Raesha story : Second Chance ! part 8 24/12

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ishita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

this was utterly cute...
these small moments..n small things r d ines making u happy always...
hmm..ymthey r becoming buddies..
good 4 us...
aisha's reveire very cutely written

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

"sometimes you need long time to trust someone..sometimes it clicks in a single meet..sometimes even after knowing someone for a long time you cant easily trust the person wholeheartedly..and when a person like her who had been betrayed in the past and very sensitive from the nature cant easily trust anyone...even after knowing these many things..she has trusted him.."

i loved this part the most...yes its so true and so strange that trust takes so much time to make and a moment of stance to break...👏

it was a beautiful update...though short but it did convey a lot of things about aisha...her childhood...but y is she missing them??where are they??😕😕

would loved to read a bit more on that..

would like to know about sameer too...his thoughts specially about aisha..😳

her past..would look upto it..😳

make it a ss anant...i think you would do justice to it...😳

keep writing...you are getting just better...thanks for the pm😊

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

read both parts in one go...
they are awesome...they convey a lot of reality...alot a unsaid words
want to know more about ayesha's past
waitng for next part
contd. soon
and plz pm me next time

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Anny90

@Anny90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Part 3

Sameer opened the door of his apartment..this is his 'home' here..

he has been living his life like this from past many years..'living alone'..even though tight schedule leaves no time for himself..he misses his family in the times when he sees people enjoying with their families..like last night when he was watching the kids and people enjoying there.. he missed his parents and his family..but after he met aisha in delhi..he has find a friend in her..a person with whom he can share something..

the friendship between them had just started and then on one day he had to go for an undercover mission..case was solved in 4 months ..but after that when he went to report his senior he got the transfer letter..and from last 3 month he has been living in mumbai..

sometimes in your life you meet the people..you spend time with them for a period and then part away..it does not mean you dont like the person..but it just happens and happens with everyone..but very few comes to know about it in their fast life..and few of them feel its difficult to live without them..it is not necessary every time you find your love from those people..but you find some very nice people to stay with them or great friends or simply great companies in this fast pacing and short yet long life..because this life is too long to live and too short to waste it..

his thoughts comes to an abrupt stop due to the vibration of his phone...it is 'good night ' message from aisha..his friend is surprised to see sameer smiling..

Sameer is living with Arjun in this home..He is his friend and collegue here..arjun is thinking what has happened to his friend that he is standing in the middle of the room with mobile in his hand and smiling and that too late in night...

sensing some one, sameer looks in the direction of arjun..and put his phone back into the pocket..but his eyes have not missed the naughty glint in arjun's eyes..

"khana khaya?"

"haan ..mein bahar khake aaya..tune khaya?"

"hmm.."

"thik hai to fir mein sone jaa raha hoon."

"ruko sam"

"kya hua?"

"muje bhi to joke kaho jo tum padh rahe the ..ek kaam karo tumhara phone hi de do mein padh lunga"

"nahiii...koi joke nahi hai..wo to...wo to bas aise hi.."

"achha !! to fir aise hi muskura kyun rahe the?"

"mein muskura raha tha? arjun tumhe nind aa rahi hai..mein to jaa raha hun sone..tum bhi so jao..pata nahi kya kya bolte rahete ho.."

arjun thinks beta iss bar to tu hath mein nahi aaya..par mein pata lagakar hi rahunga ki mamla kya hai..kuchh na kuchh to hua hai warna tu aise adhi rat ko kya kar raha tha..

agar kabhi bhi aap apne frinds se kuchh hide karne ka try karoge to tum kitne hi achhi acting kyun na lar lo..agar wo insaan tumhe achhe se janta hai to aaj nahi to kal use to maloom ho hi jayega...or fir friend to jab kuchh pata na laga le tab tak thodi na shanti se baithte hai..

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Where words are restrained,the eyes often talk a great deal - Samuel

Edited by anant90 - 11 years ago