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Posted: 11 years ago
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~Unres~
*Scraps asking when is her EKP going to update*
*EKP replies "done"*
*yayyy!!!!*
Afterall my EKP utilized her energy doing something productive.🤣
*Res the first comment*
*feels proud on an achievement*
*starts reading*

The Title.

"Unconditional Affection"--A Randhir OS
Eh? Randhir OS?
When you scrapped me about it I was juggling between cafe and scrapbook. I didn't understand what you meant.
Even while reading I was like why did she call it as "Randhir OS"?
*thinking*
*guessing*
*Maybe its about Randhir's realization*
*stops guessing...reads further*

The Red A/N.

Omg!!! You dedicated it to me??
Awww...My EKP. <3 *hugs*
*Reads my "Tareef"*
Ahem Ahem!! Are you feeling feverish??🤣

Again thanks for so much "Tareef"

1st para.
Didn't mention any name! Ha! So EKP style!
*feels smart enough to guess*
Of course "he" refers to Randhir & "she" refers to his "Sanyukta".

The way you described their relation was really emotive. Describing these emotional thingy is your forte. Isn't it?
*thinking*
Seems like Randhir & Sanyu are already in love in EKP's OS.
*stops thinking...reads further*

"But her sudden disappearance had left him in gloominess and despair."
Oh god I told her...it shouldn't be a Rona Dhona!!
*again thinking*
She must have done a happy ending.
*reads further*

2nd para
Omg!! She was in so much love with him?
Again a beautifully described para about the strength of their Relation.
EKP is such an amazing writer!!

*Goes in SanDhir land*
* utopia broken...reads further*

3rd para
First of all a hug.*hugs*
Ask why?
Arey you included Sahil in your OS and not that Fevicol. Vaise bhi I was tired of seeing him onscreen.🤣
*OS getting mysterious*
It was 6th day. He waited for her. Cashew. Eh?
EKP has done some locha.
*reads further*

Last para!!
O M G
W-H-A-T?
*rubs eyes*
*reads again*
SHE-DOG???????????
Eh???
*READS THE WHOLE OS ONCE AGAIN*
*ends up ROBL*
🤣

EKP has done a BIG pachka of her Aira this time.
I feel like an April Fool in the last week of April. 🤣 🤣
Haye!! Bhagwanji!!!
KUDOS to kiki for such an abstract idea.
Accolades to you for the way of your writing. I ,not for once, came to know that the lines were equivocal. I respect you even more for such a different style of writing.
That's why I call you an unique piece of this earth. 🤣 🤣
Now got the point,Why was it a Randhir OS".
Mera Romantic OS padhne wale mood ka toh you did kachra 🤣 but I loved this one too.🤣
I'm still giggling🤣
Chalo I'll be waiting for another OS. *winks*
Loads of Love
Your Aira. <3
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Grenade thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You know what touched me the most? It is the very thought of crediting the Writer who inspired you for the story. It speaks volumes, Iptu. I really am so proud of your honesty and sincerity. *hugs *
Now coming to the update. Need I say how fan-freaking-tastic this was? From the idea to the execution everything was flawless.
When I first read it I was just as shocked as all the readers. Gosh, only you can pull off a mindboggling idea like this! But then what can you NOT pull off? From heartbreaking to surprising, you rock every genre! What's next? Horror? 😃
Anyway, so I read it a second time, already aware of the bomb at the end, and I realized how perfectly it fit! That's what I meant about the story being flawless. I wish I could write half as brilliantly as you do. In all these years of reading fictions I have never cone across a writer that is so versatile. I mean it.
Edited by Grenade - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What he was missing his Dog?
Nice one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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will unres when u unres on all of mine
*evil smile*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg dog 😲
really🤣
btw luv ur writings😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsme yar... amazing the feeling u wrote is mindblowing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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short but soo beautifully written!!!!
you made me live his pain!
amazingg!!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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okay at first i thinking that it was about him missing sanyu ...
BUT then it turned out to be a dog ...
interesting twist that you made at the end
emotional piece
beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This seems to be more realistic than he crying for S like this 😃 The flow was mind-blowing and I all this while I kept on thinking wowww...
Btw, i have faced a similar situation on campus. During undergrad, a she-dog used to stay at our hostel entrance. We used to feed her play with her and sometimes early in the morning when i used to go and pick my boring economic times, I used to read all boring editorials to her sipping my tea and she drinking the milk/bread that messwala bhaiya used to prepare for her :P. She was the most patient listener I have ever met.

And one day she met with an accident and got brutally injured. I am lacking the prowess to explain how much I missed her as if I have lost a part of me. Editorials were never the same again and will never be. It is a void that still aches.
Edited by varshamitra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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As I was reading this OS, I was like my sadism is rubbing off on her!!!😎
The way you portrayed those emotions! I was like damn, this chick is tooo goood!!👍🏼

And then it was a dog... I was like typical baba🤣!!!

Though I loved it tooo bits!!! Definitely a change from every story here!

Amazingly emotive at start, and then Baaam! The punch was just fabulous!

Short comment ke li sorry (not sorry😆).. I am in a rush

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