what do you have to say about this comment viji .. ;-) :-DOriginally posted by: AALUSLOLWA
My official unreserved comment is this one ...
Those below are nothing but offscreen / sbs ones 😆
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#009900">if i would not have known you , or VS would not have suggested me this story , my comment would have been the same .
what attracts the reader to read a story first ? tittle of the story , right ? .. ''HIS FIRST LOVE'' ..
</font></font><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#009900"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#009900">As soon as i saw the tittle , </font></font>it hooked me to read further . Who would not want to continue reading it by the way ? HIS .. HIS .. yu mean HIS first love !right !! ( the first thought that comes to mind reading this is .. WISH IT WERE ME ) 😳..but that is impossible . 😆... so then I wanted to sacrifice my place for khushi . I mean I wanted khushi to be his first & last love !!
then prologue ! viji those two three lines were enough to keep us reading the story ! 👍🏼 isn't it something everyone who watched IPK would have wished for ? 😊
banner i have already told you that how much i liked him riding a bike ❤️ .. by the way that collage - of -picture- styled -banner i saw first time 😉 and liked as well ! i can see scenes of the story in it . He sitting with khushi on bed both look sad yet are together 😊 the pictures surrounding the middle one are all from past . they are grey .. dark .. the one in present is colorful and looks alive !! ❤️it is apt for story , i read so far !and i guessed this from banner before reading the story 😊 i do this always .. i mean whenever i read a story , i try to assume what it holds for its readers & i guess it usually from the first banner ! by the way did i tell you i liked the neat banner ?
<font color="#000000"><font color="#009900">Now , about the story ⭐️ i was so enjoying while reading the part where you had told how khushi changed his life .How effortlessly she changed his colorless life with all the joy and flavors of spice and adventures😉 ( as you say it ) .It made me think they are perfect for each other .Of course they are ! they are ARSHI dammit .and how can i miss ! she proved arnav singh raizada wrong again .she proved him wrong everyday .<font color="#000033">arnav singh raizada " jo kabhi ghalat nahi hota" ,was proved wrong when he thought that his life can hold no more happiness.😃<font color="#009900">she made him exhilarated .⭐️ I liked the fact that ARNAV was so caring for her and for his to -be -born child❤️ . Why was khushi watching south indian movie😕 she was
supposed to be from LUCKNOW ! it was SANAYA from south india , if iam not wrong ? Indu ? i think its some of your IF friends ? is it ?😆 Whenever arnav admires khushi I love him❤️.How can he miss the TITALIYA in khushi. Arnav lifting khushi up in his arms ❤️ , shutting down the laptop screen and gesturing HP to bring food to room😉was indeed our IPK s arnav .⭐️
Arnav, getting angry at her question ,was reasonable 😊 It was something IPK s arnav would have done . He would have got annoyed , but would also have controlled at the same time .
Then the real thing . Oh man !! i never wanted anyone else to be his first love . It should be khushi only . Yes , i agree he had so many girls in life before lavanaya but it should be khushi -his first LOVE.
Sangeeta 😕 who was she ? did she cheat on him ? If i make a guess , then starting from the extreme right cornored picture at top , he is on bike start of his flashback journey ? then below it he looks lost in the girl s eyes means the second time he met her . Then the third picture of the flashback loop , it seems they are together . Is it ? Fourth picture , they got engaged ? did they ? In the fifth picture he looks surprised or shattered ? i can t exactly guess. in next picture i can t say if they are fighting or not . The other one shows him alone. Don't know , 😕 i may terribly wrong at all this , but i guess it indicates they got separated . Maybe or maybe not .
Why did he got so lost in that girl s eyes 😡?
Why did he helped her in finding the gift ?😡
Why was he being extra sweet with the girl 😡?
Why was he thinking of her at the first place 😡?
Was that a LOVE at first sight 😲😡?
viji .. why ji ??
Arnav singh raizada hai ya usky sur p chara 102 bukhaar 😆
( khushi ka dialogue hai ) 😆
update next . as soon as possible . I m waiting 😊.
P.S deepu .. ?? dj arshifan 😳😃
P.P.S .. zyada lamba kya tha ?? mera comment ya your update 😆
lol..sorry i guess now i have got the habit to give long comments 😆
credits to lazyleaves 😆
P.P.P.S VS 🤗
P.P.P.P.S ..keep writing and posting ...please
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