MG SS: COACH..! I LOVE YOU - PART 3 - UPDATED PG 12 - 25-APR-2014

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Sundari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

part 2 nice...
geet ko dekh k toh maan ki saari tiredness n neend udd gai..
n geet ws laughing on maan...not on maan actually bt on her silly thoughts bt it seemed like shes laughing on him..
bt our maan is too generous .as he didnt mind her laughing on him as long as she had beautiful smile on her face.
dhamaal first meeting..
maan puri raat so b nhi paaya ..
n geet b suba late aayi..means she ws also dreaming abt maan all night 😳
n the final blow...maans punishment..
n geets reaction...
lovellyyy 😊

Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago

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lovepoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

i liked
it is something different
looking forward

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RedLips

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

IMPORTANT NOTE

Hello All

Well I am changing this OS to SS as I am guessing It might take more than 6 parts to end the story. Hope you all still want to read my story. If you are liking what you are reading please press the like button and leave your long comments.

Cheers

😳ROSE😳

Edited by GurtiWonderland - 11 years ago

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

beautiful cocept and really can enjoy the punjab sherni ,. geet honda nice start update soon please

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

geet thought maan is some actor or something like that
hmmm she doesnt wanna talk about her parents
which makes sense
and maan thought that she isnt anything like what her state coach was saying
but he soon found out it is like that
awww he was so into her
he wants her to smile and not cry
bless wasnt that cute of him
abhi toh geet ka gussa nahin dekha
but then only maan can deal with her
he was waiting for her to turn up
and she did late too
which is why he made her do more warm up
so others wanna impress the coach
but not this one
but remember never to send her on field when she is mad
very dangerous that

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

nice update...
maan to pehli nazar me geet me kho gaya usski sari tiredness bhi chali gayi...

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gurti30

@gurti30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

lovely story dear and very different too
geet is punjabs sherni lets see for how long maan will be calm and what geet will do. it will be clash of the titans

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Loved da Update..Awesome
Awww Geet thot Maan s some hero 😆
Maan is totally fida on her😳 oye hoye Maan babu contole 😉
Get got late for practic on first day n maan punish her
waiting for Geet ka Badla for Mr.Hasmukh😆