JaGan FF- Heavenly Soulmates (Updt-part 22 -pg 48) - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_

Arul thanks for the lovely comment, I think you are the only reader left. 😆

Will update for you.. now 😊

Thank you dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was a nice update👍🏼👏, again waiting for the next part, sorry for the disturbance dear😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sidra08

I am a tough competition to you in laziness so color change honay mein time lage ga😆

Username changed too Chalo acha hai we all always called you Sush 😛

tough competition ki baat sahi hai😆
haan thought of chaninging it long back..
everyone who reads it for first time.. reads it like suhasini or something else..😆
bahut hi short hogayi hai na😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: santhiyaa_J

Sush u changed ur username 😲 will comment about ur FF later😳

yes santhi i changed.. waiting for your comment
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arul97

This was a nice update👍🏼👏, again waiting for the next part, sorry for the disturbance dear😭

disturbance never say that..
for some one lazy like me.. one has to ask.. then atleast i will work..😳
or else jaise ka kaam waisa.. In my tortoise speed it will take ages to complete this FF😆
will defiently update it soon dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 20:

This might be a short one.. promise next one will be a long part..
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Ganga entered the house. It was a very small house. The old lady was taking rest. She was in a deep sleep. Ganga decided not to disturb her. She fed Mannu the biscuits she brought for him. Ganga was taunting herself, "Why can't you just stop thinking about Dr.saab..", she sighed, "Respect.., yes but I felt something more than respect for him when I was talking about the help Dr.saab did to me. Why did I feel bad when Sanchiji tried to get talk to him? Was I feeling bad or it is jealous? Why do I trust him so much? Am I in Love..?" she thought to herself.

"Thats impossible, I can't love Dr.saab. He is a gem and he deserves a gem not a woman like me." she wiped the lone tear which rolled down her cheek. "This love is just baseless.

It happened by accident and I will never confess it. Dr.saab is just helping me.. to make my life better and to redeem himself . I am a fool to fall in love."

Ganga was totally confused with the realisation. She never believed men until she met him but loving the person who is helping her was something hard to digest for her. Many questions and thoughts spinning in her mind, her mind and heart were battling, mind says that she is taking advantage of his soft nature and misunderstands sympathy as love but heart just says its nothing but love which she has for him.

The streams of thoughts were disturbed when she heard the lady asking, "Who are you?"
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Jagya was totally surprised definitely not shocked but he was completely taken aback by the statement passed by his best friend few minutes ago.

He reached his house in few minutes. Jagya who always greeted everyone.. din't even pay attention who were in the house too. He just quickly ran upstairs and none tried to stop him. The whole family is missing Ganga and Mannu' s presence.

Jagya locked up the room, splashed water on his face." Lal singh ko kya hogaya? What happened to him?", he was angry. His heart was racing faster when he tried to recall Lal's words.

"Love and me it is impossible. No way, I don't have any right to love her. What am I doing? Why dint I just answer Lal the minute he told me that I don't love her?" he leaned to the wall.

He had decided to call Lal. Surprisingly he dint use his mobile since morning. He searched for it in the whole room. He remembers that he left the mobile last night in Ganga's room as Mannu was playing with it. He was really sad that overnight his everyday routine was thrashed down like some garbage. If it would have been a normal day he would have been playing Mannu and Ganga smiling at them. He always glanced at that smile which worth millions to him. When Ganga and Mannu were around he felt complete. His wounded heart was soothed by their presence but now everything around him looked cold and bitter. His own room looked gloomy.

He was dying inside whenever he thinks that they left him. He tried to keep himself strong since morning. He was not angry that they left him, he was disappointed that they left him, a questioned bothered him that"Am I not worth them?".

When he realised his bad behaviour towards Anandi, the way he insulted and blamed her when he lost his child due to Gauri's recklessness and blinded by Gauri's love he also insulted his family for which he felt he deserved every punishment but not losing Ganga and Mannu.

He was scared when his mind alarmed him about Ratan Singh and the trouble he can cause to both, "what if he tries to harm them?" he thought. He can't lose them forever.. He prayed sincerely to god. He closed his eyes and an image of Ganga and Mannu came in his mind.

He heard Mannu's voice. He turned around to check, "yes it's him" he let a sigh of relief and Ganga walked into the room with him. His eyes welled up with tears. Never had he felt this complete.

"Dr.saab you spoiled him he is uncontrollable" she pouted. Looking at her he realised how important they are to him. He unknowingly walked towards them. He was looking at her while she is busy taunting him, he was still crying, he dint make an attempt of wiping them out he felt relieved. At that moment, he realised that he was in love with Ganga.

He always loved Mannu and had great respect for Ganga. But somewhere deep down his heart he did love her. He can't say when it happened but he is in love. All that moments he spends with her flashed in his mind. He went near them he stretched his arm to hug them both but it was his imagination that they were in front of him.

He broke down and felt shattered when he faced reality but his inner voice said him to get up and bring them back. He decided to bring them back no matter what. Before this he must inform Lal singh to take care of the hospital and thank him for what he has done for him.

He went to Ganga's room and searched for his mobile.He found it and talked to Lal that he will be busy for a couple of days. "But Jagya come here and attend your patient and go, he needs some change in medicines which you prescribed."said lal. "Ok"Jagya replied and rushed downstairs.

"I am going to search for Ganga and Mannu.."he said. Everyone was happy, bhairon and Basant told that they will lodge a missing complaint and return back. All left the place. Jagya reached hospital and checked up the patient. He had to copy few files which he had to check while in journey hence he tried to copy them but his mobile showed him Memory Full' he was totally surprised. He never uses his mobile much except to listen to music. He checked all the folders and found a long video which Mannu accidentally recorded. It was of last night's record. He smiled when he looked at Ganga but also observed she was sweating badly as if she completely scared of something. He was about to delete it but he stopped when he heard her saying Ratan Singh'

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So howz it? waiting for the comments

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sush, its simply superb👏🤗. Thanks for the pm😊. The moment when i checked the pm for heavenly soulmates, i was jumping like anything, i'm so happy😛. Thanks for the update dear. Actually, i thought of reminding you about this FF, but without reminding, you even updated, thanks a lot. The first part is so emotional😭 and the second part is sooo nice👏🤗. Waiting eagerly for the next part dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sush ... awesome update yaar Loved JaGan's realization love for each other the way you portrayed in the chapter .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sush.. Loved this part..I am sure I didnot read some on the middle..but had no disconnect..I will read it sometime today..awesome keep writing..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update sush...Reading it after long time...Loved the way they admitted they are in love...

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