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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Baz🤗

First of all I'm really Sorry for being late...So sorry😳.

And congratulation of becoming the first writer in this forum who launch a movie...👏🥳(as far as I know 😳)

You are brilliant writer without any doubt and I feel blessed that I got a chance to read your fantastic beautiful works.😃

And thanks a ton doing this for TanHa AT. Love you my friend🤗

Coming to movie I just loved every bit of this whole movie...exciting , thrilling story filled with suspense , mystery , action packed movie and have Romance too which never felt is forcefully it goes smooth with the story and all credit goes to your stupendous writing skills⭐️👏.

From the start of movie to the very end of it ...it was just an exciting roller-coaster ride which I enjoyed a lot.

I completely loved it .👍🏼

And the most beautiful point which added extra charm to the Story was the characters...Swayam, Sharon ,Kriya and Rey's character were similar to whom we know and can easily relate to...so for me it was easy to imagine..Visualize TanHa as SwaRon throughout the movie.

Loved the way movie starts filled with all suspense, mystery which increase the anticipation of readers to read more...loved these lines.

"She was pointing a gun at him! Some part of her told her to not do this, that there had to be some kind of mistake but the logical part took over"

It's definitely increase my eagerness to know what had happened that Sharon pointing gun on Swayam ...

What had kind of circumstances bring them to face in this situation... what's their fate

And then Swayam's POV

" He missed his gun in his hands right now but it wouldn't have been of any help either. He would never shoot her, ever. He needed to convince her so he said "Siren, plz trust."

Showed how much he is helpless in front of her ...in front of his own heart ...this actually clearly proves that he loves her..

And then these lines clearly show that both of them are hurt, and helpless...

"He was silently begging her through his eyes to believe him and she hated herself for reading his eyes like always"

Marvellous, beautiful writing to express their words and as reader i can feel that ...It was like it going live in front of my eyes and its all credit goes to you Baz..

When they were Five years old

SwaRon in childhood so cute...Loved their cute fight...Swayam know Sharon very well from the days of their childhood...He named her SIREN which irritate our cute little Sharon cho chweet...

Loved the childhood memories of SwaRon...Following lines were the centre of attraction

"she kicked him making him fall flat on his face. Now his eyes filled with tears and without wasting a second he smacked her with his tiny fist which made her cry out loud and so on"

When they were Twelve years old

Swayam loved to tease her...and Sharon irritates wen he call her SIREN

"She turned around glaring at him and yelled "YOU WOULD NEVER STOP DOING THAT AND DON'T CALL ME SIREN"

SwaRon in same school...Swayam is really a evil wen he stole Sharon's assignment...Poor Sharon.

But its so sweet of him to do her assignment that to three times aww Swayam do care for her

Loved this...

"She looked at it and grinned then said "you did it for me?" he nodded and she jumped on him pulling him in a hug. He smiled too and she kissed him on his cheek making him go red and stiff"

Aww my cute Swayam ...want to pull his cheeks..

When they were 20

Aww me loved this phase of SwaRon life...Love is blooming up...Loved their convo.

"she continued "but I will miss you" he pulled her in a hug and said "awww siren don't worry I will bug u all the time with calls, texts and emails plus dad will have loads of meeting here in this office I will tag along with him to hear you curse me" she smiled relaxing a bit in his arms"

Sharon saying that she will miss her and Swayam comforting her that He will not let her to stay in peace and will bug her in different ways...Aww how sweet ...Me loved this.

But we get a glimpse of naughty Swayam too...

"his hands which were resting on her back traveled down her waist line and he rested them on her hips while she pushed him back saying "gosh swayam I have no idea when u became such a pervert" he replied "would u believe me if I would say u turned me into one?"

Me believe Swayam... This is where i get a feeling that Swayam starts seeing her more than a friend..but now as a lover.

When they are 26

So SwaRon joined the same profession and both are best intelligence officers...Liked it.

Loved the SwaRon sms convo ...Both are excited to meet each other afte so long but again start fighting like a kid as tom n jerry..

But wen Swayam's Siren stopped replying thru sms ... he just called her aww...

You fantastically written their phone convo.. I loved it

Why are they so dense to accept their feeling... ughhh.

Its clear that SwaRon are in LOVE ..

Loved the KriSha strong bond of friendship..Kriya pulling Sharon's leg

And Sharon blushing because of Swayam but still too stubborn like a child to accept it

And then

"Sharon jumped on him as she had been doing since childhood... ... He held her small frame against him tightly as he hugged her saying "missed you siren" Sharon kissed him on his cheek saying "missed you too.sry about last night I didn't mean to hang up on you" he sighed in response and said "siren plz don't say sorry to me ever"

Sharon is definitely a complex character...Why can't she see that she is in love with Swayam but I think Swayam is now damn sure about his feeling that Sharon is more than a best friend...The way he keep resting his hand around her waist and then pull her more close tightening his hold around her waist when she tried to move away definitely give the clear sign of his changed emotion from friendship to love.

Swayam and Kriya become a good friend i their first meeting loved their convo and comfort as friend.

Loved the embarrassed Sharon wen Kriya was about to spill the beans.

And Loved the jealous Swayam wen he saw Rohan placing his hand on Sharon's shoulder...me always like possessive Swayam

So new character got introduced in the movie ...Ted Black.

Me loving SwaRon as intelligence officer cracking a tough case together as a team and Kriya helping them.

Smuggling, mafia gang all are exciting things giving new twists and turns to the story.

So SwaRon got agree that all mystery lead to only one person i.e Ted Black and Swayam is all set to meet him to unfold the mystery behind the smuggling case.

Wohaa all of sudden story took a new turn...Swayam framed in murder case of Ted and Mark west.

And Swayam come to Sharon's place as she is the only one in whole world to whom he can rely on and trust her completely. But Sharon in Siren's mode...And somewhere hurt and fighting with her own self to trust him...but there was video proving Swayam killing him. But i"m sure its a fake.. Okay back to movie..😛

Loved the ninja style of Sharon 😆 giving tough time to swayam

SwaRon handcuffed together and then your description of SwaRon's position with your outstanding writing made me blush, as I can easily visualize them in this position and all credit goes to your brilliant writing.

"Their hands which were handcuffed together were entwined together and he was using that hand to hold up his torso to prevent her from crushing underneath while her under hand was still held firmly by him behind her back and was now trapped under her. He had also straddled her legs eliminating their use and both of them caught their breath glaring at each other while their bodies touching in more than one dangerous place teased their senses. " Loved it.☺️

I knew it Swayam is innocent...So Mark west killed the Ted Black and someone killed mark west from the outside of the building using a sniper n all..hmmm Interesting

And Kriya informed Swayam to hide somewhere so nice of Kriya , she is truly a great friend.

And then finally Sharon get ready to help him as somewhere she also knew that hi is innocent as SwaRon know each other from childhood

"she bit her lower lip before saying "I don't know if I should believe u or not but if u r saying the truth then I want to help u find the real culprit .moreover." Her eyes filled up with moisture as she continued "I have known you all my life. I can't bring my heart to believe that you would kill someone for no reason .so if this blows up on my face later then I won't regret as I am willing to take the risk if it is worth saving ur life" swayam's heart beat increased upon hearing this and as she dug her face deep in his chest he felt the lost hope slowly returning back."

SwaRon KISS beautiful☺️...They can kiss in these circumstances especially wen police behind Swayam...as he is accused of killing and their future are on stake..😆...Baz you are the only one who can do this and u know it didn't looked forced but it was beautiful and went well with the story..

So SwaRon runaway with each other , handcuffed each other...Interesting.

Aww SwaRon walking handcuffed and Sharon asking swayam why he kissed her and wen he questioned her ...she cutely denied it. Sharon is really cute, complex, confuse and stubborn so much similar to the Sharon we know... The Sharon...Sneha Kapoor played brilliantly...

Sharon is really a siren...jungli billi😆

" He checked her from up and down which made her cross her hands upon her chest and in doing so swayam's hand tagged along with her hand and she realized it after a second when swayam tried to hide his smirk and she turned red before giving him a blue eye. He groaned in pain and yelled "seriously Sharon I didn't even do anything"

Sharon is stubborn but cute too. I loved this scene very much and you beautifully written everything describing every single thing of their action is incredible.

" He entwined their fingers once again as he matched her pace while she rested her head against his arm too short to reach his shoulder and they continued their silent walk."

Another beautifully written SwaRon scene. SwaRon in motel having one SMALL bed ...me liking😉.

"he tugged on his bounded hand which made her fall on him and he said while placing his free hand on her back "happy now sleep" Sharon replied raising her torso "I am not sleeping ON YOU."😳

Me liked Swayam's character very much he always know the trick that how to make Sharon quit.and convince her by hook or by crook 😛.

Officer Sharon is afraid of spiders😆...loved hoe she hide her face on his chest deep.

And then great dialogue of Swayam..

""yes, yes I am your knight in shining armour , "😉😆

In the morning Swayam was happy having Sharon so close to him...Me too happy😳.

Then SwaRon's magical eye lock but someone has to disturb them grrr 😡🤢

Ad then the bathroom scene where Sharon drenched in water completely but what i like the reaction of Swayam who looking down...The Respect that's what makes Swayam so special...His love is pure.

Loved the special appearance of Rey as helping and caring Friend..

Actually loved Kria and Rey's character as supportive and helping friend.

Loved the Convo of Swayam and Benji...Benji really suffered a lot...felt bad for him.

But the way Swayam feared losing his Siren and he would die if he lost his Siren proves how much Swayam loves Sharon...and this is the only reason Benji helped Swayam as he too felt Swayam's Pure love for Sharon..

Loved this portion very much

"swayam said "listen if u don't tell me then I might lose my siren just like you lost katty. do you really another person to lose their katty" Benji saw the same warmth and sadness in swayam's eyes which once he had for katty and now there was nothing but coldness in his eyes. He instantly missed that warm swayam said "listen if u don't tell me then I might lose my siren just like you lost katty.do you really another person to lose their katty" Benji saw the same warmth and sadness in swayam's eyes which once he had for katty and now there was nothing but coldness in his eyes. He instantly missed that warmth and looked away.."

So this is all done by Rohan the BEEP🤬.

Loved the end ❤️..How Swayam didn't allowed Sharon to say sorry and then their enchanting Kiss.

So all went good in the End...SwaRon got together and accepted their feeling and world is also saved😉😆.

All and all I just LOVED this movie...Hit hai Blockbuster movie 👍🏼