sameer asked her holding her head before she settles her head inside the bag,

The girl remained silent for sometime and then voiced out her thoughts,

'mumma ne kaha hai..stangle se baat nehi karte,' she spoke up clutching onto the plastic bag tightly,

'stranger...sahi hai, lekin tum yaha akele kaise aa gayi? Mummy dhoond rahi hogi na?'

'naani ke saath, naani wo cake shop mein hai..mumma ko nehi pata, ap bhi maat batana samjhe,' she ordered him showing him her tiny fist,

'samaj gaya madam, Arjun ki lady avatar ho, per itne paiso ka karna kya hai?' he again asked her, looking at the slowly moving traffic,

'mujhe mumma ke liye wo white bo..flowers lena hai,per wo aadmi kehe raha hai, paise kam hai,' she said with a sad expression,' mujhe fil se ginna palega,'she again looked inside the bag,

Sameer was amused at this little beauty. Unknown to him he was smiling. He held her hand and took her to a nearby bench in the flower shop, which she followed quite reluctantly hitting him. He made her sit on it. The girl was continuously shouting gaining attention around but sameer ignored all the disgusted look on the faces of the passerby.

'yahi ruko, kahi maat jana, mein abhi aya,' he said to her with a meaningful look,

As if she understood him and sat down keeping a track on his movement biting her lips and clutching onto the plastic bag more tightly. Sameer had seen the cars move and left her to park his car in a safe side of the road. He kept a regular tab on the little girl he left aside and quickly hopped back to her. He sat beside her and took the plastic bag from her which she kept holding on with both her hands.

'firse ginte hai iss bar shayad pura paisa mile jaye,' he told the girl,

The girl was giving him a suspicious glare but the flower shop beside was too tempting to resist for her. She gave the money to him and both started counting, she giving the coins one by one to him and sameer keeping a count on them. At the end it came down to 37 rupees.

The girl looked at him with wide hopeful eyes. Sameer knew it would be difficult to get a bunch of those white lilies she wanted but the look in her eyes and her innocent getup nudged him to help her.

'chalo uss aadmi se baat karte hai,' he said holding her hand to get down the bench,

Sameer put the money back inside the plastic bag and stepped out. She held onto his hands and stood down, but instantly left it when she realized he was still a stangle'. He took her inside and made her choose a beautiful bouquet but she choose a small simple one . A small bunch of white liles.

She took pride of her choice and held the bunch tight with her. She went with Sameer to pay. It cost her some more money which sameer added from himself avoiding her eyes. She smiled big when the shopkeeper didn't speak a word and gave her the lilies. She walked out proudly holding his hand.

Both walked out and sameer turned to her, who was smiling and jumping smelling the flowers,

'ab batao, tumhara naam kya hai? Aur kaha reheti ho?' he asked,

The girl forwarded her palm.

'Ak..an...sa...ghal mein reheti hu,' she said, (author's note read akansha)

Sameer happily shook hands with her.

'Sameer, ghar kaha hai tumhara? Rasta pata hai? Chalo mein chor deta hu,'

'lekin uncal(author's note read uncle) mumma ne kaha hai kisi stangal ke saath kahi nehi jate, ghal bhi nehi batate,' she told him rolling her eyes,

'mein stranger kaha hu? Hum to dost haina? Tum mera naam janti hu, main bhi, to hum dost haina? ' sameer explained to which she seemed thoughtful and after a silence she looked up.

She had decided.

'to mein tumhe dost hi bulau?' she said with a smile,

Sameer nodded hard to her with a big smile. The chat continued and he walked with her to a nearby cake shop where an old lady came to her worried. She assured the lady and turned back to him.

'thank you dost..' She shouted at him with a big cheerful smile.

Sameer hurried to the commissioner's office. He was already quite late. The day was long and he was tired but the hurting memories he had just gone through some time back were replaced by a cheerful laugh and the call dost' was intoxicating. Finally after years, he was truely happy again.

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done for now..i know my readers are smart and they have guessed who the girl is...so before sam knows..I am presenting akansha kapoor



hope you like her...

ishi stop drooling on her dad...🤢 aur abhi isi se kaam chalao..😆😆

leave your feedbacks plz

next update will be late...may be a week or more...
Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago
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unres...me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Thank u so much for the entry of Akansha...🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗
Actually I forgot what I read in the first part after reading second part...so read that again...😆😆😆 😆😆😆
Awesome update...
Dixit very well know that these two 2 ACPs might lead him to death if he didn't speak...😆😆😆
Kitna dusht aadmi hai Dixit...itni maar khane ke baad bhi nahi bol raha...
I wish Dixit ko thodi aur maar padti...😆😆😆
Whatever Dixit's uncle did was wrong but whatever he & Sushma are doing is not right either...😡😡😡 😡😡😡😡
Feeling bad for Sameer...😭😭😭 😭😭😭
Haaayyeee loved this cutie pie...🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗
Sameer ko daant diya...😆😆😆
'pehele batao, del foot ma..lab?...🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣
Arjun ki lady Avatar nahi hai Sameer yeh toh lady dabang ki Xerox copy hai... 🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣
Di...by writing stangle instead of stranger...u actually made me forget spelling of stranger...😳😳😳
Why cake & while lilies???😕😕😕...Aisha ka birthday hai kya???
Finally Annu got white lilies for her mumma...😃😃😃 😃😃😃
Dost... nice name to Sam by our Annu...
Thank u so much di...finally aapne Annu ke darshan kara diye...🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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unres...
Interrogation scene was Kamal, Dhamal & Bemisaal.
Arjun's berserk attitude & Rathod's calm & then Pharoo attitude was brilliantly written. Loved it. You nailed it girl.
I wish Arjun's writer would have written something as plausible as this.👏👏👏

What kind of a revenge was that.
To Avenge her father's death they killed many innocent souls.

He said it right. Dixit only deserves Sushma😡
What a pathetic guy he is. I am glad that you gave him punches by Arjun.😆

'I am an orphan. My parents died in a plane crash when i was 10 years old. After losing my parents...Well after reading this. I am not sure If I entirely hate him. His evilness in the result of his bad experiences. He was not born this way he was moulded.🤢

I don't know what police did with Anna was right or wrong But I know one thing that He DESERVED IT😡

OMG. You have taken care of every minute detail. You story is perfectly planned & that is evident in your all updates.


Arjun had enclosed himself inside his cabin listening to the recording continuously. I read the interrogation again after reading this But I didn't find anything unusual😕

The wounds remained open, hurting him and reminding more of his loneliness.This line was so heavy. It was showing his whole life in just one sentence.
I don't like these kind of parents. they give me creeps 😳

Ayesha ki beti to Ayesha ki tarha Lady dabang nikli. I will call her junior Dabang😆

She was shooting angry glares at the man and yelling at the top of her voice. Baap re itna gussa. Itni tigni (mini) si bachi or esa attitude😃

'pehele batao, del foot ma..lab🤣🤣🤣

He kept on looking in plastic bag😆
It was damn funny.

akansha. Nice name. I liked it.

It was a mood lighter or rather mood brighter part😃
You wrote Sam-Annu scene brilliantly. It was neither dull nor out of the line.
I simply could't stop smiling😳
And yah It was hilarious 👏

PS. Pic is so cute.
The girl resembles Ayesha.😳

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it rimi awesome
sushma is really out of senses
ya what she suffered was not good
but its not at all justified what she is doing
loved ayjun ne dixit ko dhoya 👏
N this akansha
she was so sweet
loved her o the core
so rathore se dsti bhi kar li 😆😆
sameer ne phool kharide 😳😳
waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
The interrogation part was nicely written
Loved Akansha
She is sooo cute
Loved her convo with Sam
amazing
waiting for the next part
continue soon
Edited by skrafty - 11 years ago
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Kya interrogation tha...
Arjun aur Rathore...
Apni ek loss ke liye kithnon ke jaan le rahi ye Sushma aur Dixit...
Sushma only deserve Dixit... Sam ne sahi kaha...
The cuttest and awesome part...
Sam and Akansha...
She is so cute... Sam ki comment mujhe b
ahot pasand aayi... Bilkul junior Rawte...
Akansha ki story yahi khatam honge ya aur bhi hai...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb dear.. Lovely.. Cute kid.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..

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