Arshi SS::ILMANY!Thd 2 10.4 & 11.1 (07/04)thread 3 link on PG 152 - Page 84

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Lovd it
Lovd d way Raphael clearing her doubts nd MU's.
Beautifully writtn
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful song ! A very nice one.

Cute chapter. Loved the part where Arnav while feeling silk. Khushi's hair, has a monologue...lol... He remembered Payal's slap !

Oh god ! Goosebumps in the rain ! Well, drenched in the rain, if Arnav looks at khushi with his hot gaze, then she will get goosebumps in anticipation itself.

It was full of pure innocent love and concern...loved it.

Yup the chapter was a little too short ! How could you do this ?
The whole getting wet in the rain had just started... Well not started... Abhi toh haath hi pakda tha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Still wet and carries into their room. Trembling lips feel soft lips into a kiss. Snap the controlled thread breaks and Arnav moves a step further, kissing Khushi on her neck and shoulder while pulling her sleeve slowly down... Only to be pushed away and brought back into senses. I am Sorry ! I shouldnt have forced... Was all Arnav told Khushi, before telling her to shower before she caught a cold in her wet clothes.

Dr. Rafael... I love you this time round. The way you explained Arnav's true love for Khushi. Letting her ask the doubts and then you counter answering them was so sweet. Khushi being Arnav's drug, without which he cannot live... Khushi going away was Arnav's biggest fear, giving example of Hitler. You re-defined love.. It was a brilliant job done. All made sense and cleared Khushi's hesistance. Dr. Rafael you really did your best this time. Khushi looks upon you like her angel and you look upon her as a daughter, with whom she had shared everything before taking her first step towards her life...

Loved the way, Khushi wanted to be in the house and talk to Dr. Rafael, instead of going out in the garden. Arnav still patient during Dr. Rafael's visit, as he didnt want anything wrong to happen which would push Khushi back towards her cocoon.

Dr. Rafael an Angel, true for Khushi... Not a physco, wierd, mad person which the world called him.

In the last chapter , stopping and just standing was a good thing, as it wouldnt have left the intensity and impact of this chapter, which was much needed.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww fabulous update
I really love the bond between Khushi and Dr.Raphel he truly his angel
Thank god finally khushi's fear was gone
This was the best update so far
Loveeed it sooo much
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.
The dance was sweet...😊

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