OS: Love never happens at first sight ! - Page 2

Originally posted by: amus5

res 😃

i started reading the first two lines and am interested in it , Will read the rest and comment on it.

Thanx Mini (Arshix144) 😳

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well i'm not going to unres as yet.The reason being that this is an OS that needs deeper contemplation and cannot be just commented upon in one read.Mini you have rightly said this is food for thought. This is an abstract piece of writing in which I should indulge more before I comment.

But I definitely would like to say that this is a well written OS.The flow is smooth and bewitching.

First of all, thank you so much for reading.

As I said, when I was writing this, I didn't even have a story or scene in mind. Though after writing the first piece (excerpt from Khushi's diary), I knew how the end should be. Some may even find the whole story revolving around the same note in the beginning. Positivity flickers there, it kind of shows that she may give life a second chance. But then again, the reality is something unexpected, right? I'd just like you to ponder upon the things she said to Arnav and then to the note of her diary. When the connection will finally be clear to you- you will yourself understand that the determination of Arnav may not just be able to change the rigid Khushi.

Arnav is an arrogant ass, one who wants to possess the things he love, but he doesn't understand the entire situation. Khushi had a person who loved her selflessly, while Arnav pushes her to move on without trying to comprehend the emotional trauma she's going through. Maybe Khushi needs more time to recover. And Arnav needs a transition. But as they showed in IPK, transitions are not really fast. So, again I say, this time, ASR's strong character may not even be able to acquire what he wants.

Somewhere, we don't see anything beyond 'moving on' from a trauma. I know how impracticable it may sound to some of us, but I agree with Khushi. The Khushi's of my OS's are pieces of me and my thinking and the lost trait of character in the show. Yes, most won't understand Khushi and say that she should move on. For knowing Khushi, you need to meditate and think instead of judging her.

But after all, everyone deserves a chance and a second chance after that. Well, despite my inner will, I may wish for Arnav and Khushi to be together. The last note which the Arnav wrote depicts the fact that he will not give up on her. Maybe in the process, he'll change himself or change her. But some things are not meant to be. Don't I sound too much biased towards Arnav here? But I guess the conversation between Arnav and Khushi is enough for understanding both Khushi and Arnav.

*smiles sheepishly* in fact the line 'My life is a paradox' explains it all. My sadistic pleasure is in writing something that gives me an insight to new interpretation every time I read so I can't give this one shot a proper ending, though I made my wicked intentions clear. *winks*

Thank you again for reading it. I am grateful.

Cheers !

Originally posted by: AlwyzT.

First of all, thank you so much for reading.

As I said, when I was writing this, I didn't even have a story or scene in mind. Though after writing the first piece (excerpt from Khushi's diary), I knew how the end should be. Some may even find the whole story revolving around the same note in the beginning. Positivity flickers there, it kind of shows that she may give life a second chance. But then again, the reality is something unexpected, right? I'd just like you to ponder upon the things she said to Arnav and then to the note of her diary. When the connection will finally be clear to you- you will yourself understand that the determination of Arnav may not just be able to change the rigid Khushi.

Arnav is an arrogant ass, one who wants to possess the things he love, but he doesn't understand the entire situation. Khushi had a person who loved her selflessly, while Arnav pushes her to move on without trying to comprehend the emotional trauma she's going through. Maybe Khushi needs more time to recover. And Arnav needs a transition. But as they showed in IPK, transitions are not really fast. So, again I say, this time, ASR's strong character may not even be able to acquire what he wants.

Somewhere, we don't see anything beyond 'moving on' from a trauma. I know how impracticable it may sound to some of us, but I agree with Khushi. The Khushi's of my OS's are pieces of me and my thinking and the lost trait of character in the show. Yes, most won't understand Khushi and say that she should move on. For knowing Khushi, you need to meditate and think instead of judging her.

But after all, everyone deserves a chance and a second chance after that. Well, despite my inner will, I may wish for Arnav and Khushi to be together. The last note which the Arnav wrote depicts the fact that he will not give up on her. Maybe in the process, he'll change himself or change her. But some things are not meant to be. Don't I sound too much biased towards Arnav here? But I guess the conversation between Arnav and Khushi is enough for understanding both Khushi and Arnav.

*smiles sheepishly* in fact the line 'My life is a paradox' explains it all. My sadistic pleasure is in writing something that gives me an insight to new interpretation every time I read so I can't give this one shot a proper ending, though I made my wicked intentions clear. *winks*

Thank you again for reading it. I am grateful.

Cheers !

Originally posted by: amus5

when i read once again the excerpts of khushi's diary it was a lesson of life which is drawn from nature which tells us to stand firm against all odds.This flicker of positivity can mean anything.Not necessarily the way want to interpret it.It could also mean living her day to day life without breaking down

Arnav is a determined fellow but doesnot mean that he may gain his ends but he may act as a trigger which may help khushi to pick up the broken strands and fight back the darkness of her life.

If arshi are not considered as soulmates then what defines moving on for khushi need not be same for arnav - there comes conflict of thoughts.

If you consider arnav and khushi as soulmates then the only reference that i can relate to are the waves of the ocean if khushi wishes to reach the shorelin she hits them only to return back to the ocean

So in this case it all matters to whether arshi are soulmates or just co-passenger travelling along to reach their respective destination

these are my thoughts on how to interpret this passage. In fact I felt I can even put in incidences which can move in either ways as the entire OS being abstract gives space for doing so...

Soul mates and all !!! Though I have Arnav and Khushi madly in love in some of my OS, though they understand each other well in my OS's..though they might love unconditionally..I don't believe in 'soul mates' thing ! Here, they are just one of those strangers who meet and just become a bit more than 'strangers'. 😊

About the first para, yes, there maybe more than one or two interpretation. I find a new one every time I read it. But what can I say- the one which I wanted at least someone to find out is not being triggered in anyone's mind. Maybe as I wrote, I only know it because it's not obvious at all. LOL ! 😆

The few lines of the first para clearly provokes the sense that she's thinking to fly beyond the horizon. The latter part shows that a realization has squashed her former intentions. I guess I'm being paranoid ! 😃 But ask Mini...ask her the subject of my previous OS. And that's the answer. Read that para again. Though it's strange, I find a connection there and that was the only thing I had in my mind while writing it. If you find nothing similar- believe that I'm a gone case ! :D

Originally posted by: Arshix144

S what a pleasant surprise, I am so overwhelmed and honoured at the moment!🤗 You have totally made my day with this dedication and for what a piece of pure genius too! I am at a loss for words. You are incredibly talented and believe me when I say this, we don't get to read pieces like this one everyday!

Firstly you had the immaculately written diary entry which was simply poetic. Then you had Arnav analyzing this entry, your writing is so beautiful and vivid that I ended up imagining and feeling everything that transpired in this piece. The conversation between Arnav and Khushi took me back to your earlier piece where you explored how one feels about the loss of a loved one, and in this piece I felt the angst the engulfed Khushi, the helplessness that surrounded Arnav at not being able to convince Khushi to let go and move on. While I was contemplating on how I feel about this interaction I reached the last portion and it is there that you simply left me in Awe of your writing. Your description of your characters and how Arnav was trying to develop his own characters by practically living them as well was extra ordinary.

You missy are a genius bas! And I don't think any amount of praise will be adequate to justify just how incredible this piece is! I consider myself one of the fortunate few who have discovered your writing sweetheart, so congratulations on delivering yet another brilliant piece of writing! Just Keep writing, that's all I can say to you!

PS. ILY too!❤️

You...You...You!!! I love you, Okay? Every time I write something and post, I impatiently wait for your comment! Because you perfectly analyze the situation and the story. I say, your comments are a treasure which inspires to write better and better. Thank you so much for being the constant inspiration to write. Though you may be unaware, I owe you a lot.

Your compliments- my God, makes me feel joyous, humbled as well as embarrassed at the same time. I don't deserve so much praises!!!! And it makes me scared at the same time. I fear if I may not be able to live up to the expectations next time. But nonetheless, as I said before, your responses push me to writing because I don't feel like writing most of the times.

A genuine 'thank you' for understanding me and my thoughts, for being a friend when I needed and for the reassurances you provided me when I was in a dejected and helpless mode. Thank you so much for being here. I love you too ! <3

p.s: Is your name Mini? Wonder why I never asked! Can I call you by that name?

p.p.s : About this OS, you read the comment I wrote for amus5. Nothing I can say more than that. Me thinks I myself don't understand it much!

Hugs !

Be back soon T. A little caught up this week but wouldn't want to miss this piece so bookmarking :)

This is powerfull stuff. So deep, philosophical and poetic. You are a very sensitive and mysterious person and you always amaze me with your writings. But I would love khushi to fall for arnav... Every time and every way.