MriAra FF||Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi||IMP note pg. 60 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf


Thank you! Glad you liked it!

I live in Canada so my time zone is kinda different and plus the school year is nearing it's end and I have a lot of work that needs to get done so the gap between my updates may be big. But I will update for sure!

ok understand busy with study and life! ! When get time update please!!!! Your storyline is very captivating and it's difficult to wait! !!!! So happy done with that life long ago!!!!! Best wishes for studys!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

ok understand busy with study and life! ! When get time update please!!!! Your storyline is very captivating and it's difficult to wait! !!!! So happy done with that life long ago!!!!! Best wishes for studys!!


Thanks :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
As usual a beautiful update, I love the way you have captured their emotions.

Thanks for the pm, can't wait to read on :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

sorry for late replying...

superb write up... you have beautifully written the emotional turmoil tara going thru...

eagerly waiting for the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Humera-

As usual a beautiful update, I love the way you have captured their emotions.

Thanks for the pm, can't wait to read on :)


Thank you!

Glad you liked it!

No problem and will update asap! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Teena_


sorry for late replying...

superb write up... you have beautifully written the emotional turmoil tara going thru...

eagerly waiting for the update...


It's okay! :)

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Will update asap! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update

i am loving there mixed feelings

taea's confusion about her future life and mj's confusion whether Tara will ever love him as he love her

loved balcony scene

Loved tara's thought after mj's name us written beautifully in mehnadi...

loving it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

Lovely update

i am loving there mixed feelings

taea's confusion about her future life and mj's confusion whether Tara will ever love him as he love her

loved balcony scene

Loved tara's thought after mj's name us written beautifully in mehnadi...

loving it...
😃


Thanks! Glad you liked it! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
~ Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi ~


- Chapter 13 -



"Taara, chalo, baarat aa gayi," Meethi says. I put down the photo that I was holding and walk in to the main hall where Mrityunjay is waiting for me.


We were getting married in the kalyan mandapt, which was close to home. "Bhaisaab, Taara is here," Mom says and I look to see Taara coming with Meethi. I was taken aback by her beauty. She had made the most simplest red lengha look so elegant.


"She's looking beautiful, isn't she?" Aditya asks. "Yeah," I say, not taking my eyes off of her.


She comes at a stop in front of me and smiles. I smile back. We exchange garlands and continue through the rest of the rasams that the Pandit leads us through.



Mrityunjay and Taara stand up for the pheres. Meethi ties the end of Taara's dupatta with the end of Mrityunjay's. They make the seven vows around the holy fire, binding themselves in an eternal relationship.



At last, Mrityunjay clasps the manglsutra around Taara's neck. It hangs there, symbolizing the new relationship that had just formed. Mrityunjay then takes a pinch of sindoor and fills her empty maang with the red colour, marking her as his.



Soon it is time for my bidaai. Tears roll down my cheeks as I bid my father good bye and leave my house to go to Mrityunjay's. Even though we were neighbours, it was still different. I wasn't living at my house anymore.



I am welcomed into the Shekawat house with open arms. Aunty, sorry, Mom, completes the rasams and welcomes me into the house.



"Wait Taara beta. We have a small tradition in our house," she says. "What tradition?" I ask. "The one where Mrityunjay has to carry you into the house," uncle says. "Dad, it's okay," Mrityunjay says. "No Mrityunjay. It's the tradition of this house. You have to carry Taara bhabhi in," Aditya says from behind me.



Mrityunjay looks at me as if asking for my permission. I smile. Taara, you're the daughter in law of this house, you have to follow the traditions.




I pick her up, her arms around my shoulders. "Can she come in now?" I ask. "What a perfect couple," mom says and I walk in with Taara. I put her down once we reach the sitting area. She moves away from me but a corner of her dupatta gets stuck in my watch. We both look towards the watch and I move my hand up to take her dupatta out.



"Taara, Mrityunjay. Come here," mom calls us. I gesture to Taara and she follows me. "Yes Mom," I ask, Taara standing beside me. "Beta, we have to complete some other rasams as well. Taara, you sit here and Mrityunjay, sit beside her," mom says.



We sit down and Mom brings out a bowl, filled with milk. "Aunty, can I tell them what to do?" Meethi asks. "Sure beta," she says.



"Okay so welcome our newly married couple. The two of you have to play a little game," she says. "I'm going to drop this ring on their and whoever is the first one to find it, wins. Also, that one person will have the upper hand in this marriage."



"Meethi, is this really necessary?" I ask. I look at Mrityunjay, waiting to see his reaction towards this. "I think it's a good idea," he says. "But Mrityunjay," I protest. "Taara, come on. It's just a little game," he replies. "Okay," I agree. If Mrityunjay said that it was fine, then it was fine.



"Okay, so here goes the ring," she says and drops the ring into the bowl. She mixes it and says, "Go ahead."



Mrityunjay puts his hand in the bowl and I follow. I look everywhere but at Mrityunjay or the bowl. It's that moment when our hands touch that I finally move my eyes to meet his.




I was already looking at her when our hands touched. She met my eyes and then slowly looked away, moving her hand away as well.



"Come on Taara, you have to find the ring," Meethi says, encouraging her. I feel the smooth metal in my hand and guess that it must be the ring. I move my hand towards Taara's and carefully slip the ring into her hand before anyone can notice. She looks at me shocked but then slowly takes her hand out, revealing the ring.



"Mrityunjay now you have to listen to my adorable Taara," Aditya says, sitting next to her. She gives him a slight smile and looks at me.



"Mrityunjay, I saw that. You gave her the ring on purpose. That wasn't fair. You won!" Meethi says, sitting down next to me.



And so the banter continued for a while until Mom came to stop us. It was decided that Taara had won because the ring had cone out of the bowl in her hands.




"Taara, come upstairs," mom tells me. She takes me up to Mrityunjay's room. It was decorated completely different from before. No more posters of girls on the walls or anything like that. It looked, well, mature.



Mom makes me sit on the bed and tells me to wait for Mrityunjay, as he would be coming soon.




"Stop!" Meethi tells me as I reach my door. "What happened?" I ask. "Mujhe mera nek chaiye," she says, extending her hand forward. "I thought you were on Taara's side," I reply. "I'm playing a double role. Now hurry up Mrityunjay," she says impatiently.



I sigh and take some money out of my wallet and hand it to her. "Happy?" I ask. "You seem like you're in a hurry," she says. "Here you go," I say, handing her some more. "Okay, you can go now," she says and moves away.



I enter the room and find Taara sitting on the bed. "Finally, you're here. What took you so long?" she asks, getting off of the bed. "Meethi was asking for her nek and you know how hard it is to convince her," I reply. "Yeah I know. Can I go change? I really can't wear this heavy lengha for too much more longer," she says. "Yeah, go ahead," I say and move out of her way.




I come out of the bathroom to find Mrityunjay waiting for me. "Why do you girls take so long?" he asks. "Get used to it now," I say. "Whatever. I emptied half of the cupboard so you can move your stuff there if you want," he says. "Thanks," I reply.



I pick up my bag and start moving stuff as he changes. By the time he comes out, his entire cupboard had been rearranged. "I kind of had to move stuff around," I tell him. "It's okay. You can sleep on the bed," he says. "Where are you going to sleep?" I ask.



"On the couch, I guess," he replies. "But why? I mean we're still friends aren't we?" I ask. "Yeah we are," he says. "Then why the hesitation? Now come and sleep," I say, sitting on the left side of the bed.



"Taara, that's my side," I tell her. "So? I want to sleep on this side. I can't sleep on the other side," she replies. "Come on Taara, you have to try new things. Now go sleep there," I repeat. "If you're so adamant on trying new things, why don't you go sleep there yourself," she says and lies down.



Sighing, I walk over i to the other side and lie down. What had I gotten myself into?



***



A hand hits my face for the third time that night and I sit up. I look to the side and see Taara sprawled out on the bed. I'm on the very end, on the verge of falling off any second.



I gently roll her over and lie down to sleep when this time she kicks me. "Taara," I say, annoyed. She doesn't wake up.



I poke her but she still won't wake up. Giving up, I lie down and face the other way, closing my eyes, attempting to sleep.



A/N: I know I updated after a long time but I was really busy! So how was that? Good? Bad? Leave your likes and comments :)


Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally they are married...
Loved the update, waiting to see how they are going to start their new life...

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