mujhe haq hai -OS(updated part-2 on page no 3)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello friends this my first OS.pardon if there's any mistake.please tell me how's it, if you like then i will contineue

she was looking like an angel, so beautiful so pure in the white chiffon sari and he forget to breathe by looking at her when he saw her there .
singh sir and mam were asking rudra about paro ,he knew she won't come down the hall because he had talked to her so badly 2 hours back when paro was asking about the ball, she was really nervous .but now how will he explain to singh sir and mam that why she is not coming to the party?he was upset how he will handle the situation now what will he told ,is she not feeling well or he will simply say that she is not interested.or he should tell everything to them?but there she is in that beautiful white sari.it was a new experience for her, she was not familiar with all this, but she should be there right next to her husband, to support him and she came only for him for his love.
rudra held her hand and walked to Singh sir and mam, he introduced her to the hosts of the evening, mam praises the couple, she really liked paro, both were looking too good with each other the perfect match.everyone was buisy now in the party.everyone was dancing on the music suddenly an officer came and asked paro for the dance, she looked at rudra but before he can react the officer held her hand and started dancing with paro, how dare he to touch paro, it was unbearable for rudra, but he can not spoil singh sir's party and his own reputation was also on stake.paro saw rudra's angry face and came towards him, but before she could reach beside him, he left the hall.paro follows him in the room where they were staying.
he was burning with anger, paro asked him now what had she done?why is he so angry?he tuned toward paro and held her sholders, how dare that officer touch her and even she didn't said no to him for the dance.but why should I say no?"apko to koi farak nahi padta main jeeon maroon kuch bhi karoon, main apki lagti he kya hoon.apko kya haq hai."
(it doesn't make any difference to you whether I live or die, you didn't bother about me , you have no rights on me).
he was shocked by paro's asnwer."kya kaha tumne , haq..., haq hai mujhe tum par , patni ho tum meri, tum sirf meri ho, tumhe dekhne ka, tumhe choone ka haq sirf mujhe hai, sirf mujhe.
(what did you said, i have every right on you afterall you are my wife, you are only mine, only i have the right to see you,to touh you, only i can).
paro was speechless, tears rolled down her eyes, and before they fall rudra held them with his lips.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SherryGS

Good concept! 😊


thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nicellyyy done dear...I hope they show something like this in the show...it wud be a treat to watch a POSSESSIVE Rudra...😉..jataofying his HAQ on HIS Paro...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice dear pls add some English translation forties Hindi lines dono Hindi so Oly dear pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Absoluv

Nicellyyy done dear...I hope they show something like this in the show...it wud be a treat to watch a POSSESSIVE Rudra...😉..jataofying his HAQ on HIS Paro...😉


thanks dear.me too. somethin like this should heppen in the show
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: prabha.abha

Nice dear pls add some English translation forties Hindi lines dono Hindi so Oly dear pls


thanks dear, surly i will try
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice. Rudr will never be able to hold himself aloof when it comes to his possessiveness about Paro.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: custodian75

Nice. Rudr will never be able to hold himself aloof when it comes to his possessiveness about Paro.


yes, he can not control himself
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanx for the english translation dear,

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