The 'How To' Series. A Series of Zain-Aliyah OS' [OS#3 - Pg 6]

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LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Totally love it! Thanks for the pm. Please do continue soon 👏

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Emaani.95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

#firstOS

Love it? You ask!

L.O.V.E.D I.T! I answer.

Honestly! It was just awesome!

I wish, someday, the same happens in the show too.

After reading it, I really wan't Zain to know about how his mother is trying to put Aaliya down. I wan't him to protect her from his mother's every evil plan.

"She was so nice. She was so annoying. He loved doing kit-kit with her."

I felt like pulling his cheeks when I read this part 😃

He is so adorable, I tell you!

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Emaani.95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

#2ndOS

This was yet another wonderful piece of work! 👍🏼

Sincerely telling, I am loving your work ❤️

Again you ask 'Hate it?'

My question 'How can I hate such an impressive work?'

Really! You are so good at your work 👏

"Oh Bhabhi," He put on, what he called, his adorable smile. "You know... Just like that."

Awww .. Nautanki Sala 😉

"He had also explained everything to Chand Jaan and sent her to his mother to add fuel to the fire."

So clever! But this thing back-fired as now Surraiya thinks Aaliya sent Chand Bibi to her 😡
I hope this misunderstanding soon solves.

I am amazed at how easily Zain got successful in making his sister-in-laws say what he wanted them to. He knows them very well, I must say!

Continue soon and do PM :)

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Jyo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Oh this series is freaking amazing!! Love the fact that Zain is up to fixing up the chudails 😆 Do PM me when you update? :)

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Shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Lovely OS

Thanks for the pm

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saritha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

awesome
and yeah somewhere i also feel bad for nafisa

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aashiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

yay..its worth a read...lovng d shrewd zain...i hope he is sensible n d show too...

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -Yuks-

Agree with you. You really can't help but feel bad for Nafisa.
I'm sure that at one time she was a wonderful and loving person. But now she is extremely insecure of every relationship around her. I blame Fahaad and that he let himself get into a situation where he got so easily trapped by Shazia.

I really dont get the whole shazia fiasco..

Shazia said she trapped Fahad... she was his secretary...

but dint Usman once tell Suraiiya.. that seond marriage for male heir was bad idea😕

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Yuks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

I really dont get the whole shazia fiasco..

Shazia said she trapped Fahad... she was his secretary...

but dint Usman once tell Suraiiya.. that seond marriage for male heir was bad idea😕

Maybe Shazia announced that she was pregnant? Or maybe she made it seem like Fahaad had taken advantage of her?
Sort of like how she tried to get Gauhar to trap Zain after Holi.
So that way Fahaad was compelled into marrying her.

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Hermain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

I love the 'khichri' which is being cooked in Zain's mind! He is a wonder, I must say! What an amazing plan but that devil isn't ready to accept anything 😡 Well, I must say a very well written and solid ending! The whole OS was outstanding 👏 Keep writing and thanks for informing me through PM otherwise I wouldn't have read it only 'cause I'm quite busy in my exam preparations 😭 PM me everytime 😉 Sorry, I am too lazyyy 😛

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