Zinda Reti Hain... Fan - Fic ( Part 2 )

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Posted: 18 years ago
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In this Fan - Fiction is kinda different from the show mean to say that it's more focusing on Prachi after her dad's death. I hope you all will love this fan - fiction I know I'm not great as other writers but this one came into my head after today's episode. If I make any mistake please inform me so I can correct my mistake and learn from them. Also freely to give your guys idea about Neev, Prachi, Ayesha, and Milind just (pm) me.


Zinda Rehti Hain Unki Mohabbatein !
Part - One ( Prachi's first day of work )

Two months have passed after Papa's death, everyones life is going fine but Mama's life stopped when she found out about Papa's illegitimate relationship. Aur Dadi blames herself for keeping this raaz about Papa's affair. Mine and Neev's relationship is still the same but somethings changed Neev started going office. Me and Ayesha were good friends bit after finding out that we are step-sisters everything changed between us. I still don't know how to react about Papa's other relationship because Papa was mine strength and mine protector, but know nothing is same and today is my first day of work to keep myself busy.

S.K.A COOPERATION
Oh god !
I don't know what is going to happen today and who am I suppose to work with.
....Ms. did you say something?
Prachi- No
Prachi walks into Aryan Sir's cabin with a nervous facial expression. Before Prachi could ask about "who she is going to work with?" Her boss welcomed the man but Prachi only saw his back.
....Ring...Ring...
Aryan- Ms. Prachi, pick up your phone?
Prachi looked at the ( caller Id ) but it said unknown. Prachi picked up the phone.
...Hello
Hi
...Who is this?
I am your lover!
...My lover is only N-E-E-V !
And if my Neev finds out some idiot is calling himself my lover than he will kill you
Hey...Jaanu !
... Ek aur baar mujhe Jaanu...
Neev !
Prachi runs out of her boss's cabin, out the building into Neev's arm. Both of them hugging each other while Ayesha watched them with mixed emotions.
How will Prachi react to the news about mine and Ayesha's marriage in Bangalore?
...Neev, did you say something?
Neev- Nothing !
Prachi, I think that you forgot something?
Prachi- I'm late for work.
Bye Neev...
Bye Prachi...

BACK INTO ARYAN'S CABIN
...Sorry Sir about leaving like that when you were explaining about who I am working with.
Aryan- It's ok !
Make sure this doesn't happen next time.
...Yes Sir !
Aryan- Ms. Prachi, you are working with Mr. Milind.
Milind and Prachi are shock but more shocked when they learn that they have to go to Bangalore for six days for a project.
...Is it okay with both of you?
Milind- Yes Sir
Aryan- What about you Prachi?

I hoped you guys liked this part. I know I broke a-part Neev and Prachi but don't worry they will meet but later on.

Mikey
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Yuvraz-Krishna thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Have I done some kind of mistake? Please let me know so I can correct myself. 😛

Micky
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no its perfect
and plz continue
(i like the neev calling prachi joke part)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank - you so much cutie_supergirl for letting me know there is no mistake in it. Actually this show is kinda going to be based like KZK but in mine Prachi doesn't kill Neev like Prerna kills Anurag.

Once again Thank - you

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Zinda Rehti Hain Unki Mohabbatein !
Part - Two ( Neev can't see any tears in Prachi's eyes )

Prachi said yes to go but only concern about her family and Neev's family and if they find out that she has to work with Milind? Mostly bothers her that she has to stay six nights with him in Bangalore. Milind walk pass by Prachi and went outside for fresh-air. Only thing he doesn't understand a rich girl like Prachi is working in a different company when she herself is a owner of Shah Industry.

NEEV AND AYESHA AT HER HOUSE
Ayesha placed her hand on Neev's shoulder telling him to take his time in explain, Prachi that their marriage is only based on one year contract. And don't worry about me.
Neev- Thanks!
I'm not worried about telling Prachi the truth but scared of seeing tears in her eyes because after Inder Uncle's death Prachi only has me.
Ayesha- I was wrong in understanding you when you use to say that I don't know Prachi better than you, but I was wrong no one can understand Prachi the best like you Neev.
Neev- I know...
My Prachi will always remain mine forever.
Ayesha smiled at Neev than asked him "if he wanted some coffee?"
Neev- Yes, only one cup of cream and tiny scoop of sugar.
Ayesha- Fine

DINING-TABLE / PRACHI LOOKED CONFUSED
Usually everyone is chatting at dinner but today nobody feel like talking to each other. Prachi sat there looking at her food even Neev sat there looking at his food when it was his favorite dish.
Dadi- What's the matter you two?
Neev- Nothing Dadi, only tensed from work
Dadi- Prachi, why are you so quiet?
Prachi- Dadi actually tomorrow I have to go Bangalore with my co-worker.
Neev- What's the problem?
Prachi- The Problem is I have to go for six days even it might take ten days.
Neev- What?
Dadi- Neev in fact i'm happy that final Prachi is getting mixed with the outer world.
Neev- Girlfriend I was also going to say that
😆Dadi- Neev!
Prachi smiled at her family than went into her room and looked at her papa's picture. After she closed her eyes saying please forgive me Neev that I lied to you and the whole family. Papa where ever you are please don't misunderstand me about keeping it a secret about me working with Milind.

NEXT DAY

Milind woke up and asked his sister to make him his chai. Milind came out of the bathroom and got dress. Prachi also came out of her bathroom and found a card sitting on her dressing-table. Prachi opened the card and smiled at it. After went running down the stair and saw her Dadi at the puja house with her Mama.
...Madam your car has arrived.
Prachi- Please put this suitcase inside the car.
Prachi took blessing from her family than sat inside the car and drove off. Prachi asked the driver to stop at a mandir on their way.
...Madam i'm not your personal driver!

Micky

Edited by Yuvraz-Krishna - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ur fic is superbb!!!!!!!!really very interesting. 👏 .
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yeah Mickey your fan - fic is pretty good and I love how you are kinda making it like Kasauti.

PLease continue

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