The 'How To' Series. A Series of Zain-Aliyah OS' [OS#3 - Pg 6]

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vinu

@vinu127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

This was amazing!!! worth all the long wait!👏

had read the 1st 2 but not commented coz was not active out then! sorry abt that😭

Best part of ur series is that zain is so damn intelligent and he can see wats happening wid aliya coz of the cudails in his house... Aur kya masterplan banaya usne! n Chand bi is his partner in crime👍🏼

i must say that the way u write is so involving! i was literally fuming when Zain was shouting at Aliya!

now waiting to see(i mean read) Zain's reaction about Aliya's burnt hand... phas gaya hai bechara! if he cares for her, then his attempt to get suraiyya's sympathy for aliya will face a speed-breaker! if he does not, then he himself will curse him a hundred curses along with seeing aaliya's tears again😭!!! so sad for zain... will be waiting for the next "How to..."

pls update faster this time... pls...pls...pls...

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mridula

@-Minion-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

amazing update.
Zain plan is just mindblowing.what an idea to make Suri and Aliya close to each other.last scene just awesome.i wish CV'S read u'r OS,i want to see that happen in show.

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blah.

@santiagosentyou

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

That was sooo Zain-like and adorable <3

First of all, I LOVE the concept.

And then, again, I LOVE the dialogues. They're something I would expect of those characters.

I like that you've mentioned the bipolar stuff and her irresistible food too.

OS#3 is as good as the previous ones.

Keep writing! :)

Great job.

PS. I love the simplicity in your writing :)

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

you are an awesome writer.

These OS series are wonderful.

I love zain for acting smart. Being responsible for his wife and then making successful attempts to bridge gaps between his mom and wife by manipulating them brilliantly is just awesome. He does n't love Aliya but he is already falling in love with her and soon he may confess it to her.

I love the end of this One shot, mami concern and cute scolding was what Aliya always dream about since the day she step in barkat villa and her dream came true, all thanks to Zain amazing planning.

Update series soon

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

First of all, thanks for the PM! And this OS was wonderful! The concept of your OneShots is simply superb ! Hamara Zain is always planing something unique 😉 That towel scene was way too good! The best part was that Zain loved seeing Aaliya irritated. He enjoyed commanding her for his own benefit too lol! And then Surayya controlling her smile was soo cute ! I could actually imagine all this ! The way your story is progressing ! O Behn jaldi update Kiya Karo :P I checked your series yesterday only to make sure of the next OS! 😉 Do PM me next time as well! I'm too lazy to check the threads everyday 😉 Hope you understand!! Loved your OS 😳

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

OMG it was one of the best updates. Aaliya and Suraiya bonding, wow zain must have some guts... aww poor Aaliya got burnt... u r just superb ideas like these... 👏