IDENTITY - LosT or May Be ReGaiNeD(cont. mrg)*pg(23)*{5/5}PART3(B)

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sirivalli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

nice promo...

waiting for d update...

thanks for d pm...

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Neha

@..Neha.

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Hey guys, here's the next part of ILOR.

"Banner is made by my sweet Ruchi di"

Thanx a lot guys for liking and commenting. It surely encourages the writer.

PART 2(A)-> IMMENSE PAIN

Arnav heard shower turned off. He thought "Now she'll come out. Let me go to poolside till she goes out of the room. So, I didn't have to see her face." Not knowing he'll be craving to get a glimpse of her in future. So he moved to poolside.

Khushi came out. She dried her hair and moved to dressing table. She startd putting her bangles. Arnav came inside that time. For a moment he stood there oogling at her. Oblivious to his stare, Khushi started moving her hand in front of mirror. The sound of bangles brought him back to his senses. He got angry at himself. He fisted his palms. He was about to move away from there when he saw Khushi lifting up the sindoor dibbi and looking at her tearfully. He understood that as she wanted to have the sindoor put in by shyam, she is crying. He started walking towards her, with long strides and snatched the sindoor dibbi from her.
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Khushi put on the bangles and then she took the sindoor dibbi. She rememberd how he filled her maang forcefully. Then she remembers: A girl of about 6 yrs was crying her eyes out in the room alone. Then a boy of about 11 comes and starts banging the door, 'open the door this instant or I'm breaking it.' The girl shouted from inside, 'i don't care' but her sobs only grew louder. The boy not able to bear it, started punching the door. The girl quickly hurried to the door and opened it as she can't see him geeting hurt. No sooner did she opened the door, the boy held her shoulder ever so gently and then wiped her tears with other hand. The girl instantly hugged him tight. The boy asked her the reason of her tears. Girl told him that she didn't want to marry. Boy got startled and asked her who ask you to marry? The girl innocently replied, "I heard mom saying she is going to get me married to some person who is; who is... the boy nodded his head as if urging her to continue. The girl sniffled the cry ever so innocently and told him I didn't heard ahead. Again she started crying and breaking away from his embrace, she turned her face the other side. She started saying in between her sobs, 'you...(sobs)...you are not bothered...(sobs)...by me leaving...(sobs)...i...i want a grand wedding...(sobs)...to a boy I like...' She turns her head and sees her parents standing there along with him. He came forward and promised her a grand wedding. Her crying subsided immediately and she...". Thinking about all this when a lone tear dropped from her eyes she didn't know. Maybe because the pain of him when she'll not go to meet him is nothing in comprison to this. What if he also turns into a monster? She was jerked out of her thoughts when she felt her shoulders been held tightly and forced to turn around.
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Arnav reached to her and turned her around forcefully, he intoxicated with blind rage as he visualized shyam filling her maang and Khushi blushingly looked down. He took that sindoor more than required and filled her maang with extreme pressure. In process of turning her around forcefully, the nose ring which she was about to put on fell in sindoor, which he picked up unknowingly, and scratched her hard on forehead.

Khushi could feel the blood oozing out from her maang but she didn't feel the pain there. The pain which she was feeling thinking about his pain got intensified. She looked in his eyes, only way to know truth but she saw some sort of madness which scared her and she shivered.

Arnav could feel her shivering under his hold, "Remember you are my possession and don't you ever dare to forget it. I always knew that you are a classless and cheap golddigger but you cross new levels everyday." He said this looking straight in her eyes thinking about his imagination of shyam filling her maang. Then he pushed her away from her roughly and started walking towards washroom.
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Khushi stood there numb listening to his accusations, was it really her Arnav?? No, her Arnav ji can never utter those things. As this was not enough, he pushed her. She collided with the dressing table making everything fall, and her temple got swollen as it collided with wooden carved edge of mirror. She looked at it in the mirror.
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Arnav heard her crash and immediately turned around, concerned. Then he got more angry for not able to control his reflex actions towards her. Then he saw her looking at him through mirror. So he took out his mobile and speed dialled 2. When the other person received the call, "Aman, send a new dressing table and also all cosmetics along with it." Before he could reply, he cut the call, and said to her still not breaking the eye contact, "Hope this satisfies ur greed. So now don't cry, u'll get better than the previous one." Then his eyes fell on her forehead. His eyes reflected pain, immense pain by recalling shyam hugging Khushi and he suddenly turned away from her, grabbed his car keys and strode out as fast as he could giving immense pain to her.

Khushi was too much in pain. No. Not because of the wounds. But because of him. His behaviour became unbearable for her. She also moved away from the room taking something in her fist and moved away from backdoor.
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Arnav came to a deserted road driving at full speed. He applied brakes so suddenly that he hit his head on the stearing. He touched his forehead and looked at his finger which had blood. Strangely, he didn't feel any pain. Suddenly, he smiled a satisfactory smile; the face of hurt Khushi flashed in his mind. He remembered his mother telling him not to hurt the people we love. Wait. Did he openly accepted he loved her? No. I don't love her. I don't love her, Damnit. Due to this conflicting thoughts, his hhead started to ache, andhe opened his car door and got down with blood red eyes. He went towards the car-front while memories of him laughing with Khushi, the special moments of sangeet; special? Ya, at least for him they are. Then the day when he was about to go and propose her. Where he learnt the heart shattering truth. The tears which he was holding back poured out from his eyes. He slowly slumped down the suv.
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Khushi and sat near a log in front of a mansion. She recalled the days events. Her anger also started increasing feeling herself helpless. She closed her fists tightly and then, in order to control the pain, she banged it against the log. Her hand got swollen. She was hurt immensely by Arnav's words. If he thinks me to be a gold-digger, then why he married me? Her tears were continuously flowing. She let out a heart-breaking scream, "Why did this happen with me?"
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Arnav was unable to bear the pain anymore. He screamed 'aaahhh...hhh...' as loudly as he could. Then he banged his fist on the ground. His hand started bleeding. But he didn't care. He says to himself, "I love Khushi. I love the girl who is characterless. I love the girl who cheated me. Who played with my feelings. I love the girl who is breaking my di's mrg. No. I can't let this happen. (He shouts) I won't let her affect me anymore." Saying this, he gets up and starts walking towards his suv.
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Khushi went straight to front door from parking, completely forgetting from where she gone out of house and in which state she is. Her maang is filled with dried blood. Her temple swollen. Her hand also swollen. Anjali and Shyam weresitting in the living room, anjali leaning onto his shoulder while Shyam was reading the newspaper. On seeing Khushi in such state, Anjali let out a scream, "Khushi ji..."Immediately, Shyam looked up. Anjali started her questionarie, "Khushiji, how do you got hurt? Aur chote? Chote kaha hai?"
Shyam replied in angry and impatient voice, "Rani sahiba, lagta hai iss waqt Khushiji ko dawai ki zyada zarurat hai. Aap first aid lekar aiye hum inhe laga denge." Khushi, who was till now wondering Arnav still not returned, at once got startled by Shyam's proposal. She was about to say when a loud, angry voice was heard from behind, "Hp, get the first aid kit and I'll tend the wounds of my WIFE."
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Arnav came from his drive and saw Khushi's hand swollen to a great extent. But she had got hurt on her forehead only, he wondered. His trance broke on hearing panic-filled voice of his Di enquiring about injury and her chhote. He was about to turn and take the stairs to avoid his di's tension. No sooner he took a step frwrd, he heard that bas***d's suggestion. He wanted to send his Di to take the medicines even in this condition. Then he looked at Khushi. She didn't speak a word!! But y am I expecting her to reject him, he thought. She loves him. Then Khushi looks up towards Shyam. Here, Arnav lost his cool and to not let them in eyelock ,"Hp, bring the first aid kit and I'll tend the wounds of my WIFE."

" He watched as Shyam's face colour changed. Then he came to them and snaked his one arm under her knees and the other around her waist and lifted her up. Then he looked at shyam with a smirk and started walking towards the stairs. Anjali giggled at this and commented, "How romantic are they?" Hearing this, Shyam's head was about to burst and before he gave away something, he smiled sweetly and went away saying about meeting with some important client. Anjali went and called the doctor.

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Guys, this is quite long. Part 2(B) will be continuation of IMMENSE PAIN. Please guys comment or at least drop a like, so that I can know how many are reading the story.

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@pancakes

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

nice part

arnav is an idiot and will always remain one

like botton showing error

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

karr le arnav jo karna hai karr le
baad mein toh tujhe hi pachtana hai
just like rk
and well that will be fun for sure
poor them
not really
they asked for it
he who the hell is this he
could it be rk
but how do they know one another
guess we will find out
seems they both have turned into right monsters
they shall regret it
and then by then too late
hope madhu and khush make them pay
and a love
hmmm arnav what do i do with you
didnt even ask her side of story
and just assumed thing
pathetic that is
and that creep man feel like killing him

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maha211

@maha211

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

beautiful update dear..
Khushi is thinking about her childhood memories na.. she is the one who rk is thinking too.. well great..

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

nice update please don't discontinue this

the like button isn't working right now

update soon I love ArShi's and RishBala's story

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Sanju...

@Sanju...

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

arrogant ASR's self thoughts.. anyway its intrestg 2 know hw he will hav 2 repent 4 it in future!!😊

continue soon..

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

@Sindhuramakrish

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

interesting. waiting to read what will happen in future.

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tparvaiz

@tparvaiz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Awesomeness dear,

Please continue

Looking forward for next update.

Arnav is really hurt khushi.

Poor khushi was remember her past. And her eyes if fill up with water. 😭

Arnav thought because she want shyam not me.

And in 😡 he fill her maang n hurt her.

😲😲 Arnav thought./think,... khushi want her dressing by shyam.

😡😡 Arnav...

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Amazing Story.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.

I hate Arnav for how much he hurt Khushi.😡😡😡

I hope he dearly pays for it.

I can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😃

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