Taarey SS Love Never Ends 8/9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey trians.i decided to write a new ss of course on taarey.hope u all like it.

this ss starts when gang's rude behaviour towards taani.

TaaReY SS Love Never Ends


Concept

taani sitting in empty classroomcrying like hell
taani:kyu krishnaji.ye sab mera saath hi kyu ho raha hai.sab mera against kyu ho raha hai students,friends even bhai and rey.kya mein itna bura hoon aur nahi seh sakta mein.i want someone to be with me.i miss you ishu.kash tum yaha hoti.

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a girl is shouting at a boy

girl:ek kaam thik se kar nahi sakta tum.pata nahi bhagwan tumhe kyu banaya.useless
boy:aisa mat kaho
girl:ab mujhe aur gussa mat karo.jao yahase

boy goes from there

girl:ye ladka bina uff..(sighs)i need break from here

takes her mobile and calls someone

girl:hello
caller:hello
girl:mujhe mumbai jaane keliye ticket chahiye
caller:achank mumbai
girl:soch raha hoon ki mein mumbai jaake usse milo.
caller:okay kabka ticket chahiye
girl:tomorrow evening ka flight hai
caller:haan hai
girl:book the ticket for evening flight
caller:okay done
(cuts the call)

girl:mumbai i'm coming.taani ab hum saathme padega.tumhare ishu aarahi hai.



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Index

concept:above
chapter 1:page 2
chapter 2:page 4
chapter 3:page 8
chapter 4:page 11
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dasv thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start
waiting for continuation
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept and contiune soon yr
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awsm start
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intriguing start!
Love it!
Pm me pls..
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely concept..
its rightfully said for here that a friend in need is a friend in deed.. !!
continue soon ..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc concept...
poor taani...she is alone...
ab ishu ake sabke dimag thikane lagayegi...
plzzz jaldi updt karo...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing do continue
N PM me
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CHAPTER-1

Taani is walking on the corridor.when she meet rey.he came forward and said:
i want to say something
taani:kya
rey:taani(takes a deep breath)i am breaking up with you
taani:par kyu rey
rey:jo ladki meri passion aur friends ko samjh nahi payega.vo mujhe kaise samjhega
taani:tho aap kahrahahai ki mein passion ko nahi samjh payegi
rey:haan

tears were flowing from taani's eyes.she never in her dreams thought that rey will break up with her.if rey will be happy with break up then she have no problem

taani:theek hai.ab aap ko taujise apki identity chupane ki koyi zarurat nahi
saying this she walks away

REY'S POV

i know mein tumhe bohat hurt kiya.mein tumse bohat pyaar karta hoon.but dance mera passion hai.vo mein tumhare vajahse khona nahi chahta.i will miss you.aaj,kal aur hamesha mein tumse hi pyaar karuga.dance bhi mera first love hai taani.hope tum samjhega

POV ENDS

taani runs towards vp sir cabin
taani:may i come in sir?
vp:yes you may
she gets in
taani:sir mujhe aaj leave chahiye
vp:is everything alright
taani:yes sir.kuch personal reason
vp:okay then you can take leave today
taani:thank you sir
she goes out


after some time
taayam's house

taani in her room crying like hell.everytime her and rey's break up came infront of her eyes.she gets frustrated and throws the vase which was near her table.
taani:kyu rey kyu.aap aisa kyu kiya
started crying
suddenly her phone rings.she wipes her tears and looks at the callers name.a small smile appear on taani's face
she felt happy after so many days

taani:hello ishu
ishu:hey tanz.how are you dear
taani:fine aur tum
ishu:mein theek hun.par tum theek ho mujhe nahi laktha
taani:aisa kuch nahi hai ishu
ishu:koyi tho baath hai batavo mujhe aur vo bhi sach
taani started crying
ishu:hey taani.tum ro kyu rahi ho.iska matlab kuch bada huva hai .batavo mujhe kya huva

taani narrates rude behaviour of the gang to break up
ishu:itna sab kuch hogaya aur tum (sighs)taani listen to me meri baath suno.
taani:hmmm
ishu:tum uska chinta kyu kar rahi ho.jo tumhare kadar bhi nahi karta.now tum doosaro ke baareme sochna baad karo aur apni baareme socho.prove them who you are and wait a min did they call you a non-dancer
taani:vooo mmm haaan
ishu:wow.they don't know ki tum ek amazing super dancerhai.tum ye baath chupaya kyu.okay i know the reason .taani abse tum dance karogi
taani:nahi ishu mein nahi
ishu:mujhe kuch nahi suna.ek aur baath i want my old taani back.jo mujhse haar baath pe ladthe hai.bohat acha dance karti haan.tum dance karogi okay.
taani : okay done.bye
ishu:bye
(cuts the call)

ishu:ab tum koyi hurt nahi kar sakta.kyunki vaha taanisha shekhawet tumhare twin sister tumhare saath hai. jo koyi bhi nahi jante.even swayam bhi.ab ayega maza

she steps on the plane
settled down on her seat
taanisha:ab ek nayi shuruvat apni tanz ki saath



kaise laga?ishu twin sister nikla na?ab aage dekho ki kya hota hai. bohat saara secert hai ye twin sisters ki beech.sorry agar tum logo ka expectation ko bada nahi paye.

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