Arshi O.S- You all are very bad....!!! thank you note pg-13

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So this o.s is written while i was making dhokla,dont know how idea strucked..


but this o.s is dedicated to my little friend TISYA,who is celebrating her birthday today...

Happy birthday baby..

and PRISHA you too who had her birthday last month...


and this beta jab bade ho jao ,tab padhna till then your mummi and maasi will read it...
correct tanu di...😉
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You all are very bad...!!!



'You all are very bad ,you don't love me.you only love her',4 year old arnav whined looking down at little khuhi in his lap.

All 4 member present in room was shocked to hear this.

Garima started to say something but Krishna raizada stopped her by shake of head telling her she will handle this.

'No beta we love you too ,why are you saying like this?'

'You ...you all pinch her cheeks first, not mine...'he pouted..but still keeping his arms around khushi tightly.

All burst out laughing making arnav sulk more...

Krsihna said smiling,' oho so this is the matter,aww my baby, ok from now on we will pinch your cheeks first then hers. happy ?'

'Yes...now happy..'

'And garima aunty when are you going to buy her a stroller ,I want to take her to the park.'

'Soon beta. i have decided to buy pink one which we saw that day in toy shop.'

'Nooo...'

Not pink, every girl has pink ;my khushi is different she will have yellow one .see khushi also want yellow one..

"khushi you want yellow stroller na"

Khushi bobbed her head in affirmative while squeaking loudly...

'See see aunty she is also saying yes...now aunty, you will buy yellow one na.'

'Sure beta.'

All this while krishna's eyes didn't miss how protectively holding khushi in his lap despite being angry...

Arnav was son of Krishna and amar raizada, while khushi s parent s were garima and shashi. arnav was 1 year old when shashi and garima came to live as an paying guest.

Now 3 years later arnav was 4 and khushi 1 ,both family lives together just like they are one family. krishna took care of khushi as her own daughter as she always wanted a daughter but due to some complications she couldn't conceive for second time..she was happy with her arnav but after meeting khushi she became ecstatic. She helped garima in taking care of her as she was working women.

FEW YEARS LATER-



"You all are very bad ,you don't love me.you only love her.."

'What happened now beta..'

'I came first in quiz competition, and she in dance but then also you all are praising her more..you know quiz competition was so hard.'

'Yes arnav is saying right ,quiz is harder than dance'...shashi supported arnav.

'Sorry shashi but I think dance is more difficult, all arnav has to do is just sit and answer but khushi look at her face she is so tired..and she danced just like a princess, right Krishna..'

'Yes amar.'

'Huh '...arnav marched towards his room but not before sternly telling khushi. ,you will dance on my favorite song also naa...

Khushi nodded a yes..

Again this time Krishna didn't miss arnav holding khushi s trophy in his hand while his own trophy was lying carelessly on the table..


FEW YEAR LATER -


"You all are very bad ,you don't love me.you only love her..."

Both gupta's and raizada' were now accustomed with arnav's this line..but still asked..

'What happened now beta..?'

'Maa I got 100 out 100 in maths that is such hard subject and she got only 95 that too in hindi ,then also you prepared rasmalai which is her favorite ??'

'Uho ho beta what so big deal in that, you know it very difficult to get good marks in language subject. your maths just have formulas etc ..and moreover hindi was my favorite subject too during school time. And You are just jealous because you never get good marks in English and hindi because of your duck's legs like handwriting ..'

'Mom'...

'Its true beta...'.krishna started laughing ..

I'ts okay beta', garima entered in the room holding a large bowl..

See I made moong dal halwa your favorite..'

'Thank you aunty ,you are best...'

Arnav moved towards sink in kitchen to wash his hands, but before he whispered in khushi's ear..'from next time you will write all of my hindi essays...ok..'

'Ok arnav.'.

FEW YEAR LATER -

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'You all are very bad ,you don't love me. you only love her...''

'Offo arnav what happened now..'

'Really mom what happened you are keeping a puja just because khushi got selected in entrance exam of C.S..i got selected in damned IIT-MUMbai. What did you do then??'

'J'ust smiled little bas...'

'Oh yes because my khushi got selected in her exam yet she will live with us only, not like you who left us for that freaking IIT.'

'But maa...'

'No arnav move and let me do my work...'

Krishna left kitchen but stopped at entrance shifting behind the wall peeked inside the kitchen to see what her son demand this time..

'You khushi gupta ..'

'What arnav what did I do?'

'Never mind as always you have too pay.'

'Whaah'...khushi was taken aback as he pulled her by her waist and planted a kiss on her cheek, her kissed cheek colored violently ..

'From now on this is your punishment every time maa or papa favor you over me'...armav smirked planted a kiss again on another cheek and left.''

Outside the door Krishna raizada also grinned...:jo socha tha wahi ho rha h,thankyou bhagwan..!!



FEW YEAR LATER -

''

You all are very bad ,you don't love me. you only love her...''

'Not today arnav, its your wedding day...you just got married ..'

'I know mom its my wedding day, but I guess you forgot it because along with your bahu I also performed all the rituals so technically I am also hungry but you are only feeding her..'

Arnav singh raizada was whining in his own reception party as no was taking care of his hunger pangs.

'Shutup arnav go eat yourself you are not a baby..'

'Technically your bahu too , then why are you feeding her'

'Go...!!!!'

'maaa'

' shooo shooo away...'

Arnav turned to go but remembered something and moved towards khushi ,who instantly colored thinking what he was going to make her do this time, while Krishna also strained her ears little to hear their conversation..

He leaned down and said" you khushi singh raizada ,just wait and watch for tonight ..ultimate revenge ..."!! he watched khushi' s horror struck face , kissed on her neck and went away laughing ...


FEW YEAR LATER -

''You all are very bad ,you don't love me. you only love her...''

'ARNAVVV...'

'All shouted together, what the hell arnav jealous with your own baby??'

'Yes I Am what to do maa ,earlier it was only khushi but now she also, do you guys remember you have a son too? and khushi you too!! you forgot your own husband ..?'

'Arnav but she just small baby she needs little bit of more attention than her father , don't you think so...'

'Huh you all will never change...'

He hmmhed pfffed out of the room, khushi rushed towards her husband to pacify him...

Arnav...what is it this time?what do you want..

'Oh so you guessed it !!biwi kiski ho... you will not dress her up in any PINK DRESS; mind you NO PINK for next 2 weeks...'

'What ..but she looks like a princess in pink...'

'Nooo...she looks like an angel in YELLOW..'

'Arnav'

'Khushi.'

'Okay you won...stubborn man..'

'Only yours baby..'

Baby leapt out khushi's arms towards arnav hearing her name...

''Yes little baby yours too...''arnav said while carrying his angel.

Edited by shruti46 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww so so damn cute...Arnav n Khushi childhood sweethearts!!❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mind blowing, such an adorable cute OS !!! loved it.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aaah, it was a pleasure to read. Super cute one shot 😊
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Its adorable. Uber cute. Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a cute OS ..Absolute stress buster after a hectic day 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey shruti... :) :)
sabse pehle... thank u frm tisya n prisha both :) ..
this is sthg i hd not expected... n the best part was... tht usually i hv seen tht most ppl wud remember abt tisya, while very obviously miss out on prisha...
u didnt miss out on realizing the importance of both in my life, neither did u miss out on mentioning both.. :) i m touched beyond wht i can ever express in words ..

loved the story... u knw i love ur work...
u also knw tht 'childhood enemies' was my favourite frm u... bt this one is better than tht 😉
loved the kiddish arnav, all thru his life.. :)
more than tht... i love tht even here he doesnt lose his business sense... he gets all his wishes fulfilled frm khushi, in the name of punishment fr being favoured..
n she had clearly understood his designs :) ..

he had clearly turned his loss, ie his parents favouring khushi, into his gain... by seeking punishments frm her..
n i m sure she enjoyed letting him hv those wishes fulfilled, coz she herself seems to willingly ask 'wht to do this time' :) :)
she is equally adorable.. indulging him everytime fr whtever he sought :) :)

krishna is very observant... n knws her son too well :) :) .. i think he gets his naughtiness frm his mom... i mean sneaking to figure out the next punishment fr khushi 😆

though i must say... he was rt at a few places to feel neglected... especially at his wedding .. obviously he too was hungry 😆

absolutely adorable OS... n the best gift the kids ever received :) :)

thank u soo soo much... in tisya's words... monkey n tweety smilie wali didi :) :)

ok.. this one frm her dad:: i md him read this too.. n he loved the way each section starts with the same line .. the most.. :)
n found it adorable n cute :)
Edited by tanu3579 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Adorable os!! Loved Arshi in it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ha ha! I love it when you start stories with their childhood... Cute and its subtle romance is soo adorable!

And happy birthday Tisya!

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